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Monster Hunter: The Frenzy: Komitsu By noisekeeper -- Report

A billowing gloom of pent up gas eructed itself out of the sleeping girl's small lips, as she mumbled to herself contentedly in her sleep.

Out here, laying on a patch of grass in the midday sun, outside of the territory of Elgado, Komitsu slumbered away, her eyes having grown heavy thanks to indulging herself in a tasty treat earlier. As she snored away, the only thing breaking the peacefulness of the setting, was the horrendous shrieking of two poor souls trapped within the young girl's packed middle. Hinoa and Minoto, two of Komitsu's dear friends, were currently fighting for their life.

The dire situation of the Wyverian twins wasn't like this a few hours ago. They had just arrived to the outpost of Elgado after a long trip. Komitsu had wanted to see her friend Chichae, and Hinoa had suggested she and her sister make the journey with her, to make sure she had stayed safe. Both of them were experienced hunters, and knew their way around, having gone to Elgado several times already. Thus the three of them had left Kamura village for the outpost a few days ago, with Yomogi giving a kiss on the cheek goodbye to Komitsu, making sure she had packed plenty of dango for the trip.

Said dango didn't last very long however. Though looking back on it, Minoto should have seen the warning signs even then. Hinoa herself was a pretty big dango fiend, and combined that with Yomitsu, whose nickname was Sweet-tooth, Minoto was sure the dango would only last halfway through their travel. But after the first night, she was surprised to see the entire stock of it Yomogi had made entirely gone, having been snacked away by the hungry little Komitsu, who had rubbed her small tummy and asked for more.

Perhaps the excitement of going to Elgado for the first time had spurned her appetite, and Minoto didn't think of it any further, though she had to listen to Hinoa's grumbling about how she didn't even get to taste a single dango. The rest of the trip was uneventful enough, except Komitsu would still tug and ask impatiently if there was still more to eat, the meals she was being given seemingly not enough to keep her full. By the time they had reached Elgado, the rations were nearly gone.

For a brief moment Komitsu had forgotten about her empty stomach, and had happily ran to meet her newest friend, practically jumping into the arms of Chichae and giving her a big embrace, rubbing her cheeks against the glasses wearing princess like a young puppy. As they got settled, the knight Fiorayne suggested they take Komitsu out around the fields surrounding Elgado as they prepared for the night's festivities to celebrate their arrival. Ever since the situation involving the parasitic Quiros had been dealt with, there hadn't been an outbreak of monster attacks in a while.

That was when Minoto started to feel unease, and now she had wished she had listened to that nagging voice in her head when, as she and her sister went out into the grassy fields with Komitsu, she noticed the young girl looking uncharacteristically distracted, her small hands clutching at her aching middle. But by the time they noticed that eerie aura, scarily reminiscent of the one that covered the monster known as Gore Magala, it was already too late.

“K-Komitsu?! C-Can you hear us?!” The desperate muffled voice Hinoa wailed from inside Komitsu's wobbling middle. The small girl's belly, once small with only the slightest bit of leftover baby fat, was now a towering pink sack, quivering wildly with the clear outlines of the two Wyverian women inside as they futilely tried to awake Komitsu from her post meal slumber. But for all their thumping and screeching, nothing could rouse the girl from her sleep, and thus the twins' fate was sealed.

“Please let us out?! Your stomach, i-it's starting to-”

Komitsu giggled in her sleep as she felt her grossly distended middle seize up, harshly contracting around its contents as a fierce roar erupted from her impatient stomach.

“H-Hinoa?! Oh no!” Minoto gasped, pain in her voice as she felt her twin sister be suddenly claimed by Komitsu's hungry belly, feeling Hinoa next to her slump over and begin to soften as the rising tide of acidic enzymes enveloped them both. “Please Komitsu! You're digesting us, you have to-”

Minoto's urgent pleas fell on deaf ears, as she too was overcome by the gorged tyke's tum in a matter of moments. The last duet of the Wyverian twins soon becoming a ghastly solo as Komitsu's stomach sung with gurgling groans as it rapidly began to work at breaking down the two curvy women into a nice nutritious meal for the smiling girl who had unknowingly feasted on her dearest friends, a goofy smile still plastered on her drool splattered lips as her burgeoning middle rocked back and forth, the contours of her gut smoothing away as her bowels sucked away the combined broth that was once Hinoa and Minoto, the lovely maidens of Kamura village reduced to little more than a caloric treat for little hungry Komitsu.

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“Uuuuh...Why's my tummy all round..?” Komitsu pouted.

It was several hours later when the young girl finally awoke, the Frenzy that had overtaken her finally subsiding, along with the majority of her stuffed belly. Standing unsteadily on her small feet, Komitsu frowned with confusion as she inspected the odd shape of her middle. It was like if someone had made her ate a pillow, the way her belly exploded from her tiny frame. She had no idea that Hinoa and Minoto had unceremoniously been converted into fat for this girl's body.

Komitsu's tiny hands poked and prodded at the doughy sides, bewildered that she had mysteriously gained a potbelly that nearly rivaled her own height. Indeed, the Wyverian twins had been such a grand meal, that they had gifted Komitsu with a blistering amount of pudge, the giant ball of fat hanging in front of her containing what was left of her two friends. So distracted by the monstrous sized potbelly she was having trouble hefting around, Komitsu failed to notice that she had gained considerable adipose elsewhere as well, her tush looking more like two giant bulbous wobbling balloons attached to her widened hips. Even her once small and youthful looking face looked more chubby in appearance, both women gifting Komitsu an obscene amount of fat she now had to carry.

“Where did Minoto and Hinoa go..?” Komitsu softly whined, lost as to why she had been left alone in such a bloated condition. Looking up, she spied the outpost of Elgado not too far off from where she was at. Perhaps they had decided to go back there and help with the feast's preparations without telling her?

Thinking about all the food that was possibly being cooked, Komitsu's rounded middle gave off a small grumble, chiding her that it was now presently empty, and waiting to be filled.

“I still feel sorta hungry...” Komitsu said to herself, idly rubbing the sides of her rumbling stomach. Grasping the fatty remains of Hinoa and Minoto in her small hands, she began the agonizing slow waddle back to Elgado, hoping that Chichae and the others hadn't started the feast without her...

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Part two of the Rise Frenzy saga, drawn by the talented  FoF !

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Flame14

Posted by Flame14 2 years ago Report

I’m greatly saddened to see us lose Minoto and Hinoa. Hopefully we will see our young predators feasting on enough people to make up for such a loss.

Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

As always, the stories you write to accompany FoF's art is simply fantastic. One of the best writers on this site, period ^_^

noisekeeper

Posted by noisekeeper 2 years ago Report

Thanks for the generous compliment Spider ^^ !

Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

Of course! You’re one of my inspirations ^_^