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Hannah bristled, a squeal-like sound emitting from the corner of her pursed lips. “What the hell makes you think you can just—just do things like that!? And during school hours and–”
“You’re the one who’s looking so deeply into it,” he pointed out, still the picture of calm.
“That’s—that’s….” She fumbled for an explanation, but found that she couldn’t deny it. Whether he had been deliberately doing it or not, it was her own mind that crossed those bridges and made the shortcuts into thinking about his lips and tongue and even the damn spaghetti in ways that were far from normal.
“Hannah, if you’re going to make it this enjoyable to tease you, that’s not exactly going to encourage me to stop.”
And so, Hannah and Kane really start to hit it off as friends! ...With perhaps a bit of a strange twist to it than 'normal' friendships. But they're adapting!
Thanks for the feedback on the first part and I hope you guys enjoy the budding friendship of these two! Vore tease is just... so good.
Any feedback welcome/appreciated~
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Posted by WindMaster1 2 years ago Report
Very fun read so far! I look forward to the next bit of it~
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad to hear it~
Posted by Randomdude5 2 years ago Report
I enjoy how this is building up. I like how she gets flustered, by what he does.
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thank you for the feedback~
Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report
The tension in this writing is just so delicious. I kinda want them to just be human the whole way and there not actually be any finale of actual vore. But then again I’m a romantic, so I could go either way.
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Belloc 2 years ago Report
Kane's teasing is next level, and I love this build up of their relationship! This is great stuff Chammy~
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thanks a lot, Bel! I do love building relationship/relationship tension in stories. Makes for some great emotional build-up and tension later on~
Posted by KinoTheCat 2 years ago Report
Ok just finished reading both parts and by golly this is fantastic so far. Its absolutely adorable and having it grounded in reality is giving things a real nice touch of character development and connection. I adore it, its very wonderfully done and I can't wait to see more if you're planning for it~
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thank you, Kino! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I hope to get inspired for it again. It was a really fun concept, even if it didn't involve straight-up vore for awhile.
Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
This is a great continuation, it feels like this is how things could play out in real life where the other part isn't offended but rather intrigued by your supposedly weird fetish^^
Hanna and Kane seems to have better potential as friends and perhaps couples than most other characters I have seen. Kane strike me as the honest, open-minded and curious with a slightly naughty palette. Hannah's reactions does also seem completely natural and as the skilled writer you are, you don't even fall into the trap of rushing things forwards.
I'm already looking forward to the next part of this : )
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying the build-up and their chemistry! I'd say you're pretty on the spot with Kane's personality. He may be quiet, but he's certainly a perceptive type.
Posted by SickoMode 2 years ago Report
My word! Did you end up writing this after the feedback from the last one? If so, I'm so very glad to have you back on that writing knack! You always write such great erotic tension!
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
No, no. Like I mentioned on the first part, these were previously posted elsewhere before. I just never brought them to Eka's, since they aren't technically vore (yet). But thank you!
Posted by Delphinus 2 years ago Report
The tension is just SOOO good, mmm. I know these are older but I really hope you consider coming back to them and continuing, I'd love to see where it goes!
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thank you very kindly for the feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying it~
Posted by totallyyum 2 years ago Report
i loveee this story so much, i’m just imagining actually swallowing someone and putting Hannah’s head against his stomach again while Hannah is either too scared or flustered to say anything. love love love your writing!
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Posted by AAAAA5 2 years ago Report
This story has been amazing so far! Looking forward to the next part.
Posted by Chameleonette 2 years ago Report
Thank you~
Posted by MagicOddEffect 1 year ago Report
Your writing is always so enjoyable and this is no exception. I'd love to see more of this series!
Posted by Chameleonette 1 year ago Report
Thank you and thanks for the vote of confidence~ I hope I'll feel inspired to come back to it one day.
Posted by TastesUndivided 1 year ago Report
Easily one of my favourite stories on the site.
It all fells so.. real!
I almost never ship straight couples, but damn do I want these two to end up together.
Posted by Chameleonette 1 year ago Report
I'm really happy you feel that way! Thank you for the feedback!