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I'm back! I have been procrastinating SO hard to write another story, but here it is!
I have a BUNCH of characters made that I'm excited to write about! Annalise is here as the debut of my series of side-stories, Those Who Indulge! Hopefully there'll be more like this on the way soon.
Stay tuned~
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Posted by tigercloud 2 years ago Report
Wow that Angel is pretty mean >w< But I really like it somehow~
This is a fun story, thank you for writing it <3
Posted by IceCreamBreak 2 years ago Report
Glad you like it Tiger, but remember that you can't be mean to food~!
Posted by tigercloud 2 years ago Report
Hehe x3 I handle my food nicely, what my tum does is something different~
Keep on writing these cool stories! <3
Posted by Seide 2 years ago Report
Really managed to bring out the delightful cruelty in Annalise, and sell the despair of Natasha here. Consider me waiting for more from ya ^^
Posted by Sehnsucht 2 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this piece. The action and interaction are very vivid and the description is fun to read. Annalise's cruelty jumps off the page and her poor prey... well, nevermind. But her despair is palpable.
I know you take writing seriously. I've got some more detailed comments on style. Would you like a PM with some notes?
Like Seide, consider me invested in reading more :)
Posted by IceCreamBreak 2 years ago Report
I’d love some comments Sehn! Shoot me a message here or on discord!
Posted by The Saint of Ravens 2 years ago Report
Eeeeevil brat~