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Healer's humiliation By ryanshowseason3 -- Report

Brent thinks his girlfriend couldn't possibly beat his burly barbarian with her cute little sexy female cleric.

A high stakes duel is held to decide who will be utterly humiliated and practically enslaved by the winner.

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FaceInCrowd42

Posted by FaceInCrowd42 2 years ago Report

The concept in the first quarter of this story got my attention like few writings on this site have in entirety. I don't suppose a worldbuilding post about whatever game (or possibly fictional game genre?) this is could be forthcoming? Though the actual mechanics seem more tabletop, which is ALSO interesting as I don't think I've seen that in existing MMOs to the point of "Armor Class" being a thing...

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report

It is very different! I almost envision it as a full dive tactics MMO, a XCOM or Gears tactics style gameplay but full dive and only in control of a single character. The mechanics of said tactics being heavily influenced by pathfinder 1.0

But you're right there's really nothing like that out there tbh. If there were enough people that want that sort of thing I could write it but I've never dipped into pure world building, I tend to prefer to show and not tell. Though I admit there were expository sections here for laziness. Usually I would show these concepts like in game tombstones and let characters reflect on them over just telling the reader they exist.

Nikkidafox

Posted by Nikkidafox 2 years ago Report

I was originally expecting this to be just WoW, but it basically turned into DnD/pathfinder. Which I really wish there was an accurate video game version of. But yeah this is just the girl flexing her knowledge. Clerics are not to be fucked with.

doomed

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

at this point i think male gamers are just dumb lmao
every male gamer in your stories dies due to under estimating and ego lol

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report

Femdom and girl power fetish. Though yes it's a recurring theme that I could stand to mix up a bit.

HungryAL

Posted by HungryAL 2 years ago Report

Female ego being her comeuppance would be a nice change of pace and have her swinging between his legs afterwards.

Her going on and on about her magic and her options then big dumb Barb with a huge axe just goes

"Haha, Axe go burrr"

Mental torture spell, but his intelligence is too low it has no effect or something lmao.

But yeah, I love your DnD esque stories and will read anything you put out in those sorts of settings. They're just so much fun!

teamfortress32

Posted by teamfortress32 2 years ago Report

I like that, with the whole intelligent prey having their intelligence wasted as some idiot is able to completely dominate them aspect

panzerkampfvorgen

Posted by panzerkampfvorgen 2 years ago Report

Very nice. Also, a nice little Golden Shower before making him into her snack? Only thing that would've been even better would've been pissing on his corpse!

teamfortress32

Posted by teamfortress32 2 years ago Report

Only thing I feel like this is missing, is a view of what Brent feels as his girlfriend's breasts

IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 1 year ago Report

Good story and I was glad for the recommendation.

As someone put it, D&D PVP is just down to whoever wins initiative. Brent technically did, but had to spend his turn closing in the distance, giving Megan the first move.