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Story time! :3
In this world, the population is growing at an unsustainable rate, and every so often the government needs to order a 'cull' to keep things under control and stop people from starving.
Just a fun idea I had. If it's popular I might write a second chapter, I have some more ideas for this world.
EDIT: Hmm for some reason it seems to have gobbled up half the line breaks and the text is all to the side. I have no idea why it's done this >.<
EDIT2: Re-uploaded as .doc instead and it looks better now :P
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Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report
> Hmm for some reason it seems to have gobbled up half the line breaks and the text is all to the side. I have no idea why it's done this >.<
It happens with .docx format sometimes, due to the converter this site uses for display. Use .doc or .rtf to preserve formatting.
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Posted by hunnter 1 year ago Report
Ahhh yeah that's better, thanks! I've re-uploaded it as .doc instead and it looks a bit better now. I did try rtf originally but it kept showing an error every time I tried to submit it for some reason.
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Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report
Yeah, that happens sometimes, too. I used to use .rtf here, but once I started getting errors like that, I switched to .doc for everything.
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Posted by NavigerousVore 1 year ago Report
A lot of fun scenarios all happenening at once, love how casual it all is! Really unique twist with the take home.
I actually thought Jennifer would calm Chloe down by """promising""" to spit her out later ;) I liked the way it went!
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
That would have been interesting. If that happened, Jennifer could have kept telling Chloe "Just a little later".
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Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
oof a very cruel world indeed. couldnt even give them pain killers or somethuing to make it more relaxing or fair lol
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Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report
What a waste, could just sold them for next years school supplies or a new gym.
Love the story though.
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Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I like how casual this setting is about people being digested. People being apathetic to family members being digested is unrealistic, but since it is kinky to me, I can easily suspend my disbelief. I also enjoy how you have multiple scenarios of girls being eaten at the same time.
I had a random thought. It is possible that after finding out the pairs are going to do a vore culling, that some of the girls would be willing to switch pairs to be eaten by someone they like.
One other reason that I enjoy this story, is because I like human/human vore in a modern setting at a high school or college. I would really enjoy more stories in this setting.
My nitpicks are based on personal preference, so you can ignore them if you want. Kelly, Claire, and Katie's substories ended sooner that I would have liked, and that felt like a small letdown to me.
Anyways, great story. Thank you for writing and posting it, and I hope to read more stories from you someday.
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Posted by NavigerousVore 1 year ago Report
No word of a lie read this 2 days ago and just this moment woke up from a nightmare where the sea levels rose and the land was slowly flooding, food became scarce and my school had to Cull, inspired by this story.
It was so vivid, it was like I was there, they where all my classmates from school, wearing the school uniform, I could feel the heat from their bodies and the muffled screams of the prey.
I even pulled out my phone and took photos of rows of girls slowly pushing each other into one another's mouths. They where prrtty bad at it at first, and had to do several attempts to get their partners down. Many required a helping hand from other preds & preys in the room, taking it in turns to feed and be fed.
Girls swallowing each other, some where relieved, many where hungry because of the scarcity of food and happy to be fed.
I remember one girl sobbed because they already missed her best friend that she just swallowed as hwr bestie wriggled in her stomach stomach, her cute face and huge breasts in details bulges (literally from Rokka's latest artwork - freindly sempai encounter).
And if you’re curious some ugly guy I hate chose me to eat and I just punched him so hard in the nose he passed out and I reckon someone else got him.
Maybe I should take a break from vore, its getting too real >w<
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Posted by hunnter 1 year ago Report
Wow sounds intense! Kinda jealous tbh, I never get vore dreams haha XD
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Posted by JackJackal 1 year ago Report
Love how poor Katie find out she's not the favourite daughter so bluntly, mom instantly giving her away to her favourite.
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Posted by Omega271 1 year ago Report
Are they humans or what species are they?
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Posted by hunnter 1 year ago Report
This setting is only humans
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Posted by Omega271 1 year ago Report
Oh ok, It's just that it wasn't seen on the labels.
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