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Well, Jack didn't see this one coming- add it to the list. But sometimes being oblivious can actually work in your favor. Not usually though, Jack is just having a really lucky night.
If the last chapter didn't quite satisfy you after that long hiatus, here's the climax of truth or dare, and it's a double-length chapter. It's got a twist or two, a couple moments of vore-themed tomfoolery, and a heap of emotional trauma! Who doesn't love emotional trauma? I think Jack in particular might be starting to come to grips with it, though. Good for him.
**SPOILERS**
I can't believe no one called out Brutus as a mage pred until the end of the last chapter! I mean, I didn't make it obvious, but with some of the other wild guesses I've seen, I was kinda expecting someone to get it. I did even leave a hint: In #76, Sarabeth's thoughts let slip that there are five other predators at her party besides herself, but if you count up everyone we've seen (Fiona, Chelsie, Petal, Lily) we're still one short!
It's definitely been fun working him into the story without giving that away. Fun trivia fact: in the previous chapter, *he* almost gives it away himself. "What makes marked prey so much better for- you know, predators." He almost said "for *us*", but he caught himself. And bonus fact: If Fiona had chosen differently, Jack's life wouldn't have been endangered by Brutus at all! Not only could she have eaten him when she first caught him, but his plan for truth or dare was *actually* to dare her to mark a human for him so he could try one. But she just had to stick to truth.
Hopefully Brutus wasn't part of Sarabeth's "master plan". She seems a bit shaken up, huh? How desperate *has* she gotten, exactly?
**END OF SPOILERS**
Another enjoyable chapter crafted in collaboration with series co-creator x9comega. If you're looking for the rest of our How Not To Become Lunch series, here's the link for you:
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Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report
Very nice conclusion to the party! I did enjoy the accidental interception, Chelsie's smile, and frankly how well Jack handled the curveballs thrown his way. We really will have to wait and see how Sarabeth processes all of this; there's a LOT of new thoughts and feelings for her to go over.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report
Oh, the party isn't exactly over yet. Remember, it's a sleepover. This was just the last game.
Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report
Now I'm curious: any more surprises that will follow after this?
Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report
Ah, right, I'd misunderstood that comment from the previous chapter...even better! All this internal conflict for Sarabeth, not liking the idea of Fiona being sad that Jack's gone, who KNOWS where things are gonna go from here! Might she have...SECOND THOUGHTS as her plans for the night go forward?
Or she could double down and secretly team up with the person with the highest success rate so far as a disposable fall guy, who can say.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I am now wondering if Sarabeth Bi, and we are getting a threesome here.
Posted by MasterGryph 1 year ago Report
Brutus was extremely lucky. If he had gotten to Jack, he would have become a demonstration of how a predator can have their stomach ripped open from the outside.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report
Yeah, guess Jack wasn't the only lucky one, eh?
Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 1 year ago Report
No kidding. Fiona should have eaten Brutus when she had the chance.
Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report
I would say that he's a dead man from that moment on: Not only he went after Jack, a marked human, while the werewolf who marked him, Fiona, was in the same room, even after getting CAUGHT before, and was saved from the first game, he is now on Fiona's hunting list, and now has the ire from Chelsie and Lily, which is to the extent, Grizz, are now going to hunt him down after the party arc ends. With 3 of them advance preds to boot.
Posted by LæstProficientLurker 1 year ago Report
Absolutely wonderful stuff in the back third with Lily's question to Fiona. And, man, I gotta say, the way you juxtapose the brutality with the normality here is spot-on like, EXACTLY what the essence of this series feels like to me.
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Is it weird that chelsie sticks out to me here? At first she comes across as uncaring or unfeeling , which to people who don’t know the meaning of the terms would make her seem antisocial or sociopathic even.Plus given the way society is built , labels like that aren’t valid .
She kinda reminds me of Buford from phineas and ferb . He comes across as a bullly but in reality he’s just as smart as his friends , only he’s a completely different type of smart. So his personality and actions constantly surprise everyone
Posted by VincentRamone 1 year ago Report
I think Sarabeth may end up having an epiphany of sorts here. With everything that happened and what she's seen and heard. I think Jack's final words may have just been the thing that saved his life without knowing it. Well at least when it concerns the vampire here.
Posted by Dragonknight007 1 year ago Report
Sarabeth gonna have a deep mental reflection after today. Finding out exactly what Arthur had tried to do with no care for fiona feelings and the fact she had tried something similar making her almost as bad as he was.
Mix that with jack speech at the end and it really makes me want to see the vampire girl have a moral conflict on her what she wants anymore
Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report
Oh boy. Just imagine when Fiona finds out about it? She would tear in Sarabeth to oblivion. And with Jack's words of appreciation? It'll be like rubbing salt into her open wounds.
Also, having her being compared to Arthur would be a very huge and lethal blow to everything that she is. That's going to be her worst birthday party yet, and she can't blame anyone else but herself.
Posted by Perodian 1 year ago Report
With this grand reveal, now many people get to share in this suffering, rather than just Fiona and Jack. Jack is once again showing that his caring nature applies even in this extreme circumstance, something I think many people in that room can't relate to, though it's not like many predators would have experienced a friend killing one of their other friends. The mage preds have the highest chance of that, but their lack of care towards fellow humans suggests they may have less empathy. Anyways, this looks like it will push Sarabeth to rethink her plans once again. Maybe this time she'll consider actually stopping them.
I have some other notes. I imagined Chelsie doing a Cheshire Cat smile. I did not catch the detail that there were five predators in the group, so I was not able to make any attempt to theorize on that.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report
Cheshire Cat smile was exactly the inspiration, glad to see that showed through.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report
Happy to brighten your day :)
Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report
Sry, I deleted it to write something else, before I noticed you had replied :D
Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report
Ouch, Sarabeth wasn't expecting that one. I wonder if she'll realize she can still be friends with Fiona even if she has other friends. She doesn't need to be her only friend.
Posted by BrokenPsyche 1 year ago Report
Still think Petal is great. Lol
Posted by 2Ron2R 1 year ago Report
I had been thinking in her desperation Lily would go for Jack inadvertently catching the mage-pred instead and then claim that she had meant to rescue him all along, but this works too.
Brutus was too obvious to guess, having just asked about marked prey, also my mental image of the seating arrangements was obviously way off.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report
Huh, you know, with only a split-second difference in timing, that easily could have happened.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I enjoyed the part where the pred was made to vomit the prey out, I am curious to see if that would happen later on with a prey still savable.
I wonder how common are prey in pred circles.
How worried are people on this site about possible employers finding out about their post..
Posted by 1ring42 7 months ago Report
There we go. Things are clicking into place nicely.