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Two passengers fill their needs...
Only 2,641 words. Short but sweet.
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Posted by Larkspurdiblock 1 year ago Report
God DAMN, this was the good shit! Great work!
Posted by FuzzyTaco 1 year ago Report
:)
Posted by MultipleCacti 1 year ago Report
I absolutely love your descriptions of what's going on around Rin. Revealing her name with the I.D. badge is a really smart way of working it into the script, considering there's almost no dialogue. The reveal of the man's true colours from the perspective of the stewardess was really nice as well.
Short but sweet is right, tons of great ideas here.
Posted by FuzzyTaco 1 year ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! Stories like this really let me experiment in a satisfying way.
Posted by UngarTheBeardful 1 year ago Report
Fantastic, the off screen vore could not have been done better. You have got to make more of these types of stories
Posted by FuzzyTaco 1 year ago Report
Definitely thinking of it!
Posted by Yaouyoppe 1 year ago Report
This is really good, even if I don't like off-screen vore as much. Gotta love the massive boobs reveal with the big coat. Those make for the best bulges.
Posted by FuzzyTaco 1 year ago Report
I tried my best to make the two big reveals fun to read :D
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Lmao she was a casual meal XD
Posted by FuzzyTaco 1 year ago Report
Airplane Food has never tasted better
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I enjoyed this story. I prefer longer stories with gratuitous details, but you used the minimal details that you gave to great effect. I enjoyed the pre-vore teasing, and the build up to the vore was really nice. I like how she showed him her big boobs to tempt him, but ended up tempting his appetite. The way you gave the details left me wanting more. I would have preferred more details about what was happening to Rin inside the stomach, but having things implied in this story was part of the point. I really liked how the sales associate next to the man enjoyed the show. Maybe he can get another meal later. I hope to read more of your stories later.
Posted by FuzzyTaco 1 year ago Report
To know what to add and what to leave out is a mark of a great writer. If I wrote too much I would lose the momentum and connection the reader feels to Rin, and if I wrote too little the audience wouldn't understand what's going on. I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Posted by Justsomeone 1 year ago Report
Wow that was good stuff
Posted by FuzzyTaco 1 year ago Report
:)
Posted by Firebird22 1 year ago Report
That was fantastic!
The premise and execution are great. (Usually I hate it when the vore happens instantly, but it works wonderfully here)
you should definitely write more stories of really busty prey getting gobbled up.
Posted by MadoGuertena45 1 year ago Report
I come back to this one every few days. It’s hard to describe how good I think this is to read.