ilikefour - 3 years ago

Holy cow, that was intense. Really extraordinary, Sammy! It's great to see your writing has only improved :)

Much love from your favorite mouse [who may or may not have identified with Emma a fair amount] <3

sambarton20 - 3 years ago

Thank you so much! I do like to skew things a bit more realistic and a belly is not going to be kind to those inside it

heromc - 3 years ago

Oh this went dark! Good stuff, I really liked it :)

sambarton20 - 3 years ago

Thanks! I like to try and put myself in the shoes of the POV character as much as I can when I write. I'm glad it came through!

Mechdragon1k - 3 years ago

I like the set up where you get focused on the prey mind.

juicefox - 3 years ago

I'm glad to hear that you like the idea and look forward to any future stories you might right. And yeah, its my all time favourite setting too. I'm a little obsessed with it. BizzareBlue is what got me interested in vore stories again. A Short Delay is probably my favourite vore story of all time, it just completely blew me away and radically changed my perspective on what is possible in a vore story. Really opened my eyes to the potetial.

sambarton20 - 3 years ago

Hunting Hours is easily my favorite setting to write in. Shout out to BizzareBlue for introducing it to me, check out their works!
And I like that idea with her friends. I wanted to brings things back around with her boss, but I really like the idea of her friends being the ones there, might use that for another story sometime ;P
Again, thank you!

juicefox - 3 years ago

There's never enough Hunting Hours stories, wish more people used this setting. And it ticked all the boxes for me. Particularly happy that you included post vore sex as it's something I'm majorly into.

And the bit at the end in the cafe was a nice touch, how she was in the same place she would have been had she not been eaten, but serving a radically different role. Would have prefered the familiar customers to be her friends on their coffee break, chatting and wondering where she is as it would have made her absense from her old life more impactful to me personally, but I understand why you'd want to use her boss.

As I said, great story.

sambarton20 - 3 years ago

Very high praise! Thank you so much!

juicefox - 3 years ago

Absolutely fantastic. It's been a long time since I've read a vore story as good as this.

Randomdude5 - 5 years ago

I did check those out and I like them too

sambarton20 - 5 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Make sure to check out parts 2 and 3!

Randomdude5 - 5 years ago

I really like m/f with digestion and childhood friend is one of my favorite troupes.

sambarton20 - 5 years ago

Right!? It was a lot of fun to read over it during edit.

bookworm9763 - 5 years ago

This is better than I remember!

sambarton20 - 5 years ago

I take it you liked it?

UserMan90 - 5 years ago

!

sambarton20 - 5 years ago

Thank-you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Wilhelm00 - 5 years ago

Great story man! It has good pacing and is well written. For a first story it is a very good one.