Glad to see you got a gallery and posted this series. May you post much more (well, whatever you're capable) great works like this!
Side Note: something about her back seems... off in the last image. Maybe the shoulder's too low? Or the back is too hunched up? That's the only thing that's struck me in the five pages.
Regardless, looking forward to more of your great work!
Yeah, I'm seeing that problem too, now that you've pointed it out.
It's looking like a combination of things to me, really. First, I think the arm is a bit too small; it really should be a tad bigger.
The main problem, though, is that it shouldn't be its own enclosed object. The way I intended her position there, she's kind of slumped forward, with her arms and shoulders sort of pressing together, at least as much as they can.
So really, there should be an opening in her arm at the top, with some lines leading back into her shoulders.
Not really a huge problem, but it does bug me a bit. I've considered going back and fixing it, but my general view on doing that with art is that once I start fixing my mistakes in work I've 'finished' I never really stop. It's better to just learn from the mistake and move on.
So, thanks for pointing that out to me. Always nice to have feedback on work, especially when it points out something I need to watch out for.
Awesome stuff! ^-^ I can't wait to see more, and if I had to guess at what that oddity was, I'd say it was her shoulder for sure. It seems kind of like her arm is tacked on in this view or something and it maybe a tad too thin compared to the rest of her body. However, I still applaud you for what you've done here! It reminds me how much work I have to do still before I can get good at drawing. ^-^
Oh my! First the picture of the snake with such lovely gurgling bulges in his coil, relaxing in a tree as he digests his meal. Then the cut-away shot, the elf completely trussed up as the digestive enzymes trickle over her naked form, slowly filling the belly to digest her. What a way to end the day, as snake chow! Having the pose so his belly was hanging and her body was arched in that position works very well.
Absolutely magnificent! Easily one of the best sets I've seen in a long time. Almost everything about this is flawless: the expressions, the subject matter, and I think just about everybody loves elf girls, so that's great too. I love her expression at the end: just priceless.
Very good, a perfect ending to a perfect vore comic. The finishing line is so funny, and suits the situation. Your drawing skills are amazing, I really mean it. I can't wait to see more of your work. Keep it up! Again, awesome job!
Posted by KavenBach 16 years ago Report
Glad to see you got a gallery and posted this series. May you post much more (well, whatever you're capable) great works like this!
Side Note: something about her back seems... off in the last image. Maybe the shoulder's too low? Or the back is too hunched up? That's the only thing that's struck me in the five pages.
Regardless, looking forward to more of your great work!
Posted by Tiberius 16 years ago Report
Yeah, I'm seeing that problem too, now that you've pointed it out.
It's looking like a combination of things to me, really. First, I think the arm is a bit too small; it really should be a tad bigger.
The main problem, though, is that it shouldn't be its own enclosed object. The way I intended her position there, she's kind of slumped forward, with her arms and shoulders sort of pressing together, at least as much as they can.
So really, there should be an opening in her arm at the top, with some lines leading back into her shoulders.
Not really a huge problem, but it does bug me a bit. I've considered going back and fixing it, but my general view on doing that with art is that once I start fixing my mistakes in work I've 'finished' I never really stop. It's better to just learn from the mistake and move on.
So, thanks for pointing that out to me. Always nice to have feedback on work, especially when it points out something I need to watch out for.
Posted by Junogray 16 years ago Report
Amazing, and brilliant, if i could pic one series to be my favorite for the last 3 months, this is it
Posted by Eka 16 years ago Report
Wow, that is actually very well drawn series you got here. Nothing bad to say about it so far. Amazingly enough.
Posted by Elle 16 years ago Report
Awesome stuff! ^-^ I can't wait to see more, and if I had to guess at what that oddity was, I'd say it was her shoulder for sure. It seems kind of like her arm is tacked on in this view or something and it maybe a tad too thin compared to the rest of her body. However, I still applaud you for what you've done here! It reminds me how much work I have to do still before I can get good at drawing. ^-^
Posted by 6163 16 years ago Report
You have a great style and in this case a wonderful sequence to share. Don't stop drawing, I'd love to see more from you. ^_^
Posted by LordStorm 16 years ago Report
Oh Wow i hope you do more that was great;)
Posted by Leshana 16 years ago Report
Great, I liked the whole series, tho the last panel is my favorite, a belly filling with digestive juices as it should be.
Posted by JQVore 16 years ago Report
Once again, awesome art, awesome series. And I still love that crud line :P
Posted by icn 16 years ago Report
an amazing series
Posted by xandra 16 years ago Report
Great series! Can't wait to see more of your art :)
Posted by Angel 16 years ago Report
Ah, a cute girl and a hungry snake. Classic, and very well done. :-)
Posted by Tabatha_Cat 16 years ago Report
Oh my! First the picture of the snake with such lovely gurgling bulges in his coil, relaxing in a tree as he digests his meal. Then the cut-away shot, the elf completely trussed up as the digestive enzymes trickle over her naked form, slowly filling the belly to digest her. What a way to end the day, as snake chow! Having the pose so his belly was hanging and her body was arched in that position works very well.
Posted by Paradox 16 years ago Report
Whew, just awesome!
That is great :P
Posted by canime 16 years ago Report
This is very good. Love the coloring.
Posted by V 16 years ago Report
Awesome series ;)
Posted by Shetira 16 years ago Report
A wonderful series! I loved every bit of it! ^.^
Posted by Binge 16 years ago Report
This is truly awesome
Posted by PrinnyDood 16 years ago Report
Absolutely magnificent! Easily one of the best sets I've seen in a long time. Almost everything about this is flawless: the expressions, the subject matter, and I think just about everybody loves elf girls, so that's great too. I love her expression at the end: just priceless.
Is short: pure genius.
Posted by HeroSoulSword 16 years ago Report
Very good, a perfect ending to a perfect vore comic. The finishing line is so funny, and suits the situation. Your drawing skills are amazing, I really mean it. I can't wait to see more of your work. Keep it up! Again, awesome job!
Posted by Zoekin 16 years ago Report
Awesome set of comics. Breath-taking art and a great story! Loved it!
Posted by Duamutef 16 years ago Report
Hooray for series! Hooray for stomachs! Hooray for Tiberius!
Posted by Zepdek 16 years ago Report
Love your art work, look forward to seeing more.
Posted by kaafan33 16 years ago Report
Very well done! I enjoyed the whole series =)
Posted by matt0044 15 years ago Report
"well, crud"
Understatement of the millenium.
Posted by Blackheart55 14 years ago Report
really nice pictures and series. Great workso far keep it up.