Posted by MilkChocolate 15 years ago Report

French Snack is on fire with these stories!

Posted by Jacquelope 15 years ago Report

Wow, he sure as hell is. These characters have more depth than the Pacific Ocean. Oh and... yay, Jade! Hip hip hoo-ah!

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you, both! :)

Heh, what would humans in Felarya do without Jade? Although timing2 on DA has been writing some truly excellent Felarya stories centred on a sort of safe haven. I highly recommend them: http://timing2.deviantart.com/

Posted by oldman40k2003 15 years ago Report

I feel sorry for Milly. The talk with Isham will not be pleasant for her. Also a little sorry for Anna.

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Heh; feeling sorry for a pred who's eaten several people... The oddity of Felarya. :) I feel rather sorry for her too. She's going to have to face some unpleasant truths and make a difficult decision.

Posted by atak 15 years ago Report

Murrrr, very wonderful story, one of your best Feleyra stories yet! Poor, lucky Chan, ending up as food inside of Anna's sexy stomach! I wonder how quickly she was forgotten, after she was digested and stopped moving? Hopefully Anna got a little bit of pleasure out of it!
I wonder if Anna would have enjoyed it more, had her food stayed quiet, or even desired it herself?

But I still love Milly. I love how sweet, playful, gentle, and nice she is; even if she does eat and digest humans! I bet she would have LOVED it if Gwen had told her stories, and still allowed herself to be eaten!
Shame about the guy's boyfriend, very sad he was eaten while his lover was spared. But I did like seeing a gay couple in one of your stories, very much! Hee, wonder if sometime one of the preds will take note of their relationship, before she eats one or both of them all up?

Murr, very fun story indeed! ^^

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Milly's going to have some serious thinking to do now, though...

Posted by atak 15 years ago Report

Oh I am sure she will. Though I personally hope this isn't the end of her people eating days!

Posted by Krauser 15 years ago Report

whoa whoa whoa!!! I can't take the intensity! I anticipate your continuation of this story! I like your stories the most because of the unique plot. I have never seen a predatory character in felarya be in such a situation. It's nice to have a change from mindless vore all the time, although it is my favourite aspect of felarya along with detailed vore, if you know what I mean. Keep going, you're the best.

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you very much!

Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report

haha roland ma fait bien rire :) si je comprends bien tu es français et donc roland l'est également. Moi jsuis du Québec donc on insulte pas dla même manière ;P. en passant tu devrais en mettre des quebecois un jour dans tes histoires :O
parce que nous on réagirait p-t différemment.

dis moi le quand tu va en mettre un quebecois ^^

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Oui, je suis français. Comment vous insultez au Québec, alors? :p Je penserai à mettre un Québecois dans une de mes histoires.

Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report

ben jsuis peut-etre pas le meilleur exemple :O mais au lieu de dire connasse et pétasse on dit épais/con/cave/moron/niaiseux/ et pute, mais on met des adjectifs que léglise nappécie pas beaucoup^^ ca donne un air plus dure tu vois =/ si tu veux savoir les adjectifs en questions tu me le demanderas XD

Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report

pourquoi ta appeler la fille gwynn? XDXDXD

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Je voulais un prénom qu'on trouve au Pays de Galles. Je pensais en anglais, et "Gwynn" en anglais, je trouve que ça allait assez bien avec le personnage. Sur le coup, je ne me suis même pas rendu compte de la connotation en français. :O

Posted by vore111 15 years ago Report

this is the best Feleyra'n story of yours

being caught by a buatifull giantess waiting to be eatten in hopless

wile she enjoing this like a game for her

watching your friends be eaten woooow man

milly is my fevorit pred character

i hope to see more story similler to this

thanks :)

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you like Milly. The first story she appeared in (Story 11) is similar in some ways.

Posted by oishi1 13 years ago Report

the forced vore was fun and intense, and I like the way you've made the Millie character have to think things over. I'm finding myself invested in the characters and rooting for them even while feeling that they are doomed. Your writing style is great and easy to read.

Posted by French_snack 13 years ago Report

Thank you. And yes, poor Milly... Isham does make things complicated for her. ;)

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

Since I got an unexpected early start on my Christmas vacation this year, I finally got time to sit down and start reading Lost in Felarya, which I have longed to do for some time. And since I'm halfway through, I think the time is overdue for a commentary from me^^

First thing, this is one of the most thrilling and dramatic stories I have read for a while, I never watched the Lost-series when it aired on TV so this is a brand new experience for me.
For the second, I think your concept of following a group of recently stranded people (from Earth!) in Felarya, is a very intriguing take on Karbo's creation. Your story dives deep into the realism of such a meeting and I especially like the first chapters where the dangers of Felarya is still a shocking revelation for the humans. I think I enjoyed the mermaid scene the most there.

As for this chapter, I found the sequence with Crisis and Anna enjoyable to read, poor Anna always seems to be the victim of someones (Crisis) shenanigans.
Seeing Milly and Isham was also fun, though Milly hasn't been too considerate when it comes to Isham's feelings in this matter, but they make a great couple for exploring the philosophy and morality of Felaryan eating-habits! I wonder whom, if any, of the poor humans will survive until the last chapter^^

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm very glad you're enjoying this series. :) Crisis thinks she's doing what's best for Anna; she'll learn, little by little, to be more respectful of Anna's own choices. Similarly, it isn't easy for Milly to be challenged in this way, but she and Isham need to adapt to each other. They surely care enough for each other to make the effort.