Damn. As I read through I found myself at times pushing myself to continue since oral vore and same size are both difficult aspects of the fetish to rationalize. But that ending, the understanding flowing between them from the absorption process co-mingling... I liked that a lot. Very naturalist, fey/elven in nature.
And besides from a couple sticky spots near the beginning, excellent writing quality yet again.
Wow. Just... wow. Imrhys said it all. I kinda liked the way the huntress seduced his ego with that "we need you more than you need us" line. Slick, man, slick. Five stars, again.
Oh, it's not a trick; it's what they actually believe. That was psychic feedback from her subconscious rather than her conscious (seeing as they don't speak the same language). Unlike a lot of greater fey, the ones in Pastoria don't consider themselves to be "better, so we get to do whatever the hell we want to you". They're aware that everything they have is built on the existence of the lesser fey in exactly their present capacity.
Posted by Entity 13 years ago Report
For some strange reason it reminds me of the two races in The Time Machine.
Fantastic story by the way,so detailed and fun to read
Posted by Sarus 13 years ago Report
Awesome story :)
That's the first time I see the hunting part that is so well described and enjoyable.
Thanks !
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Damn. As I read through I found myself at times pushing myself to continue since oral vore and same size are both difficult aspects of the fetish to rationalize. But that ending, the understanding flowing between them from the absorption process co-mingling... I liked that a lot. Very naturalist, fey/elven in nature.
And besides from a couple sticky spots near the beginning, excellent writing quality yet again.
Posted by Jacquelope 13 years ago Report
Wow. Just... wow. Imrhys said it all. I kinda liked the way the huntress seduced his ego with that "we need you more than you need us" line. Slick, man, slick. Five stars, again.
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
Oh, it's not a trick; it's what they actually believe. That was psychic feedback from her subconscious rather than her conscious (seeing as they don't speak the same language). Unlike a lot of greater fey, the ones in Pastoria don't consider themselves to be "better, so we get to do whatever the hell we want to you". They're aware that everything they have is built on the existence of the lesser fey in exactly their present capacity.
Posted by Bright 13 years ago Report
I think this story was very well written. I like how you portray the thoughts of the protagonist.