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A moment of weakness brings an end to two fey. (Isn't that always how it goes?)
A Mystic Wilds story.
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Posted by Draegonx 14 years ago Report
Another lovely story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. The dedication really fits well, I have read many of ManyEyedHydra's stories-nods-
Posted by Imrhys 14 years ago Report
I only wish I could get you to submit this (or pretty much anything else you have posted in these parts) to EPWG.
I'm normally not much for stories where the vore is the vehicle/purpose of the story, but the detail work you put in in both the characterization and climaxes is just so bang on. I won't lie, i have a few artistic differences of option in how you present the vore but if i only wanted to read my own opinion i'd never leave home.
Your take on a "vore is common place" world/setting is most interesting even if not my first preference in vore. And the way you work in a form of absorption with UB is truly creative (okay so I value absorption a bit too much :P ).
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
Heh. Way to hang a lampshade right on the squelchy and wonderfully awful absorption of Alrin.
I like the way you fashion this universe. The lesser fey know they're wired to be prey. The greater fey win because it's the natural order of things. And they win by using sex, too. What an incredibly smart tactic of evolution!
And yeah, that's now two votes for luring you into the EPWG! :D
Posted by Sehnsucht 14 years ago Report
Mindblowing. From the humour of Dollo's reaction to the deeply hot descriptions of sex to the taunting ("and in... you... go") to the weirdly organic process by which they devour their prey. I really, really enjoyed this one.
In retrospect I think the way you communicated the two prey characters is genius. I've got a very clear conception of them and grew quite fond of them. This is astonishing in such a small space of text.
But dang, those Tattooed fey were sexy.
Posted by Sarus 14 years ago Report
Awesome read!
I liked the setting, the attention to details is just right.
But hey, I love ManyEyedHydra stories too, and you managed to use the same ingredients, so it's no wonder I love this one too :)
Posted by RenicofVore 13 years ago Report
i hope you dont mind me saveing them to my computer, your stories so i can read when i dont have net. ^_^