Posted by acrylic 11 years ago Report

Hooray! a new work!

Posted by Beheader205 11 years ago Report

What I read felt like an acid trip xD I love the story, but man Darryl was high on something.

Posted by Groblek 11 years ago Report

Then I did my job correctly. :) I was trying to show how Serena was constantly screwing with reality around him, and aiming for that surreal effect, Glad you enjoyed it.

Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report

Ohhhh love this! ahahaha, all sorts of casual, surprise, noncon UB'ing, unwilling new babies, and a new hubby totally "lost" in marital bliss *chuckles*

Great work on the showing (not telling) the reality warper powers :)))

Good thing she likes Darryl, or hubby #3 might have to deal with triplets, ahahahahah

Posted by Groblek 11 years ago Report

Heh, I thought you'd like this one based on some of your comments on my previous works. Glad you like it. :)

I've had the first unbirth scene here in my head for years, and am glad I finally found a story to wrap it in. Darryl's lucky that I'm generally a romantic, I was tempted to have him give the wrong answer to Serena's last question here. :)

The warped reality was a lot of fun, but also tricky to write. I think I've mentioned it before, but my favorite setup is to drop an instance or two of unbirth into the middle of an otherwise normal reality just to get that touch of the surreal. It was interesting to try one where the POV character doesn't get to recognize what's going on. I'd like to do something similar with the unbirther being completely oblivious, but I'm not sure I'm up to the challenge quite yet and am still missing the right plot for it,

Posted by Amberain 11 years ago Report

There was a point in the story where I wasn't sure that Serena did know what was happening. It kind of seemed like she believed what she was telling Darryl about being pregnant at the ball. It wasn't until she told him they were married that I figured out she was in control of the situation, but I still wasn't certain if the unbirth was a conscious thing until the boy and girl comment at the very end.

Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report

Yes, it could definitely be played either way until that ending, but I've been reading Groblek's work for years, so I strongly suspected what was going on. Doesn't hurt I have a fondness for casual predators myself that treat predation as something to let the body do not me consciously thinking about it.

Posted by Imrhys 11 years ago Report

Yes, it tosses in surreal and since I'm a fan of erotic horror, this just curls my toes blissfully, hehehehe.

And yes, unaware predators is... it is a fetish all to its own that I do not get into usually. But in a case like this, where her body could be doing so much of the work "for her" that she herself is oblivious until later when she has to make 'decisions' about what becomes of the prey/victim... *purrrrs*

I've had my Im'Rhys unknowingly tail vore prey that she herself found very sexy and wanted more of, and her tail just reached and acquired them for her. It is only when they pass into her body FROM the tail that she realizes "ohhhh, a new playmate. Mmmm, lovely tail, but you know we aren't supposed to take them against their will. Oh well, to late now." as belly begins to shrink. Which all of that is a game, since in fact she is wholly in control of her processes, but loves to torment prey for the psychological play (they rarely die and when they wake up later... all they remember is one kinky, freaky night that has left them sore everywhere, but with a big smile on their faces).

Posted by TW 11 years ago Report

Great job here. I like the way you think of it as a distortion field.