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A man's account of riding an elevator with a woman who has an unusual solution for her claustrophobia during an elevator ride.
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This was written between 2:20 and 3:00 am. It probably shows.
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Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 10 years ago Report
Still a delightful read, to be sure, ha~!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by nauczyciel 10 years ago Report
are they stuck in there?
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
If I don't explicitly say something in one of my little stories, you're free to come up with your own answers for things like that, but in my head she'll eventually let them out. I was going to have a scene where she planned to do so by going into the bathroom, but it was crowded in there and she decided to wait until later. I left that out because... it was 3am and I had to go to work today.
Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report
Yaaaay! You're still writing!
I love it.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Yep. I'm scraping the bottom, but there are at least a few more stories left in there before I finally go dark.
Posted by ninth 10 years ago Report
You're doing great dude! Keep up the good work!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by magicalcheeterman 10 years ago Report
Great read. Nice work :)
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! That's apparently the chunk that was keeping my brain from shutting down.
Posted by magicalcheeterman 10 years ago Report
Sorry it kept you up but it just needed to be written :)
Posted by night22 10 years ago Report
This was a great read! You've got an enjoyable writing style
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by Drizztt44 10 years ago Report
Instant fav
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Soulary 10 years ago Report
soooo does she let them out since it was reactionary and she openly admits to it being an "overreaction"?
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
That was the plan, that she'd eventually let them out. But I ran out of time.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
I think it works better leaving it up in the air, and leaving their eventual fate to the reader's imagination. Good story!
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
There IS something appealing in the uncertainty.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report
The funny thing is, I'd been thinking about using a stuck elevator as a venue for a vore story myself for some time now. I guess if you snooze, you lose. :)
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
I suspect there MAY be room for multiple interpretations on this. And you wouldn't believe the sequence of sleep-deprived scenarios that came and went before I settled on this. It was going to be two captured fairies in a jar first, but I've already got a named fairy (Meeta) and she's in a committed relationship... Yeah, that was a deal breaker for me at that moment. My logic does strange things after midnight.
Posted by Drizztt44 10 years ago Report
If this is what comes out as a result of staying up late then please, do so more often.
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
It's funny you say that, because right now it is 2am and I can't sleep. Guess what that means?
Posted by Drizztt44 10 years ago Report
Future smiles, not that im not currently anyway.
Posted by SSJBura 10 years ago Report
Nice story! I've really enjoyed your short pieces
Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report
Thanks! My longer stuff is more of the same, only... longer. Mostly via explanations of how and why things are happening.