Posted by joeburp22181 10 years ago Report

Impressive this entire story was jotted down in an hour. Loved the read, would enjoy previewing something like this again the future.

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

Thanks. I can usually blast out a couple of thousand words really quick if I don't have to worry about continuity.

Posted by acrylic 10 years ago Report

I love no bulge vore

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

Me too!

Posted by acrylic 10 years ago Report

By the way when the pred's bulge is compressed, is the prey dead or has no problem?

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

I'm not fond of fatal vore, so the prey has no problem. I don't know how or why, but if you want answers to those questions, just peek at my HDTF or "Meeta and Wendy" stories. Made-up science or magic justifies my personal kinks.

Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report

"I'm not fond of fatal vore"...some of my favorite words. Nice to find another author I can add and read without having to skip to the end to see if they die.

(And I saw your shout on my page, too. Thanks for the kind words!)

Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 10 years ago Report

...I adore these stories, perhaps too much, ahaha. Inspirin' me further to make a compression pred, ayish-ish x3

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

Thanks very much! If I see such a pred show up, I will be beyond honored to know I helped inspire it.

Posted by threk 10 years ago Report

Whoo, prequel!
Unwilling compression unbirth is awesome, so I'm loving this pred :D

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

A prequel indeed! That decision was a last minute add on before hitting save. "Well, as long as she's drunk, she may as well be heading for the bus."

Posted by threk 10 years ago Report

Haha, well it's good to know that bus-guy and club-girl get some company in there!

Posted by Jones 10 years ago Report

What a delicious little story. As mentioned above, making this a prequel is a nice twist. I like where these shorts are going and how they flow, and I love this character in the peach dress. Hopefully I run into her sometime ;)

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

What can I say, I can't seem to NOT turn things into a series.

Posted by DRayElliott 10 years ago Report

Well, we like it that way. I'd like to see a chapter with some character development so we can get a feel for her personality. Is she a decent person? A sadistic one? My curiosity is killing me.

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

I won't say development is not going to happen, but if it does, it probably won't be a "Quickie." That stuff takes me much longer to write. Based on her behavior though, she seems vaguely sociopathic. On the bus she didn't show any indication that she even considered her meal to be a person, and in the club she knew enough to cover her her meal's mouth, so she knows they aren't willing (at least, not at first) and she does it anyway. That's not to say that she isn't still a decent person, she might just have different morals and values and... see, this is why my stuff is usually so much longer.

Posted by ShadesofBlack 10 years ago Report

Perhaps she knows that they're people, and even if they enjoy it, it's derailing their lives for her pleasure. She knows that it's wrong to walk up and treat them as objects like this... but it just feels so good. That's the vibe I get from her, especially on the bus, when she seems to be struggling with her willpower vs her appetite. Also, it appears that she's drunk. It's possible that she could be a somewhat different person when she's sober. My god, I love this.

Posted by DRayElliott 10 years ago Report

A valid point. Alcohol lowers inhibitions and increases libido. And her "meals" being unwilling, at least at first, is understandable since what's happening is beyond their experience and knowledge of what's possible. As for the sociopathic part, everyone has vague sociopathic tendencies, psychopathy is used to indicate a person who lacks empathy or morality, whereas sociopathy is defined as having differing views on right and wrong from the average person. It doesn't mean that the person in inherently cruel or evil, just that they see things differently than what's considered normal.

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

At first I was thinking, "I purposely write a story with no dialogue or character development and that one spurs the most study and analysis?" but in retrospect, with the least information about the key character, this is the story with the most room for interpretation.

Posted by Groblek 10 years ago Report

Nice! Of course, now you've got me wanting to see her catives find each other... :)

Posted by Groblek 10 years ago Report

Captives, that is.

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

Thanks! You know, the reason this woman went all the way into the womb was because I realized if this was a prequel, the guy on the bus would have run into her otherwise.

Posted by DRayElliott 10 years ago Report

Love your stories, as I too am not fond of fatal vote unless the person dying DESERVES it. I'm also curious as to whether or not she intends to let them out at some point.

Posted by DRayElliott 10 years ago Report

Vore, I mean. My stupid tablet keeps changing it to vote because I had to do a factory reset and haven't added it into the dictionary again yet.

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

I figured.

Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report

I've had that same thing happen. There could be a story in it somewhere. "I think I'm going to vore Republican this year..."

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

I don't plan these out, so I don't have an answer to the final fate of the two "meals", but knowing me, they probably get out.

Posted by DRayElliott 10 years ago Report

Great. If it were me, I'd immediately ask her out on a date.

Posted by DRayElliott 10 years ago Report

I mean, how awesome would it be to have a girlfriend who could stuff you up her cunny? If I had such a one, that's where I'd be going to sleep every night.

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

A non-fatal vore-capable world would be a very interesting one indeed.

Posted by Throat_Wolf 10 years ago Report

You might want to read my stuff. I'm a non-fatal vore writer, too, and I have a setting where I put most of my stories. :)

Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report

I might, just haven't had the time recently. I just hope your stuff ain't about furries. I...dislike anthro stuff.

Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report

See? Took me four months to read your comment.

Posted by Jones 10 years ago Report

Ditto

Posted by soline 10 years ago Report

Ohhh my goodness <3 you are extremely good at this <3

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! My schedule looks like it is opening up, so I should be able to get back to the series stuff, but it is great to know that my quick ideas are well received too.

You've got a lot of stuff in your gallery that I enjoy too!

Posted by ryanshowseason3 9 years ago Report

*sigh* this was great. *slump*

I will almost definitely be stealing concepts. Particularly the footsie thing. I've always wanted to work footsie into a scene this was definitely the way to do it.

You confound me. I am definitely a fatal vore nut, but your narratives are *very* good. And so I tease myself by reading them. Love em all the same!

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

It's fairly easy to convert non-fatal into fatal in the ol' imagination. Just add some gurgling. But if I've produced some concepts you like, by all means, steal! That's what great artists do.

Posted by Goblingobler 8 years ago Report

Ahhhh still one of my absolute favorites~

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

It was one of my favorites too.