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Julia gets together the parts to modify the HDTF apparatus they have access to, as well as unveil a new feature she'd been working on. Naturally, that feature will have to be thoroughly tested before they can trust it to be useful in rescuing their friends.
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This wasn't the story I intended to post, but I'd put something together with no vore in it, which seemed like it might be a letdown, so Lexi went a bit further in the testing in this new version.
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Posted by Uryx 9 years ago Report
Micro pred is one of my favorite things~<3
Bonus points for compression into the micro pred to make it nearly-bulgeless~ ^u^
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Bulgeless Micro-preds are definitely near the top of my list of favorites too!
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 9 years ago Report
Well this has certainly added some interesting new possibilities to the HDTF tech. Looking forward to seeing them fully utilized.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Yep. Teeny tiny self-powered HDTFs have real possibilities, and the option of affecting things besides just organics should be fun too.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 9 years ago Report
I love it. These stories just get better and better.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by gersen 9 years ago Report
You can enter as an option, it is very large bulge? The bulge more than a predator. Thank.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
The bulge is small, barely enough to make little Lexi seem somewhat pregnant.
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Nice! The ability to make it work on non-living materials is quite a twist. I think the bad guys are in for trouble when Julia catches up with them. Also, Lexi's twisted, in a very fun way.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Lexi's definitely got some quirks that make her well suited to the HDTF lifestyle.
Posted by SSJBura 9 years ago Report
Solved your plot hole, got a new device, and a fun sequence! Great installment!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Glad you liked it.
Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report
I'm glad you went back to that "medical waste" issue and explained the situation. To be honest, that ruling didn't make a whole lot of sense to me, and it was a whole lot scarier than anything the HDTF could do. With that resolved, I feel like everything is back on track again.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
It was a tough call for me. On one hand, why weren't the police putting a stop to this? On the other, law doesn't work like that.
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
Whoopee!! A new one!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Sometimes I'm able to deliver.
Posted by RLord4268 9 years ago Report
Micro, Compression, general all around kinkiness. And with the new twists added. Damn, we're spoiled. I can't wait to see what deviousness you've cooked up for pt. 5. With each installment, you make it harder to wait for the next.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad I'm keeping up with expectations!
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
I wonder what the hell has happened to my patience quotient. My Patience Gauge seems to be hovering somewhere between 0 and -1 lately.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
The universe only seems to throw extra work at me when it knows people are waiting for stuff that I can only do in my free time...
Posted by RLord4268 9 years ago Report
Patience. Good things come to those who wait. Besides, this is going to be the apex of the story line and well worth it. I'm biting my nails as we speak. No matter if it's done this wekend or not, I'm going to read it. I'll be working overtime myself, and I can entirely understand having no free time.
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
I'm not usually so impatient, but for some reason when it comes to this story I am very much so. Now that I think of it, I'm showing all the signs of addiction. DAMN YOU MARLOWENY!!! Lol
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Great. Now I'm an enabler.
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
At least it isn't physically debilitating like crack or heroin. Unless Carpal Tunnel Syndrome counts.
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
Getting twitchy again.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
As I just said to someone else, I'd overestimated my amount of free time recently, but I'll try to get a new chapter done this week.
Posted by DRayElliott 9 years ago Report
That's okay, I'm not trying to pressure you or anything.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
No worries. That came out snippier than I'd intended it.
Posted by LittleBeast 9 years ago Report
I had been wondering if there would be some size reduction from long-term compression... Hadn't thought about how ridiculously much energy matter-to-energy conversion creates.
Have I mentioned how I really like the one-eye-on-real-science aspect to these? Cause I do.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
It took some doing to crunch those numbers. E=MC^2 and all that.