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Well first things first, this is written in first-person/second-person split, and I'm going to admit I *hate* stories written in that style. I definitely forgive and sympathize with anyone else who hates this crap.
I dunno why but I just really needed to write this. I don't rp anymore but one of my favorite parts was just being teased. I love being teased like this.
I hate stories written in this style but this was still a lot of fun to write and I just needed to do SOMETHING after what a stressful year this has been. I still have obligations I need to fill before I can come back out into the open, but while I want to move on and try to make writing for various things a viable career, I can't until I get my act together and produce content regularly so people have some faith in me again.
With that said, maybe this can be at least some small attempt at me doing that, getting my act together. Maybe a few of you will even cum to this! Or maybe everyone will hate it because I just don't know when to stop praising cock vore in the middle of the fic itself--I do that.
But if you do have fun I hope you took advantage of the opportunity to put yourself in the predator's shoes as the animal of your choice ;3
Or maybe you really got into my perspective and how fun it is to be an idealized and fetishized vixen on the brink of digestion.
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Posted by ErRynArya 8 years ago Report
Im like you. I entered the prey's shoes and oh my god it was an amazing story. Probably one of my favorite stories ever on this site
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
Wow, um, thank you! I was not expecting a big nice positive comment like yours so soon <3 *prey high five?*
Posted by Kooshmeister 8 years ago Report
As with all your stuff, it's quite well done. :)
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
thanks! I know my stuff isn't your preference, its nice to know I can entertain you despite that!
Posted by Shortpig 8 years ago Report
That was quite excellent, in many ways. I actually enjoyed the perspective, as it's unique and flows well despite it.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
Hmm, well I don't think it is unique (I despise it for the reason that it strikes me as pretentious), but I'm glad you think it flows well. I was worried it didn't.
Posted by copb.phoenix 8 years ago Report
Glad to see you alive ^_^ I used to stalk you on iB for the pred-dating-prey stuff <3
Don't give up. You have a share of fans who are here to support you.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
iB? inkbunny? I don't think I did any pred-dating-prey stuff. sure that was me?
thanks though!
Posted by Scratch 8 years ago Report
Very nicely done, I loved all of the 'talk,' it's exposition and discussion and adds wonderfully to the scene.
I usually associate as prey, and I'd say she came off as the dominate point of view, but you've got a great way of making me feel the pred, and the ending was such an appropriate debasement : ) A lot of the general ideas going through her head, albeit with switched genders (though that androgenizing effect of digestion is interesting), are what I love in dominating vore but is so hard to capture, but the format really let it rhough here. Really nice work! Good to see you still writing!
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
I have a bad habit of giving the prey the short end of the stick in my writing (in terms of focus), so I tried to repair that a bit here.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Unfortunately you won't see very much male prey from me. Not that it does not please me, but I emote with it less easily and there's such a saturation of male prey stuff.
Posted by Scratch 8 years ago Report
I'd expect you to write female prey frankly, it ties so nicely into the 'pro/antifeminism' dichotomy, or alterantively the female submission vs. individuality conflict, you weave into your stories/realities. A woman submitting is sort of the ingrained/expected/natural expectation (taken to the extreme here with cockvore), whereas with a male prey it tends to be a role reversal and against the grain to submit to being food, as well as the female pred also becoming dominant. But I thought the bare mechanics of it was strikingly similar, of losing your own gender to strengthen the other, just reversed, and it was nice to see it in the story spelled out so clearly and passionately.
It does seem to work much better with F/M cockvore though -- the penis is such a symbol of the male, and the conversion into literal cum, make that male over female domination almost natural. At least it's given me an appreciation for CV like this with a female prey.
I think to get the same thing with reversed genders, soft vore works better with a dominant female turning the male into pseudo-pregnancy, and having his body enhance what makes her sexy -- boobs, breasts, hips -- and possibly create milk. Works with hard vore too if there is genital eating (nullifying the prey before taking the rest). But there isn't the same scene of the orgasm at the end for the male prey, and the symbolism isn't there as much as being eaten by a literal dick and turned into cum to be jerked out.
And I’m not really a fan of m/m pairings. Probably why I have’t liked much cockvore I read, when both pred and prey are male it’s highly, uh, homoerotic and not my thing, and I agree there is a dearth of female prey cockvore, so I’m glad you’re sticking to female prey in these stories : ) Plus you do a good job of touching that feminist/sexuality conflict; part of my reluctance with female prey lately is that I just feel a little bad being ‘mean’ to girls, appearing mysoginistic. It’s a lot easier to write about debasing your own gender instead of the others I guess. At least it’s an informed kind of debasement.
Not to mention, writers should write what they want to, it’s all self-expression and I like the expression in your stories : )
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
on that note I actually like predatory unbirthing. I'd sooner call it vaginal vore. I don't know the artist but one of my favorite pictures of all is this mouse girl who was VV-ing a cat boy and the third picture of the set was her cumming and pulling out his shirt, which gave me the inspiration for my Cynthia story where the rabbit pulls my bra out of her snatch after she orgasms in the shower.
The same you're talking about probably can be done with vaginal vore with F/m pairings, but I think well-done unbirth is probably the rarest of vore-types other than something just plain silly like breast vore.
As for misogyny in writing? I dunno maybe some people would disagree and say there's more to it than this, but I think it can be simply put down that the most misogynistic thing you can do is not give a female character development.
Posted by Scratch 8 years ago Report
That is a great sequence, I agree. Also one of the first I can remember seeing that was specifically predatory rather than a return to the womb. Especially liked in that one the difference in reactions... maybe because UB is usually a nonfatal thing that last image with the 'proof' really hits hard that she turned him into a bunch of cream...
I would say Eveara does a good job. Loved your story with Cynthia too. You made it clear there that it was predation... the cute/nervous tension between characters really helped make a kind of absurd thing work. Anything where the prey is actually dissolved and absorbed seems to work for me for sure, but it does seem to be more of insertion or rebirthing or other things that don't really fit into vore as much.
There's definitely a power to turning a character into an object. When I wrote The Game the commissioner liked how the pred essentially became a vessel for the prey, kind of reverse to your stories but the thread of total objectification works into the submissive dynamic.
Posted by Scratch 8 years ago Report
Sorry I got a bit mixed up there; in the second paragraph I meant that most UB tends to be insertion/rebirthing, so it is nice to see proper predatory UB.
And wanted to tack onto the last paragraph that it's the whole swirl of concepts around being turned from a person into a thing (through force of another person's will and biology) that work for me, and I'm appreciative of how well you accomplish that with genital vore adding on all of the garnish of gender tensions, interactions, taboos, etc. and how self-aware and reflective of it your stories are.
Posted by unicorn 8 years ago Report
This style is a bit harder to follow, i guess i'm not very practiced at it!
But that aside, HOLY CRAP. This is so much of what i like about vore... so hot ;_;
Your writing is a treat as always, regardless of the style it's in!
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
:D :3 *does a little dance*, hi equustra! thank you so much for the compliment!
Posted by TeddyBear 8 years ago Report
I normally have problems reading longer stories (short attention span) But this....Yes. Just yes. Wonderful. Definitely going to read this a few times in the future. Your stories have kept me interested through and through. I appreciate your work :)
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
thank you so much!
Posted by kbruen 8 years ago Report
Awesome stort! Enjoyed reading it before going to bed and I actually slept better than usual thanks to this awesome artwork! Keep up the great work!
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
strangely specific use, I prefer melatonin myself.
I'll try my best!
Posted by Estee 8 years ago Report
Awesome story, loved reading this.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
Gee, thanks :3
Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 8 years ago Report
Went in callous to the perspective, came out admiring the results. Different, but interesting experience, this!
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
Thank you so much D: I'm still embarrassed you even read my stuff. Thanks for the boost in confidence.
Posted by SightlessStudios 8 years ago Report
I'm like you, I hate first/second person writing. That being said, I couldn't finish reading this story due to me reaching my climax early xD Great job.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
Hmm, I hope you can return to it sometime later this year? But thanks for trying anyway.
Posted by SightlessStudios 8 years ago Report
Lol, I had a similar experience with "Bad Writing." It made me cum so fast that it was hard to make any progress on it xD I'll probably end up finishing this one within the next few weeks.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 years ago Report
Hi Blessed, that list of things 'my' prey said at the end that 'I' could do with her reminds me of your Big Macintosh/Fluttershy work on Writing.com.
I got going to this a bit, but this is not my thing. It is quite well written though, you've become a great writer!
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
Oh, crap, writing.com. I forgot all about that place. Maybe I should use that, especially when I start posting my actual story.
Posted by Shortpig 8 years ago Report
Any chance for a link to that work? Would certainly like to see more like this.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
I wrote for Estee's mlp vore interactive on writing.com. interactive stories are down right now, the website says.
Posted by Shortpig 8 years ago Report
Fairly certain that you just need to log in to enable interactive stories during high traffic. Works fine for me, once I do.
Regardless, thank you! I'll be keeping an eye out for your works while reading through it.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 years ago Report
Here's the link to blessed's work.
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1860344-My-little-Pony-Friendship-is-Magic-vore/map/14211
Posted by Shortpig 8 years ago Report
My appreciation, though I already found it (Ctrl+f makes things quite simple) and he wrote a lot more than just that one branch. There's some superb content by him tucked away all over that interactive.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 years ago Report
Oh, I thought might have but thought it couldn't hurt just in case.
Posted by Spunkomatic66 8 years ago Report
This stuff is really interesting because it's well-written, but it also takes on a unique understanding of the power dynamics that make vore... well, vore. I like it.
Posted by Spunkomatic66 8 years ago Report
This stuff is really interesting because it's well-written, but it also takes on a unique understanding of the power dynamics that make vore... well, vore. I like it.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
Glad!
Posted by umbramagna 8 years ago Report
This is so awesome, shame you seem to don't like this style, I really would love to see more from you.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 8 years ago Report
wow, thanks!
Posted by Angeloid003 6 years ago Report
One of the best vore stories so far in the net, you deserve more views, keep the good work, please <3
Posted by blessedwasthechild 6 years ago Report
Oh thank you >.< you're too kind
Posted by Ruthborn 4 years ago Report
Holy crepe this is awesome. Well done.
Posted by blessedwasthechild 4 years ago Report
I need to edit and post Eat Me Harder cuz this version is so old now that it kind of embarrasses me >.>
Thank you much!
Posted by Ruthborn 4 years ago Report
There’s an updated version!? Holy hecks post it quick!!
Posted by blessedwasthechild 4 years ago Report
Not really, more like, an encore? but it isn't edited. I've got a looot of stuff to finish working on. I wanna do some more adult/adult stoof and really diversify my gallery and maybe get more stuff on my furaffinity. But time is finite...