Hey CC, Good to see you again. How are things doing with you in life? For me it's been rather rough from drama to looking for work. Seeing you here again helped my mood a bit given. Anyways on with the review for Eve.
Goodie! That's a another comic for Evelyn to see! But seriously though from what I see, Eve can't seem to get a break when in regards to controlling her hunger. That cursed first step is always a problem. Even more so with those two poor girls who just had bad luck being there at the wrong time to do a selfie....only to end up as Eve's lunch...or dinner given. Poor Eve for she's seems cursed to her fate as a sad predator. One that doesn't get to go to a spa. XD
Now design wise, seems to me your work on Eve's body posture seemed much more preportionnate than before and I also noticed her hair was also done well too. God she has good hair for it looks nice that way. Back on how you did her body, she seems a bit more curvy than before and I mean it in a good way. Her feet and hands are what I saw with the most improvement from what I see.
Lastly I saw the way the comic progress along with Eve's expressions on each panel. Especially when she at the end was moaning about what she accidently done. Seriously Eve's expressions each tell that she wasn't having fun. That and the thought bubbles you put through on each panel was handled nicely for Eve. You really improved how you did each expression and it shows...good work.
Seriously CC. You really done a good job with Eve's comic on this one. Seriously I hoped to see more like this...Eve or otherwise. I mean it would show what you would do when you do put into the next project. Laters and keep up the hard work.
Posted by Royal_Starlord 8 years ago Report
XD
Posted by Wolfwood 8 years ago Report
It's amazing how we always feel more sorry for Eve than the people doomed to digest. :P
Posted by gigaredpanther 8 years ago Report
They were taking a duckfaced selfie in the middle of a pathway. It's safe to say that they won't be missed.
Posted by Septia 8 years ago Report
Sort of have to agree.
Posted by YesImCanadian 8 years ago Report
Yeah
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
well played
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Just an ordinary day for her!
Posted by CGR-7 8 years ago Report
Okay, Eve, that wasn't even your fault, you had no control over that one. Just mark it as a mulligan. XD
How silly, C.C.. =)
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
It's the principle of the matter!
Posted by neko1992 8 years ago Report
I want to see what the selfie might look like
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
might be an interesting thing to do one day
Posted by Gabriel0813 8 years ago Report
poor thing
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
indeed
Posted by ToxicRoses 8 years ago Report
Its ok Eve, It was an accident just spit them out! We wont tell anyone~
XD oopies
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
But she still counts it as a loss!
Posted by Pixel 8 years ago Report
Fate wants her to eat!
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Exactly!
Posted by DanzoLegend 8 years ago Report
PHOTONOM! also you cannot be blamed for those two. xp they were casualties of not paying attention.
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Indeed so
Posted by Flame14 8 years ago Report
Poor girl was so close to that spa day to. Looking at it, isn't Eve's belly a bit large for just two girls?
Posted by Way2Weird4Some 8 years ago Report
Looks like she's got a table or something in there too.
Posted by Belloc 8 years ago Report
God is clearly not on her side. :c
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
apparently not
Posted by GnomeishDelight 8 years ago Report
Naw... She kinda deserve that spa day
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Not to her, it's the principle of the thing!
Posted by WPBcrazy 8 years ago Report
can't she spit them back out? o3o
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
she could but she still lost her streak
Posted by WPBcrazy 8 years ago Report
oh
Posted by Bright 8 years ago Report
This made me laugh.
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
thanks
Posted by M.A.S 8 years ago Report
Eve's >:C face made me chuckle.
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
That's her determination face!
Posted by UltimaSlash 8 years ago Report
When taking selfies, always be aware of your surroundings.
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Very important but such frequently forgotten
Posted by testuser 8 years ago Report
So close.
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
indeed
Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report
Start screaming and maybe they will come out X3
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
but that would draw attention!
Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 8 years ago Report
Unless you started screaming, then nobody would pay attention!
Posted by Liz 8 years ago Report
Omg XD lovely work
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
thanks!
Posted by HarlequinGemini 8 years ago Report
There's no crack in the first panel, so I can only assume her weight caused the step to crack and fate guided her path
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
It was definitely a cruel twist of fate
Posted by SSJBura 8 years ago Report
Lmao, poor Evelyn. So close!
Posted by angel2 8 years ago Report
Stairs is so evil..that's why rail need hold on this for safe.. c: Poor Eve and two girls. xD
Posted by HangryWriter25 8 years ago Report
How could this happen to me?
I made my mistakes...
Got nowhere to run,
The night goes on....
Posted by CMvoreroom 8 years ago Report
Poor girl, such a curse to be able to eat people the same size as you... but then again, she mite not like it, but we do >:)
Great image CC like always X)
Posted by BlueMarvel611 8 years ago Report
Hey CC, Good to see you again. How are things doing with you in life? For me it's been rather rough from drama to looking for work. Seeing you here again helped my mood a bit given. Anyways on with the review for Eve.
Goodie! That's a another comic for Evelyn to see! But seriously though from what I see, Eve can't seem to get a break when in regards to controlling her hunger. That cursed first step is always a problem. Even more so with those two poor girls who just had bad luck being there at the wrong time to do a selfie....only to end up as Eve's lunch...or dinner given. Poor Eve for she's seems cursed to her fate as a sad predator. One that doesn't get to go to a spa. XD
Now design wise, seems to me your work on Eve's body posture seemed much more preportionnate than before and I also noticed her hair was also done well too. God she has good hair for it looks nice that way. Back on how you did her body, she seems a bit more curvy than before and I mean it in a good way. Her feet and hands are what I saw with the most improvement from what I see.
Lastly I saw the way the comic progress along with Eve's expressions on each panel. Especially when she at the end was moaning about what she accidently done. Seriously Eve's expressions each tell that she wasn't having fun. That and the thought bubbles you put through on each panel was handled nicely for Eve. You really improved how you did each expression and it shows...good work.
Seriously CC. You really done a good job with Eve's comic on this one. Seriously I hoped to see more like this...Eve or otherwise. I mean it would show what you would do when you do put into the next project. Laters and keep up the hard work.
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
Posted by Zego21 8 years ago Report
she can never catch a break can she?
Posted by Kreed360 8 years ago Report
What're you talking about? She got a break!
It was right there in the top step!!! :D
Posted by Zego21 8 years ago Report
yeah but that didn't last long
Posted by Speedyblupi 8 years ago Report
I think you misunderstood the pun.
Posted by Kreed360 8 years ago Report
accidental vore, definitly at the top of the situational vores!
And I guess if she wants to break this addiction, she should try to avoid the 12 step programs!
Posted by Olive 8 years ago Report
That tooooooootally doesn't count. Gravity pushed them in >.> Eve had no say in the matter, probably!
Posted by Orchestration 8 years ago Report
They are in your belly now and that spa trip is out the window, so might as well digest them and treat your self a little.
Posted by DARK13 8 years ago Report
Is like when you do diet in the real life XD funny :D
Posted by DARK13 8 years ago Report
Is like when you do diet in the real life XD funny :D
Posted by JessicaRae 8 years ago Report
When life gives you lemons...hope you're not Eve because even those lemons will be huge and make her belly big knowing her odds. :V
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
better yet, they're just people dressed up as lemons cosplaying as a fruit salad!
Posted by JessicaRae 8 years ago Report
lol Eve wouldn't be thinking "better yet" unlike you. XD
Posted by CratedCheese 8 years ago Report
Nah she'd just be thinking "WHYYYYYYYYY?!'
Posted by JessicaRae 8 years ago Report
lol Poor dear. =w=
Posted by Megachu2465 8 years ago Report
Silly Eve, that's not how a stairs.
Posted by Speedyblupi 8 years ago Report
Definitely not into this, but faved for the lulz.
Posted by voidrunner 7 years ago Report
This reminds me of that family guy episode xD
Posted by TristenDS21 4 years ago Report
Life in action
Posted by Plume7 4 years ago Report
Yeah, I hate it when I can’t make my cheat day, too.