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The time has finally come for Hydra to let Sandy free. And on Christmas no less.

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Here it is! A story written mostly during the day, rather than while trying to sleep. A continuation of this series: https://aryion.com/g4/view/313448 . I hope you like it. And Happy Holidays!

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TheTastefulGentlman

Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 8 years ago Report

This story did more for my heart than my libido very sweet.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Most of my recent stuff has been quick grab and gulp, so I took some time to ladle in some emotion this time.

HungryAL

Posted by HungryAL 8 years ago Report

This was beautiful, I'm glad Dorothy found Hydra in the end.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Me too.

SSJBura

Posted by SSJBura 8 years ago Report

Hydra and Dorothy are so sweet together! So glad they are together (in more than a few ways).
Bleh, Sally is just the absolute worst!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Every now and then the challenge becomes finding a way to make character rotten enough to deserve what he/she gets.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report

Aww, a sweet end despite Sandy finally getting to reveal her true colors again. Good riddance to her. I'm glad you finally worked out a way to resolve the romantic triangle here. And I really liked the bits with Dorothy's gifts to Hydra, especially her fascination with the wrapping paper.

Though now I'm going to hope we eventually get to see Hydra & Dorothy's first date now that Dorothy knows how Hydra feels. I'm pretty sure that they could get up to all sorts of fun and interesting things together.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

Yeah. I love thinking about the things that a non-human creature might get wrong in dealing with human traditions.

giblieherps

Posted by giblieherps 8 years ago Report

I loved it and can't wait for more as well.

TootCore

Posted by TootCore 8 years ago Report

Oh dear. I think we need to see a slice of life from these two sweet lovebirds now.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

That WOULD be pretty cute.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 8 years ago Report

I'm looking forward to more of this one too, now that we can finally get somewhere, in Dorothy and Hydra's relationship. I hope that you haven't run out of ideas, now that Sandy's not involved anymore.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

It was suggested in other comments that slice-of-life stuff and an actual date could happen now. Dorothy and Hydra had, until now, had a very odd relationship. Friendly, sharing chats, but only one-sidedly romantic. Now, as you say, they can move forward, which to a degree means starting over.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 8 years ago Report

Starting over seems reasonable, Hydra might be sure of her feelings towards Dorothy, but Dorothy is just starting to return those feelings, and I doubt either one yet understands exactly how their relationship is going to work. I look forward to seeing what direction the next installment takes them.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 8 years ago Report

One thing in particular that would interest me, is for Hydra to end up inside of Dorothy, but in a way that wouldn't harm either of them, if such a thing is possible.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report

I can think of a few heartwarming situations where that might occur.