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All Rathi the lamia wanted was sex, but Uvuzi wanted a mate, and her high standards lead her to test him to see whether he should be a lover, or lunch.
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Posted by TongueCuddlingLouse 8 years ago Report
Another fantastic story as usual dude! Really hope later on there'll be a visual to accompany this great peice!
Posted by Ethereal 8 years ago Report
Better than Stega's average, imo.
Posted by ouphe 8 years ago Report
KOBOLDS!
Posted by Strega 8 years ago Report
They appear in some other Uvuzi stories and even a drawing or two.
Posted by ouphe 8 years ago Report
I know, but this story was much more 'dawwww' with their interaction with Uvuzi.
Posted by Ethereal 8 years ago Report
Too bad for Rathi. See what happens when your wis score is your dump stat.
Posted by Strega 8 years ago Report
Young, dumb and full of cum leads to Uvuzi being full of you. 83
Posted by Fischie 8 years ago Report
This is a really nice story. i like how it loops all the way around and shows so many sides of Uvuzi.
Posted by princessziva 8 years ago Report
I just want to say. Bravo. Very nice story to read (though a few grammar mistakes here and there but not to the point where it hindered reading). I just wanted to say the way you ended the story, by reiterating the start the way you did. To me that shows you have the skill of an artist. An artist of words. Look forward to the next one!
Posted by Strega 8 years ago Report
No matter how many times I proofread a story I always miss some typos, and I don't have a grammar checker. It's weird how I see the errors instantly when I read the story on a mobile device, though.
Posted by princessziva 8 years ago Report
Even though you want to get it posted like asap. Take a day off before proofreading. Like that your mind isnt focussed on writing anymore and you can spot the mistakes easier ^^ Not sure if that will mess up your schedule though.
Posted by Allard-Liao 8 years ago Report
If you ever need a beta reader, I'd be happy to help.
Posted by Serwin 5 years ago Report
I really enjoyed this story.
Posted by Strega 5 years ago Report
Uvuzi is fun to write. I like snek preds but mostly furry ones. 83