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This is my first story on this website so please give me some suggestions on what I should fix and such. Thank you~!
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Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
Thank you anyone who puts any Tag Suggestions! I was really tired when I made this x)!
Posted by 2littlebigcreepers 7 years ago Report
This is good for a first time. Any story I try to make just looks like a load of cringe. Well done.
Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment~ I liked your story! :)
Posted by 2littlebigcreepers 7 years ago Report
Is there going to be more yuri in the future?
Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
Most likely yes! Tho my favorite girl is Sayori~ So I might make a Sayori story soon.
Posted by 2littlebigcreepers 7 years ago Report
Alright cant wait till the next one.
Posted by dragonvenom 7 years ago Report
Its pretty good the only issue is that aloy of the sentences are fragments that you could have easily combined together. Still very good work for a fellow new writer.
Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
If you like, You can pm some edits to it and I will change it and give you credit in the comment!
Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
I meant description. Sorry!
Posted by dragonvenom 7 years ago Report
Maybe but i got quite a few stories planned.
Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
Alright, If you ever feel like it don't be afraid to send me a message :)
Posted by dragonvenom 7 years ago Report
I will and please check out my stories as well be sure to comment on them it helps.
Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
Alrighty!
Posted by Deleteduser89324b 7 years ago Report
Nice work, Do you take requests?
Posted by Zaneisweird 7 years ago Report
Yes I do, Just pm info!