Posted by sweetladyamy 6 years ago Report

(mussels)

There's not much to say, other than 'Hot Damn...'

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

They're living an interesting life, those two.

Posted by SSJBura 6 years ago Report

I love the relationship these two are building together! So cute and fun and just WOW,

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Yeah. This pair are a good influence on each other... for the most part.

Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report

I need to reread this series, starting at the beginning. Very excited to see a new one out!

Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report

Okay, this was beautiful, and also wondrously enticing. I loved the area-lowered-inhibitions thing, and I do like the soft guarantee of no ill consequences for those involved, because it tells me that at least, no one is being pushed to do something they wouldn't or truly shouldn't.

Seriously, this was a lot of my most favorite fantasies in one, together with the sweet romance.

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it! This was a story that just sort of kept going. Groblek gets the credit for the broad strokes of the story.

I'm trying to layer this setting with plenty of permission, combined with her intuition for what people truly want, to more or less make sure that non-villainous characters only end up getting pleasure and new experiences.

Posted by Goblingobler 6 years ago Report

I love these two lovely gfs :3

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Me too!

Posted by Groblek 6 years ago Report

I love where you went with that idea I tossed your way. I really like the dynamic between them here, and the way that they’re helping each other grow as they get closer - first Majesca helping Eden get in better touch with herself in earlier stories, and now Eden encouraging Majesca to think about and fulfill her own desires as she grants Eden’s wishes.

I thought the dance scene was a great example of that. It’s also clear that life is going to be quite interesting for the bystanders who happen to interact with these two lovebirds. :)

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I'm glad you were satisfied with the result! I kinda want them to periodically run into people that crossed paths with them before and more who may or may not have had some semi-permanent changes to their lives and bodies as a result.

Posted by Adseria 6 years ago Report

Grammar nazi time!

Did the waitress have writing on her face? I've never heard the phrase "her face was read" before...

On the Uber ride, I don't see how losing your ambitions would make you want to have public sex.

Posted by Adseria 6 years ago Report

"A pair of legs causally slipped between her legs."

I don't normally have problems with time travel logic, but this one's got me stumped.

Posted by Adseria 6 years ago Report

And yet, the ending is perfectly fine...

2 other things. First is a tiny issue; it would have been nice to know the colour of the dress. You mentioned the red and gold highlights, but not the main colour.

Second, I hope we're going to see more of Maye.

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Yeah, Maye might need to show up again. She's clearly a creative young woman.

Posted by Adseria 6 years ago Report

Of course, a third wheel isn't always a bad thing ;)

Posted by RLord4268 6 years ago Report

Fantastic!

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by Threadzless 6 years ago Report

These two are so cute together I love watching them help each other discover themselves

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

They're a fun couple.

Posted by thisgirlroolzz 6 years ago Report

WOW! that was really wonderful, I could see and feel everything you wrote in my mind, the surest sign of a wonderful and talented writer!!!! Please keep writing this story dont stop now!!!!

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I'm glad you liked it! There were a few ideas in here that I really enjoyed describing.