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Eden wonders just what goes on in Majesca's head. Majesca helps her out with that.

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This story was written for and edited by  C107galaxytachyon. If you liked the story and/or the level of polish, you know who to thank.

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Whereaminow27

Posted by Whereaminow27 6 years ago Report

Yes, Another one. WOooo

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report

Thnk you editor-san

AllRightAllNight

Posted by AllRightAllNight 6 years ago Report

This is really good. Even without the smut stuff it's a fascinating exploration of consent and agency. And the smut stuff is great too, of course.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

When it was pitched, it was mostly as an analysis of free will. But, hey, it's one of my stories. Someone's ending up in someone else at some point.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 6 years ago Report

Ooh, nice! This is a fun installment of the series, and a great way for Eden and Majesca to get to understand each other a little better.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

It's like walking a mile in someone else's shoes, except everyone's naked.

It is just now striking me that this story includes essentially 24 unsupervised hours of Majesca in control of Eden's body. Potential for shenanigans? Very high.

Goblingobler

Posted by Goblingobler 6 years ago Report

Very fun story! :3

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

thisgirlroolzz

Posted by thisgirlroolzz 6 years ago Report

WOW! I know I use that word alot when it comes to your stories but its a true emotion given word form! I love your genie stories and hope you will do more very very soon, this pair is amazing, I feel like you could write a book about them and still there would be volumes that could still be written about them, I feel everything a well written character feels in a book, so you can imagine all that I can feel with these characters! Thank you for writing this!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

I'm so glad you like it! I've got one or two more Genie stories lined up. They're a good pair that seem to have captured the imaginations of a few folks here, as they are easily the characters who have spawned the most writing commissions from other people.

Threadzless

Posted by Threadzless 5 years ago Report

I never would of expected a smutty interspecies exploration of free will and duty to exist much less be fun to read. Bravo!! Any chance the next one will be about Majesca getting into hijinks now that she has freedom and no magic?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

Well, they swapped back, but she had a good 24 hours unsupervised, so I'm sure there's a story in there.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report

Very interesting and enjoyable! The characters' perspectives, their needs and impulses, felt real and vivid. It felt easy to empathise with both, despite their differences.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you liked it. It was my goal to make both of them realize how the other felt.

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 2 years ago Report

"...and I'll still call you Eden. Not Mistress, though. Becausefor now, I am the mistress."

Huh. Doesn't make much sense for a genie to have an aversion to sand.