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A simple Felaryan tale, of a mermaid who needs to swim up a river. It follows on from the events of Story 193.
Mina belongs to PrinnyDood. Tarynn belongs to SimonLorimer.
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Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
Mina's adorable, isn't she? So sweet and shy. So proud of her illusions. And now she's made another friend!
Great work as always.
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
Thanks! Yes, she's a sweetheart. :) Tarynn never really becomes friends with anyone though, as Mina will find out...
Posted by Fischie 6 years ago Report
A really interesting and well written story. I liked how Mina would regard small elves a tasty treat yet helped the large one out. She is so kind yet predatory.
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
Thank you! Yes, although she very much has a personality of her own, she's quite representative of a certain Felaryan mindset: good-hearted, but seeing nothing wrong in eating littles.
Posted by Fischie 6 years ago Report
I liked this two sidedness a lot. Her clenching on half digested mers as she spotted the elf was my favourite.