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This story continues on from Story 204.
The characters Elli and Charles belong to TheWiking2000.
Mina belongs to PrinnyDood-Abides.
Tarynn belongs to SimonLorimer.
Caylin, Tinatalan and Anko belong to Karbo, as does Felarya itself.
Other characters are my own.
Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/503318
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Posted by zobabu 6 years ago Report
Lovely story. The contrast from the innocent conversations between our Felaryan ladies to the viewpoint of their food inside their mouthes and bellies was really well delivered. You also nail the onomatopoeia, which makes the vore scenes even more exciting.
And I'm always down to see Tina and Caylin feeding each other some tastly morsels :3
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
Thank you. It's a contrast I still enjoy portraying, and that I hadn't done much recently. As for gurgling tummies, I wish there were more of them in stories. ;)
Posted by zobabu 6 years ago Report
Oh well I'm actually gonna release my first vore story later this week on D.A. and it will feature a pair of gurgling stomachs as well, so if you're interested give it a shot maybe ;D
Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report
Giantess high heels. You monster.
Love this from start to finish, though; Anko was a delight, and I enjoy the straightforwardness between potential predator and potential prey.
Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report
Thanks! Yes, the interactions between pred and prey when they can actually converse, with a mutual recognition of some type of personhood, can be an... interesting dynamic to explore.