Ragnarok'd by Asaneman

Posted by CarnivorousVixen 6 years ago Report

Hips, tits, thighs, you're so good at all of theeem

Those thighs must sound wonderful smacking together

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Posted by Bellyl0ver 6 years ago Report

Dem thighs.

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Posted by ocarinaofbudder 6 years ago Report

Looooove it yo keep it up!

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Posted by Asaneman 6 years ago Report

Hey thanks!

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Posted by ocarinaofbudder 6 years ago Report

No prob yo

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Posted by BlueIce 6 years ago Report

Wow this was a great sequence. Love how she taunted her prey the entire time~

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Posted by cheeseandmango 6 years ago Report

His icon going from him being panicked to her belly cracked me up. Lovely work and thanks for posting!

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Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report

Well hot damn, Asaneman. I knew you were easily one of the best artists on Eka's (maybe not a high benchmark all things considered), and one of my favorites on FA, but I didn't think you could pull of something like this, 'specially not with a human character.

Now, I dunno anything about Granblue, but I like the really soft shading on her skin in each frame. It makes her look squishy and soft. And I think how you drew her face, the shape and placement of features, is well done despite you doing far more furry content than human ones. I also really like just how massive her thighs get in comparison to like everything else on her, the implication her bust got too large and it popped her top off, and that she's got a perfectly flat stomach at the end of this sequence. Little more fun than the belly fat outcome I think. Really like the colour usage for her hair too, it pops out.

That said, something about her mouth, where it's placed on her face and near her chin, feels like it could've used a bit of placement adjusting. A little more movement out of her would've been appreciated to see as well, namely her tail.

All in all though I chalk this up to a really rousing success. I wish you drew more humans but, hey beggars can't be choosers! Good stuff Asaneman, really good stuff.

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Posted by Asaneman 6 years ago Report

Hey, appreciate the feedback and critique! Note taken on the mouth, had some other folk comment on it as well. Gotta practice them more for sure. And I feel you on movement, would've done much more if I had the time. Got commissions I need to be focusing on, spent too much on this as is.

And hey, hopefully there will be more humans to come! They're a great change of pace from furry art, and it'd be real nice to get good at them.

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Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report

Glad to see I wasn't the only one who noticed the mouth issue. If I had to guess, solution would actually be to move her nose more to the left of her face, and shift the chin a little more to the right. I think the mouth itself is fine, it just might be the features around it. As for the time issue, aahh that's fair. Damned if we couldn't see even more though!

I'll hold yah to seeing more humans now, Asaneman. Fingers crossed you get some comms for them! Or just draw 'em yourself when you get some free time, if push comes to shove.

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Posted by Asaneman 6 years ago Report

Hey, I'll try and get it fixed --
https://imgur.com/a/GwZCxhG
The "1" is the new version. Is this any better? Does the chin need more adjusting?

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Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report

Whew, sorry for the delay, my good man. Never know when people respond to me on here, hah.

The chin edit is fairly subtle, but it's definitely a move in the right direction. It just out less, and the perspective seems like it'd line up more. The original, if we saw her face forward directly, the chin would look a bit more pointy and long by comparison. Chin, I would say, is as perfect as can be, without a complete redraw of course.

The nose definitely looks better in the new position though. I was thinking of moving it MUCH further to the left originally, but at this point it'd probably only need a little more to the left, and I'd say it would be perfect.

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Posted by Asaneman 6 years ago Report

Hey, found the time today and went through the image and made fixes to each panel, alongside the non-UI versions in the WIPs.

Thanks again for the feedback, and if you see any issues with future works please let me know!

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Posted by hibbyjibby 6 years ago Report

Man, sounds like finding time is a real pain in the rear for yah huh? But I say it benefit you real greatly.

In the edited images, her face's new chin works far better for how far her cheek naturally bulges out. Gives her a softer feminine look to her face. Really like the subtle, tiny drool detail too. And the new nose position works a lot better too, it's less pushed out and implying like she's got a really big schnoz of a nose. Human noses ain't the same as anthro snouts. Go figure, huh?

But hey anytime, Asaneman! I doubt you get a lotta feedback and critiques and all that so, I'm definitely gonna keep my eyes peeled on your content, and actually follow instead of just lurk.

Though I will say, human content'll always get my interests, hah.

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