I do have to agree with MAS though. Rarity or Twilight. I just have preferences towards non fatal. But I think that Fluttershy already had a story exactly like that.
Applejack's is just so blatantly simple and as they point out, done before, so no on that.
Rainbow's sounds fun and all, and I'd love to see you do cock-vore, but I have to say that some "frills" make the "thrills" better.
Twilight's is...probably one I wouldn't mind seeing, but not the one that really gets my attention. Rarity's simply displays more of everything I like in comparison even if Twilight's is interesting.
Fluttershy...I feel bad for her, especially since she's going to be eaten in two of the scenarios and that isn't her thing, but as takugenji said that exact idea has been done before, the only difference being the motivation for Harry eating her. I admittedly am also not into non-fatal in most cases, so there's that. I must agree with Pinkie, it is a hot and cute idea (like the mare who made it!) and I'm sure you'd find a way to make it interesting Albany!
Well, those are my thoughts and the vote I cast due to them.
Twilght:classic story
Rarity:5 minutes is too long, like the jar idea
Pinkie Pie:love the idea
Applejack:boring
Rainbow Dash:Too much action
Fluttershy:bears don't get enough love, but it's non-fatal
Twilght, Rarity, or Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie's idea is a good one. Gives the viewer a nice look at the progress, and better sound than from the outside so they would actually know how Pinkie feel about her final moments. Maybe she's happy about it, maybe she really regrets it and wants it to end. No muffled sounds from the outside.
Not sure I see how Twilight's proposal can win, in-story. Rainbow, AJ and Pinkie all have other ones that they like more; and Fluttershy doesn't want any of her friends to die.
That said, Fluttershy's. I'm a sucker for happy endings, even in a context that makes no sense as presented.
Oh no, she was just making sure that Fluttershy would still let herself get melted down should Rarity's idea won. Although just doing that no matter what is kinda hot...
It'd be odd if neither noticed what they actually agreed to; but you're the author.
Which would be hotter, though? Rarity convincing Fluttershy to keep the agreement even though she hadn't meant to make it? Or Fluttershy going to Rarity's to keep it, finding out that Rarity hadn't mean it that way at all, but ending up doing it anyway just to make completely sure that Rarity's happy and not disappointed?
Thinking further, if Twi and Rarity can get the funds together they might also end up doing Twilight's idea regardless of the vote (though possibly with some creative compromises). After which, Rarity and Pinkie both seem pretty interested in becoming pegasus cum. Then the only question left is whether Rainbow and AJ can agree on whether the latter should be manure or cum.
Hypothetically, Rarity could win and Fluttershy gets cummed into a jar. Twi funds her project and goes through with it, Rainbow agrees to turn AJ into manure, and finally Rainbow has a scaled down version of her video with the survivors.
Up to you what you think is most interesting. Personally, I'd be at least equally interested in a story explaining why all of that didn't happen.
Rainbow seems to be winning the vote regardless, though; which would just leave the question of what she does next. I wonder what her relationships with Gilda, Scootaloo, the Wonderbolts, and her parents are like in this setting (if it can be considered coherent enough to be called that).
For me it's between Rainbowdash's idea and Pinkies. But I think I'll vote for Rainbow's if for no other reason then to see what all of them (Or however many of them fit) do with each other once they're in there.
I'll be honest and say I'm surprised there's any votes for Twilight, I tried to make hers the most ridiculous and least actually arousing of the ideas because Twilight is a loveable dork. Guess people really just like to see her nommed! Also I like your stuff~
Speaking for myself: it's happy, romantic vore with a (somewhat) original concept and setting, and you basically advertise that it'd be a massive pain to try to write.
I like rainbow dash's idea, but instead of voring fluttershy, have dash blow her load in fluttershy so she can digest her friends, and let her help kill her other friends.
I vote Rainbow Dash's idea because I like seeing more MLP cock vore with multiple prey OwO (Or there could be a lot more and I just have no clue where to look aside from Eka's and Derpibooru)
rarity first and for all or all of the above it might be more fun and better in general fairness for everyone if you made an alternate ending and did each one in a separate out cuum get it, oh forget it just does rarity
Seems to me like Rainbow's idea is the only one creating mutual exclusivity to begin with, and it could just be amended to cockvoring the ones left at the end.
Potential timeline:
Harry eats Fluttershy.
Rainbow eats AJ and poops her out for all to see.
Discord the 50 foot whatever eats Pinkie, helps save Fluttershy.
Rarity eats Twilight while cockvoring Fluttershy.
Rainbow cockvores Rarity, Harry, and Discord the 50 foot whatever.
Heh, I was thinking that Rarity would get cockvored while Twi is still barely digested, but maybe instead, Twi is poop ready to exit and Rarity wants to hold her in, but as she's Dash's first victim, the cock is still narrow and constricts her, forcing what's left of Twi to exit in a very unladylike display right onto the AJ pile before Rarity can finish going in.
Can pony dicks (or balls) tear? It'd certainly be a twist if that happened; whether from a bear or not. Maybe she dies of shock/blood loss, while at least some her prey survive, and they sell the video as gore/shock footage. Or she survives, but loses her dick and/or gets put off cock vore for life.
I wonder what the effects of partial cumgestion would be like.
Further thoughts on this are that it may need some diversification of vore methods and spicing up. Rarity's bit stands out as being rather redundant.
For instance, maybe Rarity can't resist tonguing both holes just before she's about to swallow Twi's rear, going offscript to give her pretend love a good last time. Twilight might be rather annoyed at that (it's a complete violation of what she wrote, as well as her person), but her only means of fighting back would be to fart during orgasm on Rarity's tongue!
And Rarity probably would be more natural at unbirthing Fluttershy than cockvoring her, due to her being ladylike and Fluttershy being really into warm and nurturing stuff.
Then Dash would ruin it all with her massive hungry member.
Dash'll need a title if she wins. If all the good generic ones are taken, how about something unique to her; like Rainbow Rampage, or some combination of Cerulean/Chromatic/CyanCockvore/Carnage?
If Rainbow wins, I hope she compromises with Pinkie by letting her take a camera, if not all the other equipment. Maybe plant her balls under a lamp to provide some light.
AlbanyExpression wrote: Applejack stood up next. “Now, maybe it’s just because I’m a simple farm pony,” she began, “but ah like my vore nice and simple. Like Granny used to do.”
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“If I had a bit for every video that ended with some farmer pony being spread across their own fields, I wouldn’t have to run a business,” continued Rarity, with a bored look on her face. “It’s a bit of a worn trope, darling.”
“I dunno what wearing tripe’s gotta do with this,” replied AJ, stomping a hoof on her chair, “but what I do know is that nothing gets me going more than imagining myself as a fresh load of manure, helpin’ to grow the land that I worked all my life.”
“I understand where you’re coming from Applejack,” said Twilight, “and I’m not saying that you shouldn’t want to end up as shit for your fields. That’s your choice.”
“A gross choice…” muttered Rainbow to the side.
“But to everypony else, it’s just be one more farm pony video ending with disposal.”
“What’s so wrong with that? Maybe those videos are popular for a reason, Twilight?”
This whole sequence makes me wonder what exactly happened to this version of Applejack's parents.
Posted by Skeletaldragin1 6 years ago Report
I like Rainbow Dash idea
Posted by M.A.S 6 years ago Report
Its a tie between Rarity and Twilight
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Wouldn't Spike just break the tie by choosing Rarity, then?
Posted by takugenji 6 years ago Report
I'm much more of a Fluttershy type person. Love me some non fatal. It just isn't done enough as it is. Wish it was done more.
Posted by takugenji 6 years ago Report
I do have to agree with MAS though. Rarity or Twilight. I just have preferences towards non fatal. But I think that Fluttershy already had a story exactly like that.
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
A Comfort Most Bearable? Doesn't match exactly, but it's the only result I see for Bear, Fluttershy.
Posted by joshfang96 6 years ago Report
I really love Fluttershy's idea. (Although I like both disposal and non-fatal) So, my vote is all on my favorite butter horse!:3
Posted by ShinMegamiDerpy 6 years ago Report
Fluttershy.
Posted by supersin 6 years ago Report
I gotta go with Rarity. Love me some remains on display.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
I'd like to just say that remains being displayed is one of my favourite things in vore
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
+1.
Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 6 years ago Report
I’ve got to go with Fluttershy
Posted by BumbleRibombee 6 years ago Report
Rainbow Dash, 100%
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
I can't decide between Pinkie's and Rarity's.
Applejack's is just so blatantly simple and as they point out, done before, so no on that.
Rainbow's sounds fun and all, and I'd love to see you do cock-vore, but I have to say that some "frills" make the "thrills" better.
Twilight's is...probably one I wouldn't mind seeing, but not the one that really gets my attention. Rarity's simply displays more of everything I like in comparison even if Twilight's is interesting.
Fluttershy...I feel bad for her, especially since she's going to be eaten in two of the scenarios and that isn't her thing, but as takugenji said that exact idea has been done before, the only difference being the motivation for Harry eating her. I admittedly am also not into non-fatal in most cases, so there's that. I must agree with Pinkie, it is a hot and cute idea (like the mare who made it!) and I'm sure you'd find a way to make it interesting Albany!
Well, those are my thoughts and the vote I cast due to them.
Posted by TheShadow 6 years ago Report
Rainbow Dash and Rarity's idea are my fav, I just like CV :p
Posted by ANW 6 years ago Report
Twilght:classic story
Rarity:5 minutes is too long, like the jar idea
Pinkie Pie:love the idea
Applejack:boring
Rainbow Dash:Too much action
Fluttershy:bears don't get enough love, but it's non-fatal
Twilght, Rarity, or Pinkie Pie.
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Posted by Killjoy364 6 years ago Report
either rainbow or rarity's idea
Posted by Rathalos122 6 years ago Report
Rainbows
Posted by Hibben 6 years ago Report
Pinkie's idea is a good one. Gives the viewer a nice look at the progress, and better sound than from the outside so they would actually know how Pinkie feel about her final moments. Maybe she's happy about it, maybe she really regrets it and wants it to end. No muffled sounds from the outside.
Posted by Twisty22 6 years ago Report
AJ's is the best.
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Not sure I see how Twilight's proposal can win, in-story. Rainbow, AJ and Pinkie all have other ones that they like more; and Fluttershy doesn't want any of her friends to die.
That said, Fluttershy's. I'm a sucker for happy endings, even in a context that makes no sense as presented.
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Just to be clear: Rarity is going to melt Fluttershy down no matter who (apart from Rainbow) wins?
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Oh no, she was just making sure that Fluttershy would still let herself get melted down should Rarity's idea won. Although just doing that no matter what is kinda hot...
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
It'd be odd if neither noticed what they actually agreed to; but you're the author.
Which would be hotter, though? Rarity convincing Fluttershy to keep the agreement even though she hadn't meant to make it? Or Fluttershy going to Rarity's to keep it, finding out that Rarity hadn't mean it that way at all, but ending up doing it anyway just to make completely sure that Rarity's happy and not disappointed?
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Thinking further, if Twi and Rarity can get the funds together they might also end up doing Twilight's idea regardless of the vote (though possibly with some creative compromises). After which, Rarity and Pinkie both seem pretty interested in becoming pegasus cum. Then the only question left is whether Rainbow and AJ can agree on whether the latter should be manure or cum.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Hmmm...
Hypothetically, Rarity could win and Fluttershy gets cummed into a jar. Twi funds her project and goes through with it, Rainbow agrees to turn AJ into manure, and finally Rainbow has a scaled down version of her video with the survivors.
Sound doable...
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
That could also all happen if Twilight, AJ or Fluttershy wins.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Thanks for the sequel ideas!
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Up to you what you think is most interesting. Personally, I'd be at least equally interested in a story explaining why all of that didn't happen.
Rainbow seems to be winning the vote regardless, though; which would just leave the question of what she does next. I wonder what her relationships with Gilda, Scootaloo, the Wonderbolts, and her parents are like in this setting (if it can be considered coherent enough to be called that).
Posted by jjlava 6 years ago Report
For me it's between Rainbowdash's idea and Pinkies. But I think I'll vote for Rainbow's if for no other reason then to see what all of them (Or however many of them fit) do with each other once they're in there.
Posted by sjed 6 years ago Report
Dash knows what's up!
Posted by sheppard74 6 years ago Report
Well, can't really decide between Twilight, Rarity and Rainbow Dash.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
I'll be honest and say I'm surprised there's any votes for Twilight, I tried to make hers the most ridiculous and least actually arousing of the ideas because Twilight is a loveable dork. Guess people really just like to see her nommed! Also I like your stuff~
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Speaking for myself: it's happy, romantic vore with a (somewhat) original concept and setting, and you basically advertise that it'd be a massive pain to try to write.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
I'll have fun writing a script in iambic pentameter, haha.
Whatever I do next will be more of a "behind the scenes" thing than just playing the winning idea straight, but I'll still try to show most of it.
Posted by WorkInProgress 6 years ago Report
Definitely a vote for Rarity
A vote for Pinkie because we need Discord eating more pones
Posted by Zahnrad 6 years ago Report
Can we see Spike get cock vored? Either accidentally or intentionally.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
"Spike the Dragon tragically fell inside a cock during filming. He will be cummed into a memorial condom tomorrow."
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
I do hope he at least has a satisfying horror/panic reaction and refuses to accept it when Rainbow's proposal wins.
Posted by Ihatehater1994 6 years ago Report
I like rainbow dash's idea, but instead of voring fluttershy, have dash blow her load in fluttershy so she can digest her friends, and let her help kill her other friends.
Posted by Yuki_Akuma 6 years ago Report
I vote Rarity or Rainbow Dash... mostly because I want to see Fluttershy get murdered by her friends, the poor thing. <3
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Judging by how Rarity and RD are such popular choices, you're clearly not alone there. Sorry Flutters, you're odds on to end up as cum for the sequel!
Posted by peteian 6 years ago Report
I vote Rainbow Dash's idea because I like seeing more MLP cock vore with multiple prey OwO (Or there could be a lot more and I just have no clue where to look aside from Eka's and Derpibooru)
Posted by LightSpeed 6 years ago Report
My vote's on Rainbow's Option, as long as it's Fatal Vore. >=3
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Casual Fatal vore best vore
Posted by LightSpeed 6 years ago Report
Yup, indeed. XD
Posted by matthewthawes 6 years ago Report
rarity first and for all or all of the above it might be more fun and better in general fairness for everyone if you made an alternate ending and did each one in a separate out cuum get it, oh forget it just does rarity
Posted by Stanku 6 years ago Report
What a funny and clever idea and pleasing execution to boot! Haven't finished reading yet but I'm excited to do so I can vote for the fave~
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Haha, thank you very much!
Posted by Chaosborn 6 years ago Report
My vote is for either ranbow, or rarity.
Posted by Slimshod 6 years ago Report
Definitely Rainbow or Rarity's. I like the idea of Rainbow spooging them out all over the place.
Posted by Nebbie 6 years ago Report
Seems to me like Rainbow's idea is the only one creating mutual exclusivity to begin with, and it could just be amended to cockvoring the ones left at the end.
Potential timeline:
Harry eats Fluttershy.
Rainbow eats AJ and poops her out for all to see.
Discord the 50 foot whatever eats Pinkie, helps save Fluttershy.
Rarity eats Twilight while cockvoring Fluttershy.
Rainbow cockvores Rarity, Harry, and Discord the 50 foot whatever.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
I'm very amused at the idea of Rainbow being annoyed she has to try and cockvore a bear now. "Oh come on, you're gonna tear my dick in half!"
Posted by Nebbie 6 years ago Report
Worse if Discord keeps everypony alive temporarily until Rainbow's done, so they can all egg her on, even AJ as a pile of shit.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
AJ and Twilight as a pile of sentient turds cheering them on...
Posted by Nebbie 6 years ago Report
Heh, I was thinking that Rarity would get cockvored while Twi is still barely digested, but maybe instead, Twi is poop ready to exit and Rarity wants to hold her in, but as she's Dash's first victim, the cock is still narrow and constricts her, forcing what's left of Twi to exit in a very unladylike display right onto the AJ pile before Rarity can finish going in.
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
Can pony dicks (or balls) tear? It'd certainly be a twist if that happened; whether from a bear or not. Maybe she dies of shock/blood loss, while at least some her prey survive, and they sell the video as gore/shock footage. Or she survives, but loses her dick and/or gets put off cock vore for life.
I wonder what the effects of partial cumgestion would be like.
Posted by Nebbie 6 years ago Report
Further thoughts on this are that it may need some diversification of vore methods and spicing up. Rarity's bit stands out as being rather redundant.
For instance, maybe Rarity can't resist tonguing both holes just before she's about to swallow Twi's rear, going offscript to give her pretend love a good last time. Twilight might be rather annoyed at that (it's a complete violation of what she wrote, as well as her person), but her only means of fighting back would be to fart during orgasm on Rarity's tongue!
And Rarity probably would be more natural at unbirthing Fluttershy than cockvoring her, due to her being ladylike and Fluttershy being really into warm and nurturing stuff.
Then Dash would ruin it all with her massive hungry member.
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
Looks like you inspired someone.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Yup, talk to them on discord, fully with my permission. They did a great job!
Posted by sevensix 6 years ago Report
No need; I believe you.
Posted by emilbootanimefreak 6 years ago Report
I'm voting for Rainbbow Dash
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
Dash'll need a title if she wins. If all the good generic ones are taken, how about something unique to her; like Rainbow Rampage, or some combination of Cerulean/Chromatic/Cyan Cockvore/Carnage?
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
If Rainbow wins, I hope she compromises with Pinkie by letting her take a camera, if not all the other equipment. Maybe plant her balls under a lamp to provide some light.
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
Personally, I like "Five-Cunt Cumshot" for Rainbow's idea. It puts the other characters in their proper place, as just fuel for Rainbow's feat.
Not that it needs to be so disrespectful to the actresses. There could be a dedication card at the end to pay tribute to the departed.
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
I know I keep coming back here, but:
This whole sequence makes me wonder what exactly happened to this version of Applejack's parents.
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
That's my second try at getting an ellipsis in brackets to work right. This time I'm leaving it.
Posted by AlbanyExpression 5 years ago Report
I like to imagine in any sort of vore-friendly scenario that 1) AJ ate her parents, and 2) this is a tradition that will one day happen to her
Posted by sevensix 5 years ago Report
Unless Rainbow eats her first, presumably.
So when she says "Like Granny used to do", she means "...before Mom did it to her"?
Posted by RobotBeholder 2 years ago Report
Who won?