Maybe they can eventually eat their way out? And the commissioner requested the story based entirely upon this image: https://aryion.com/g4/view/477018
This was a fun read. If interested, it would be nice to see a continuation of this. Possibly either the girls inside decided to eat their way out, leaving them with two squirming bellies of one pizza girl or perhaps someone comes over and starving decides to eat Pepper and free the girls.
Ah. Well I wouldn't mind commissioning a sequel. I actually have some fun ideas myself. Maybe whenever you open i up again i could show you tbe ideas ^^
Posted by sweetladyamy 5 years ago Report
I couldn't help but laugh at this; this was hilarious. lolz
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it!
Posted by Peptidase 5 years ago Report
I love the idea for the pred. A semi-solid form really makes the containment feel more solid while still allowing for some fun flexibility.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Thanks! The commissioner got permission to request a story based on this character: https://aryion.com/g4/view/477018
Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
Hmm I wonder how she gets out of there, also what did you picture her entire appearance as? Like a pizza version of the majin from dragon ball maybe?
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Maybe they can eventually eat their way out? And the commissioner requested the story based entirely upon this image: https://aryion.com/g4/view/477018
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
The anthropomorphic pizza was unorthodox, but the permanent unwilling endosoma was right up my alley, so excellent work!
Two typos I spotted:
"For her, the harder part was finding the right to keep herself full"
Finding the right meal?
"She was wall and busty,"
tall?
Are you actually able to edit stories once they're posted? I don't have a gallery so don't know if it's possible or if you have to re-upload.
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Lol, just realised that I posted something similar on another story requested of you by gamdann (Fairy Treat), obviously we share good taste.
Also, did the name Pepper for the pizza girl come from this by any chance?
https://aryion.com/g4/view/477018
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
That is indeed the visual inspiration requested by the commissioner.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Fixed.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Permanent entrapment? Rough, beats digestion though
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Agreed.
Posted by Groblek 5 years ago Report
Well, that was different! Fun though - you have a knack for making the strangest ideas come out well.
Posted by marloweny 5 years ago Report
Yeah, it was a little outside my usual wheelhouse, but I'm glad it turned out well.
Posted by xnovusalpha001 5 years ago Report
Am I the only one who thought of C2 (or C.C.) from Code Geass when reading the title?
Posted by strongjimmy 4 years ago Report
This was a fun read. If interested, it would be nice to see a continuation of this. Possibly either the girls inside decided to eat their way out, leaving them with two squirming bellies of one pizza girl or perhaps someone comes over and starving decides to eat Pepper and free the girls.
But it's up to you. Can't wait for more!
Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report
Commissions are, alas, less likely to get sequels.
Posted by strongjimmy 4 years ago Report
Ah. Well I wouldn't mind commissioning a sequel. I actually have some fun ideas myself. Maybe whenever you open i up again i could show you tbe ideas ^^