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On Halloween night, a cheery blue alien girl commentates a 'nature documentary' set on earth, which involves filming voracious alien creatures preying upon the unsuspecting, costume-clad females of earth, for the enjoyment of viewers across the Milky Way!

Check out Part 1 and Part 2 if you're curious!

This final part features a massive, voracious blob-creature invading a mall-opening celebration, and a weird alien worm with spidery legs and tentacle-tongues. And lots of hapless, consume-clad young ladies, including a large number of sexy Asian pop-stars.

Well, here it is! The third and final part of this long-running series! I'm reasonably happy with this overall, and VERY glad to finally have the whole thing all finished up. Writing Avrinn's perky antics was a huge amount of fun, I must admit.

Anyway, hope you like it, and Happy Halloween, everyone!

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longwayofftiff

Posted by longwayofftiff 4 years ago Report

Loved it!! Will have to read again. Loved that we're mentioned!!! We're gaining clout!! Looks like we have some work to do. Hmm never had a J-Pop star on board. Avrinn is such a classic character, she and the Girls will have to meet face to face some time. Happy Halloween Prinny!!

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! That's high praise indeed that you think it's worth a second read, especially considering the length of this thing!

And of course I had to reference your Monster Removal Service team! Avrinn would absolutely be aware of your presence, even if she can't technically do much to stop you. It would be pretty entertaining to see her and the girls interact at some point, for sure.

Happy Halloween!

zobabu

Posted by zobabu 4 years ago Report

spooki

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

That is correct, sir! :D No better time for spooki than Halloween!

grz01

Posted by grz01 4 years ago Report

Good grief, incredibly hot particularly the stomach detail, many thanks

longwayofftiff

Posted by longwayofftiff 4 years ago Report

I KNOW!! I could so imagine getting coated in slippery lubricating slime as I'm helplessly sucked down the gooey esophagus and into the even slimier belly; pulsing and churning as it excitedly preps our smooth nubile bodies for the ministrations of alien digestion...

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Lewd. xD

But yeah, very happy you found those bits appropriately provocative, haha!

anais2000

Posted by anais2000 4 years ago Report

Same here. Sorry for not posting for so long, life has kept me busy. :)
Your descriptions of the "treatment" given to the YUMs (Yet Undigested Maidens) are always great and evocative.
Is Scylla a planet where women-devouring predators are abundant? Let's hope nobody opens a portal from Scylla to Earth...

longwayofftiff

Posted by longwayofftiff 4 years ago Report

I can answer that question! Yes, Scylla is like that. Don't worry, leave it us to turn that planet into a debris field. I'm afraid it's too dangerous to left there. And that Avrinn woman needs to be taught a lesson.

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Ohh, no worries, I 100% understand the real-life business issues! xD Very glad you liked this installment of my lewd creations though!

Yep, Scylla Prime is in a very dangerous, spatially unstable star system. A planet where most lifeforms have adapted highly unusual, reality-warping abilities . . . and a strange, currently-unexplained fixation on devouring hapless YUMs by the dozens. ;P

Galactic jurisdiction does not apply there, and any trespassers are cautioned that no distress calls from that region will be answered or acknowledged by any official government or law-enforcement agencies. Enter at your own risk.

(Yes. I am a huge nerd.)

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks. I really quite like the internal stomach scenes myself, as you might have guessed! x3

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

What a great finale to the series. The show was fantastic, although my personal favorite this time was the spider-like monster. The best part was probably how long you managed to drag out the question on whether Kiyomi would be eaten or not, she and the rest of her Japanese band was incredible hot, the Swedish girl was lucky to end up in such a company... when not dwelling too hard on the situation.

The epilogue was also fun seen the alien hostess divulge in some erotic pleasure whit her assistant while discussing the politics of their action^^
But where do I order her movies? I would really like to know.

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! :D

I was really happy with the Scyllian Megannelida bits myself, as well as the extended uncertainty over Kiyomi's fate. Japanese Idols are super hot, much of the time. x3

And of course, Avrinn is just a joy to write. She does love her work maybe almost a bit too much, but we certainly don't mind. :3

Xali

Posted by Xali 4 years ago Report

I haven't commented much but I've been a long time lurking fan and I'm so glad to see you're still at it. In terms of pure detail this is one of the best yet. The wry, wicked teasing tone that makes me love all of your stories even though it's not normally my favorite style of vore (e.g. giant invertebrate-type monsters) is at its strongest here, but I think the very best bit comes at the end where Avrinn, who is probably my favorite 'monster feeder' type character of yours, breezily justifies it all as a way to push reform while still watching all those lovely ladies right in the middle of digestion.

Was there a final count of how many women were claimed by the digestive systems of alien predators on account of Avrinn's cute little stunt?

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you've enjoyed my various works! :D

Avrinn is definitely a favorite of mine too! Something about her showmanship is just kinda irresistible. xD Not to mention her genuine enjoyment of the 'work' she does.

I dunno, Avrinn probably has a running tally somewhere, for those viewers fond of statistics, but ballparkwise:

Blogan Creepers: Can eat about 15 each.

Chordatian Diminishers: Smaller ones can eat 2-3 each, but the two adults probably devoured upwards of 60 each.

Scyllian Megannelida: A massive stomach capacity allows probably 75+ to fit.

The Glorb: Can consumed well over 1,000 human-sized prey in a single feeding, so . . . a lot.

longwayofftiff

Posted by longwayofftiff 4 years ago Report

We'll be overwhelmed by THAT many girls. We're not prepared for that kind of debriefing or recruiting pitch, good grief. Whatever, we will bravely do our job and take advantage of the free advertising. I'd imagine a night like this would get us millions of Instagram followers.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report

Although it began as 'more of the same' from an established series, this was fresh and enjoyable. Avrinn's antics are delightful as ever, with her... somewhat sensual enjoyment of her work, and her teasing of those startled young women. I can't blame her for enjoying the show on offer, of course! :D ("She bit her bottom lip and squeezed her legs together, heart fluttering in sensual anticipation.")

I like the thought of her luxuriating with a cold sweet drink and the satisfaction of a pleasurable job well done, feeling refreshed and comfy (and aroused!), while at the same time all those luscious ladies are wriggling around inside the tightly stuffed bellies of various creatures, beginning a long slow night of very intimate digestion.

The uncertainty around Kiyomi's fate was genuinely suspenseful, with twists and turns to ratchet up that suspense. I had no idea how it would end (no more idea than poor Kiyomi herself!), and I wasn't even entirely sure how I <I>wanted</I> it to turn out. Avrinn's own clear preference notwithstanding! :)

Her excited, lingering kiss on the almost-completely-eaten Kiyomi's mouth was something I confess I very much enjoyed. Yes to Avrinn teasing unlucky girls, caressing their face as they're eaten, tapping them playfully on the nose or on their bottom, and giving them a lustfully casual kiss of farewell!

The idea of it all subsequently being merchandised is, as you know, one I enjoy.

And then we have the simple delight of Xnixi! ""A lot of people sure do end up digested on the road to political reform". I like her light snark, her cute pouts - which she definitely knows how to use for advancement in her career. And a prehensile tongue that provides gently electric stimulation! She's like a cute Star Trek alien with... abilities that we wouldn't usually see there. ;)

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks a bunch!

It was a bit of a challenge to try and keep this series from getting too stale/repetitive, so I'm happy to hear you thought I managed to keep it all reasonable fresh.

Avrinn really is the best part of this whole series, and her sensual antics were easily the most fun to write. Especially where she's teasing/caressing the soon-to-be-devoured. x3

'Cute, X-rated Star Trek aliens' is actually an incredibly apt description of the extraterrestrial cast I've got going here! :D

Coolerer

Posted by Coolerer 2 years ago Report

And "that's not my fucking job" awrd goes to...
Avrinn!

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report

Haha, definitely fair! xD