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This is a Felarya story.
Tinatalan and the world of Felarya itself belong of course to :Karbo. Ciel belongs to Asuroth. Elli belongs to TheWiking2000. Nevenez belongs to mariusmule.
Nevenez' scene is best understood after reading this recent story by mariusmule: https://www.deviantart.com/mariusmule/art/The-Return-854354612 . In fact I wrote most of her scene before that story was published, then adjusted it in part.
Lixie, you might remember, first appears briefly in my story 220 (part 2): https://aryion.com/g4/view/535154 .
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Part 2: https://aryion.com/g4/view/632242
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Posted by nap25 4 years ago Report
Throughout all three parts of this story Calina is pretty comfortable with people who could eat her. I don't necessarily want her to die, but I wouldn't mind seeing her spend some time in a stomach. Remind her of some of the danger these giantesses pose to her. ;)
Posted by nap25 4 years ago Report
That's also one of the reasons I want to see Lea get eaten for a bit. Lol
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
Poor Léa! She's had a tough life enough already. :p Calina's aware of the risks, but yes, she's a bit of a risk-taker!
Posted by nap25 4 years ago Report
I don't want either of them to die, but for me vore is always better when the prey is a character you've spent time and can empathize with. And those two spend plenty of time with preds who could accidentally eat them, or be convinced by fellow preds to cough them back up. :)
Posted by Donotlike13 4 years ago Report
Best case for whoever eats Lea is sudden vomiting induced by Crisis, Anna, or another friend with only a upset stomach to show for their efforts.
Worst case I see Crisis being desperate (or angry) enough to cut whoever ate Lea wide open to get her out.
Posted by Kasra 4 years ago Report
Poor Tina, hope she does manage to work things out with Caylin...
And I like Lixie. She's fun!
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
Plus, Lixie's giving Calina something to look forward to! :D
Posted by Kasra 4 years ago Report
One must have goals in life! Though I dunno if Lixie'll slip up...plus, Calina's probably not the only one gunning for her.
Posted by French_snack 4 years ago Report
That would be unfortunate for both of them, if someone (or something) else eats Lixie before Calina can catch her!