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Holly, now a quad-amputee, awaits the conclusion of her meatgirl journey as Daniel's newfound confidence asserts itself and be indulges himself to the fullest.
This is the final part of the Holly and Daniel story commissioned by heromc. You can read part 1 here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/637661
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Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
OMG SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You've been the absolute best to work with, and seeing the conclusion was super emotional for me. I really appreciate all the hard word you did to make this a masterpiece!
Ragnar light the grill, she's done with the story, and even got a lil plumper from the holidays!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
I'm so glad you liked it, it's been an emotional ride for me too. It's always tricky with these endings trying to get the right balance of being emotional without being a downer ending.
It's nice to wrap it up too after so long spent on it, or, wait, what are you doing with that spit? Wait, I can add more the story! Maybe it was all "just a dream" and Holly is still around?
Posted by Cruich 4 years ago Report
A fine end!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks <3
Posted by VictorBound 4 years ago Report
actually kind of sad its over...... (but, thats a good thing, the audience is left wanting more.)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Yeah I was a little sad in wrapping it up too, I've grown to really like both characters. With heromc's permission, it'd be fun to at have Daniel turn up as a cameo in some other cooking related story I do in future.
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
I'm totes fine with it, I can't see him going vegan after eating that Fey girl!
Posted by ragnar 4 years ago Report
Wonderful as always, my precious Bunny. In fact, reading it has gotten me quite hungry...
(And Daniel got it right on something: redheads do taste better)
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
I'm sure you'll be able to confirm that tonight <3
Posted by ragnar 4 years ago Report
That's my good girl.
Posted by TCC 4 years ago Report
A fantastic conclusion to a fantastic series!
A real emotionally charged thrill with endearing characters, excellent prose and some incredibly sexy smut (and snuff~). I'm especially partial to that tinge of fear and reluctance Holly experiences as she realizes her demise is upon her, it adds a lot of weight to the scenario and makes her acceptance and sacrifice all the sweeter.
I almost thought Danial might actually keep her around, but I'm glad he ended up recognizing Holly as the food she really was; she may have been a smart, funny, supportive and loving girl but now she's just one more tag in the drawer~!
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
Thanks TCC <3 And yeah I thought that hint of fear from Holly made the whole experience feel sharper and more impactful.
It'd be interesting to wonder if Daniel would have answered differently if she'd have asked him to keep her earlier. On the one hand it'd be easier, but they also wouldn't have grown as close yet.
But yeah by the end, she's just meat (and a treasured memory).
Posted by heromc 4 years ago Report
How mean! She's not just a tag in the drawer for daniel, that's such a heartless thing to say! She's also a few weeks of leftovers too :P
Posted by TCC 4 years ago Report
Very true XD
Posted by TheGhostyPig 4 years ago Report
Now the ultimate question after such a lovely end to a delightful story, what next?
Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report
For Daniel, he might turn up as a cameo in any other cooking related story I do in future. A member of an audience, a girlmart customer etc.
As for me, it mostly depends what other commissions come in. The next one I'm currently working on is a F/MF vore scenario.
Posted by emikochan 3 years ago Report
loved this story, thankyou for writing it ^_^
Posted by BunnyWrites 3 years ago Report
Thank you for reading it <3