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Thinking Inside the Fox [UB] By wolfSnack -- Report

All your classmates have already graduated, and when you visit your vixen friend’s house, you’re aiming to follow your human friends into the sewers…

But when her mother answers the door instead, and makes you a special offer to graduate as a puddle of fox-cream…

How could you turn down her offer for a special, personal, intimate graduation?

Art for this story! https://aryion.com/g4/view/679674






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This story started as something I was writing alone, but it evolved into a collaboration with  thedragonboy, and many of the best ideas are his.

Go check out his page, particularly his How Not To Be Lunch series!

I think I’ve finally nailed down Mira’s character — she’s arguably my clearest self-insert character, but for some reason I’ve struggled to make her engaging and sexy. I’d love to hear whether I accomplished that goal during this story!


 MarkusFreeman320 did the fantastic art in the middle of this story, give him a favorite here! https://aryion.com/g4/view/660858

This is another story in the Graduation universe, extending  MarkusFreeman320's interactive story and  vixingirl's stories. The original Graduation game can be found here: https://aryion.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=79&t=51509

Comment on Thinking Inside the Fox [UB]

wolfSnack: I appreciate comments if my stories got you hot under the collar, they're so much more personal than a favorite -- it's always helpful to know exactly what people enjoy, so I can make the stories hawter for you in the future ;3

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Destroyah23

Posted by Destroyah23 4 years ago Report

As well written as these stories are I'm interested in seeing a relationship between a human and an anthro in this universe where the human wants to break away from the norms and rebel and gets into an actual long-term relationship with an anthro girl without him being digested in the end.

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

I'd considered writing that sort of thing -- in fact, Mira used to be married to a human in older drafts -- but it never really worked out correctly. Ashley is a reflection of my struggle to write that sort of thing, since she always THINKS she'll be keeping her boyfriend forever but he always ends up blocking the toilet the next day ;)

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Destroyah23

Posted by Destroyah23 4 years ago Report

So do you think you'll write a story like that in the future?

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doomed

Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report

Hmm the more I read these stories , the more sad it gets .because humans are taught all through their life that their only purpose is to be a Pelli’s waste. Yet. They get nothing equal in return for being waste. And to make it worse , they don’t even reform so that way they can do it again .
That’s kinda disappointing.
That being said , great story

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

Mira (tilts her head with confusion): "But... the pleasure IS the reward. I don't understand what you mean? I mean, if someone didn't WANT to be a puddle on the floor, I wouldn't churn them up..."

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MarkusFreeman320

Posted by MarkusFreeman320 4 years ago Report

June: "Awwww, sweetie... I think you've been hanging around the kind of preds that give good, decent gals like me a bad reputation... Getting digested is the reward~ If it weren't worth taking a ride through my digestive then humans wouldn't be showing up at my door wanting the 'hawt milf next door' to eat them, and I'd be about 100 pounds lighter... The right pred makes all the difference dear~"

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

Vicky: "Wait... You want something MORE than becoming my morning bowel movement? Entitled much?"

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MarkusFreeman320

Posted by MarkusFreeman320 4 years ago Report

We put the question to Alexis, but he's now looking through a dictionary for "reform", when we asked Betty she went off on a slight tangent...

Betty: "I swear, humans aren't the victims here, I'M THE VICTIM HERE!!! I used to be half this weight, now I've been trying to diet for the last 5 years... Every summer I lose 400 pounds then a bus full of succulent teenage humans shows up for a tour of the university and of course all they REALLY want is a tour of our sewers... It takes me months to burn off all those damn snacks, then months to gain the weight back in time for winter! And I swear, I SWEAR, they put on that delicious body lotion just to tempt me! If I didn't know any better I'd think Evelyn was messaging them ahead of time on prey book and snackchat to tell them my favourite flavours..."

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

Evelyn: "Young humans these days, expect to be eaten and to be paid for it... I even have to message new students and TELL them what flavors of body lotion the headmistress likes best!

It's bad enough my staff demand cash up front before a shift as a protein supplement, not like they'd get to spend it anyway..."

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Relius

Posted by Relius 4 years ago Report

I wonder if, assuming they have a coyote boy, if they'd name the pup after Jamie. A token to remember the snack by. And, he was quite the snack, keeping Mira eager and twitching all day long!

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

I'm certain that's how they'll name their pup :3 A little something to remember Mira's favorite human... And yes, Jamie was the best cunt-snack a vixen could ask for~

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Relius

Posted by Relius 4 years ago Report

And I'm sure that, while Vicky may not be the jealous type, she will certainly gorge away whatever feelings a new sibling from her favorite human gives her with... At least three humans a time. One up the butt, one down the throat, and perhaps even into the womb.

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techtician

Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report

This one honestly felt a bit sad to me. That long relationship gone in a fleeting moment. Expertly written though. I always feel something after one of these.

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

I don't know why everyone thinks this story is sad, I certainly didn't intend to write it that way XD

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techtician

Posted by techtician 4 years ago Report

It's probably seeing it from an outside point of view is all

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FrivolousFoxGirl

Posted by FrivolousFoxGirl 3 years ago Report

Its cuz Jamie is too cute

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vixingirl

Posted by vixingirl 4 years ago Report

Lovely story as always, I love the sweetness of her waiting all day just for the prey ;3.

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

Thank you, I wanted to make Mira as sweet as possible here <3

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supersaiyango

Posted by supersaiyango 4 years ago Report

Now i want to see a story in this verse about a scientist either pelli or human successfully creating a reformer so that the humans they love to eat can be eaten again and again~ itd be interesting to see how that changes their society

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

I don't think there will be reformation in this universe, sorry -- it removes all the hotness for me :(

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supersaiyango

Posted by supersaiyango 4 years ago Report

How about sapient fat then? Thats pretty hot too~

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

I've included a little bit of the human being slightly aware of the digestive process and movement through the bowels... But it's only hot to me when the prey's life ends, there's no sentient fat or reformation in this universe, sorry :( It's hottest when there's a sense of sacrifice and finality to the choice of predator.

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supersaiyango

Posted by supersaiyango 4 years ago Report

I see.

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Nathmurr

Posted by Nathmurr 4 years ago Report

That was such an amazing story! Well-written!

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report

Thank you! The best parts were all thanks to  thedragonboy though ;)

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TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 4 years ago Report

Aw, shucks ^^;

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FrivolousFoxGirl

Posted by FrivolousFoxGirl 3 years ago Report

Your stories always make me sad in the end

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 3 years ago Report

That's a shame, why is that?

I suppose it means I'm writing the emotional connections well, but it's supposed to be willing and occasionally wistful but not SAD.

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FrivolousFoxGirl

Posted by FrivolousFoxGirl 3 years ago Report

Its sad cuz jamie it too cute

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DragonLover66

Posted by DragonLover66 2 years ago Report

Great story very hot and well written. Also you are great at writing Unbirth. You definitely succeeded in making Mira engaging and sexy in this story. The prey's life ending is always really hot to me. The cunt vore definitely turned me on it is another big kink of mine.

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wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report

I'm glad Mira pushes the right buttons! Honestly, though,  thedragonboy is the one who did the best work writing her in this story :D

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