Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report

Really liked the last section. Shows that, despite her new family, Clawdette's still a predator. And it's nice to see a prey finally get digested. There's a lot of teasing in this series, but prey folk need to actually get digested for the teasing to have tension, which is why I really appreciate these scenes when you include them.

Posted by helenarlet 3 years ago Report

When you're writing about a reformed pred, or I guess a pred who is trying to be reformed but isn't really there yet, it becomes hard to find the right balance between which prey gets to survive and which prey gets digested.

Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report

Understandable. Tho, it doesn't have to always be Clawdette doing the eating. When people quit some addiction, it is very easy to relapse when the people around them are coninuing to indulge in their vice.

Btw, I really liked that bit in a previous part where Clawdette chased after that cow boy as well and cornered him in the toilets. A little disappointed that he got away, but would be interested to see them cross paths again in some way. Not telling you what to write, just something that I enjoyed and made me curious how things might go if they ran into each other again.

Posted by helenarlet 3 years ago Report

You're not the only person who wants to see that. I am strongly considering it.

Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report

Hooray! I'm obviously rooting for Clawdette to put the boy in his place, but would happy to see the encounter regardless of how it plays out.

(Btw, I don't want it to sound like I'm telling you what I think you should write. When I talk about what I like to see in vore, it's really about personal preference and is not a criticism of the work for not aligning with my specific set of preferences).

Posted by helenarlet 3 years ago Report

No problem at all. I enjoy hearing what others like and want to see. Can't promise I'll write EVERYTHING everyone wants, but it's still helpful input.

Posted by juicefox 3 years ago Report

And now I'm excited and thinking of all the possibilities. Like, maybe they meet in a doctors waiting room, or maybe he's the son of a friend of a friend who just so happens to invite Claudette over for a dinner party.

Posted by TheDarkTraveler 3 years ago Report

I like this comment thrad, says a lot of what I'm thinking. That rabbit kid will probally only get to see ones set of boobs in his life and it will be his mom's as they both digest

Posted by softvarelover 3 years ago Report

I wonder what Cindy would think of Clawdette eating rabbits again?

Honestly she would probably want to have another visit to her mothers tummy.

Posted by slonim 3 years ago Report

А будут ли еще рассказы или пока перерыв на неопределенное время?

Posted by helenarlet 3 years ago Report

There will be more stories. I have been going through a hard time lately and had to take a break. But there are more stories on the way.

Будет больше историй. В последнее время я переживаю тяжелые времена, и мне пришлось сделать перерыв. Но впереди еще много историй.
(I hope that came out of Google Translate right...)