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Chapter 9 ALT: Youthful Hunger By Vesari -- Report

Melissa and Lindsay go to a vore club, and Melissa begins her training in becoming a predator. A young girl starts and possibly ends her adult life tonight. Can Lindsay's aid transform a timid prey into a powerful and merciless predator? Well, technically, yes...

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I fucked up the alternate ending poll on Patreon, so I decided to write two alternate ending to make up for it. Oh well, I guess bending over for my readers in enjoyable in it's own way. I AM pretty submissive sometimes...

This week on Patreon, I decided to switch fetishes and tried my hand at a possession story. "Tanya and her Alien Friend!" is available now; https://www.patreon.com/posts/72100904?pr=true

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1ring42

Posted by 1ring42 2 years ago Report

Never though id need Natasha pred

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theonlymatt

Posted by theonlymatt 2 years ago Report

Fuuuuck yeah, love Melissa, but love seeing her meet her end as well.

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Winny

Posted by Winny 2 years ago Report

Starting to think that Linds might have a low key cuck fetish. She continues to put mel into situations where she could be squeezed out into the sewers.

The date with the predator with the tats.

Meeting a predator from online for a sexshoot.

Going to a vore bar, splitting up and not having her back.

Going to an online meet up with a bunch of known predators.

It's like Linds wants to see melissa eaten digested and shit out. Which I mean is hot when relationships get broken down because one of them got the other digested, but I just think its funny. :d

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theonlymatt

Posted by theonlymatt 2 years ago Report

The date with Talia was more or less a death sentence, it was a miracle she came out on top. The alt ending felt so right

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Augustin

Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report

VoreFans's best chapter gets even better. You are planning on writing a Melissa pred, Natasha prey version, right? That's what I imagined this would be.

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FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Ive been pushing off reading this, but that turns out to have been a mistake! I gotta read this series. You did a wonderful job with it~
Definitely a big fan of Natasha. Shes adorable. I want her to eat the best.
Pretty sure shes wiggle in the canon plotline though ;w;
Must read to find out.

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