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Mutual Arrangement By Hetzering -- Report

Hey! I'm Back!

"Sometimes, nature takes its course and good old pred-prey dominance reclaims its rights over the boss-employee hierarchy."

Don't hesitate to give your opinion in comments or in PM to tell me what you liked or hated !

Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl, corrected with my knowledge and and having it proofread by the friendly https://aryion.com/g4/user/EloquentOrc

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TMVore

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

Hm, This style of writting is what has me drooling everytime I get notified of another story from you.10/10 would intern.

And you're still a tease to those loving cooking stories xD

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

I love cooking stories but I know they're not everyone's cup of tea so I prefer to place them as references or short detailed passages so that those who like them have something to sink their teeth into! :D

TMVore

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

I love them, due the "distress", facing danger, goes fine with my love for pred selection, spin the bottle, auction, sold by etc. The eating part less so.

1ring42

Posted by 1ring42 1 year ago Report

Very nice

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

Thanks!

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Aww that’s so sweet . Digesting the competition. GrNted I thought the boss was gonna eat the employee

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

Well, Eimi hadn't planned to get her father a promotion this way, but When life gives you lemons, make lemonade. :)

feauxen

Posted by feauxen 1 year ago Report

Surprise pred reversal, I like it. Would have been fun to see a few interns also make ‘mistakes’ that led to their delicious demise, but this was fun too.

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

Glad you like it! I like the mechanics of a boss who ends up submissive to his/her subordinate's stomach, it's always something interesting to write about!

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the story, I love your writing!
I'm not great at writing descriptive digestion since I tend to write from the pred's POV, so it's always impressive seeing how smoothly your stories move about the scene inside and outside the belly.

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

Thanks for your comment!

My first stories were mostly from the external point of view and POV of the pred. Then I got the urge to describe from the inside and from the POV of the prey to diversify my stories and make them more interesting to write (and read). And I got the taste for it, and as the stories progressed, I improved on this part, even if I still need to improve certain points of the digestion descriptions! :3

Anvitzi

Posted by Anvitzi 1 year ago Report

Wholesome ending UwU

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

Family is everything UwU

Anvitzi

Posted by Anvitzi 1 year ago Report

Yay :3