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A Helping Hand By Hetzering -- Report

Hey! A New Cock-Vore Story!

"It's always good to reward people who have helped you, but maybe you shouldn't let your guard down....unless you're a cumslut."

Don't hesitate to give your opinion in comments or in PM to tell me what you liked or hated !

Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl, corrected with my knowledge and and having it proofread by the friendly https://aryion.com/g4/user/EloquentOrc

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TMVore

Posted by TMVore 1 year ago Report

As always, you have me charmed ♡

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

And as always, I'm pleased to have satisfied you! :)

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 1 year ago Report

Well executed. Feels like the shipping item should have some ironic significance though.

Gives me an idea for two preds that just repeatedly have a heavy item shipped between them so the delivery person can be tired and easy prey by time they've put it in a difficult location.

After they've melted them it's revealed that some part of their remains are added to the heavy item with each delivery making it heavier each time. I'm thinking it's a trophy case.

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

Well, I came up with the cabinet idea because I needed something heavy that was logical to find in offices. But it's true that as I'm reading you, I'm thinking that getting our 2 preds to fill the wardrobe with the 2 delivery girls would have been a fun detail.

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report

Incredible descriptions of the scenes and actions. The S/M feel of Blake and Lela going at it was incredible.
Also, love little practical details like that final paragraph, that jarring bit of realism in a scene that's logically completely crazy. In the midst of fucking and shoving random girl in their cocks, complaining about the difficulty of washing semen out of hair, or just the thought of a secretary somewhere having to go "What do you mean our delivery girls got eaten?!"

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report

I like to add this kind of innocuous and realistic detail because it reinforces the "casual" side of the vore of my stories! :)

ParvusIgnum

Posted by ParvusIgnum 1 year ago Report

great, sorta wish there was an alt end where she did get fucked down her friends throat

MathewLord1

Posted by MathewLord1 1 year ago Report

Another great read I enjoyed myself a lot. I love your cock core stuff especially cum sluts getting turned into nothing but a easy and cheap meal for older or more dominant preds. Love that idea and you execute it so well. Keep it up.

TrollFaceLolFace

Posted by TrollFaceLolFace 1 year ago Report

where do you find the thumbnails? this one especially