Fischie - 7 years ago

Sure. This would make it easier to find volunteers than having her vanish. But the drake needs lots of protein after that.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you ^^
It is a lot of meat the dragon plows her with, and I can't imagine he's gentle about it - at least no more gentle than he has to be to avoid killing her - but these people consider it an honor to serve their dragon protector in whatever way he asks of them.
As for whether or not she enjoys it, that I'll leave open to interpretation, as well as whether or not she volunteered for this position in the first place.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Who knows, the text may be her telling the people of her village about her experience.

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Nice little comic^^ but I take notice that in the catgirl's thought bubble, she doesn't state whether she enjoys this or not, only that she feel sore when the dragon is finished with her.

Fischie - 7 years ago

I am surprised she survived this far. But something tells me she won't make it back to the village

Gabriel0813 - 7 years ago

ha i am sorta sad there not alot of rampage stuff on here

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Well, when you dine on poor maidens from the same place for some time, you sort of create a market or knights. He is lucky that the warriors coming for him also are females ;)

JacktheDragon - 7 years ago

Very foolish indeed

ChaoskampfNunc - 7 years ago

Foolish and delicious in equal measure

DrakentheBlack - 6 years ago

They can get quite big. The largest one ever pulled out of the ground was 300 feet in length and had almost a hundred creatures in its belly.

Like all predators, it goes where the food is, so if traders don't want this thing coming to their town they'll keep sending caravans out to feed it.

Nalzindar - 6 years ago

Then I guess it will become a huge worm after a while, let us just hope it doesn't decide to attack settlements and towns, or else the desert might become... deserted....

JacktheDragon - 7 years ago

030 cute!

Also happy a valentine...meh.

ChaoskampfNunc - 7 years ago

So many delicious maidens, so little time~

DrakentheBlack - 6 years ago

I guess it has been a while since I've done a detailed digestion from start to finish. You won't see any of these girls again, but I could write or draw something soon with a graphic ending.

Mechdragon1k - 6 years ago

I would be nice if you write a sequel that goes into detail about the digestion.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Now that you mention it, that does seem to happen quite a bit now. It's not too much of a loss though since the couple is normally on the verge of breaking up or finding they aren't compatible anyway.

It appears even in this world, women fight over men, but giants normally win those fights since they can eat the competition XD

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Well, if every man has one day in his life, this day certainly had to be Jason's. Too bad he didn't get to know the kitsune any further, but giantess who ate her seems nice enough. Your male characters seems to have a habit of getting their first potential love interests eaten^^

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you very much! If you like the things you saw, feel free to replicate them what you write.

I'd probably go out hunting too to be honest, and he was reluctant to go through with eating Racheal, but in the end she was kindof the deciding vote for her final fate.

Fischie - 7 years ago

I really enjoyed reading this. It had about just the right scope and the way you described the details was delighting. Especially the half vocal communication between the two was a great touch and I might have to copy that on some point.
The only thim surprising me was that the dragon bust gobbled her up even though she was obviously a once in a century catch. I would habe gone through the trouble of hunting in the woods to keep her if I was him.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

You're welcome, and thank you very much!

Zazou - 7 years ago

curiously yes... I do not really understand -_o that is the basic scenario for a dragon vore story, but aslo the better! You can get so much details in there... like you've done, thanks again.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

I probably won't do that for this story, but I might write another chapter from this dragon's point of view.
And thank you!

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Oh I am loving season 2 already!
A few pictures for long-lived characters can be very beneficial for a story like this, I'll do the same for the new characters this year, and even add thumbnail pictures for season 2's chapters.

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Hehe, thanks for tellimg me and no worries, I will look forward to next year^^ You have done well with your story so far so take your time and make the next part just as good. It has also been nice to see you add pictures for your story ; )

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Well between other work and rather fleeting inspiration, it took me a full year to get through this season alone - finished it this weekend in fact. I want to get as much of the second season done before I start to upload it so I can avoid uploading at random and vastly spaced out intervals, and instead have it all out week by week.
Not only that, but I feel like the series might be better as an annual end-of-year period for me, and it leaves the rest of the year open for whatever doodle or short story my ADD brain comes up with at the time.
I'm sorry if the long wait will be inconvenient for you :(

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

September, why the long wait?

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Believe me, Zera's end is one that I spent a lot of time debating how to do it, but I'm very pleased with what her final fate is going to be.
Thank you ^^ I think it's about time I had some honest vore considering the forum, lolXD
I'm glad you enjoyed this series. I'll be posting Season 2 starting in September.

TinyHero - 7 years ago

No prob :)

ChaoskampfNunc - 7 years ago

I-I will gladly serve the rightful queen in any capacity she requires.. whatever is needed of my frail human body

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thanks!

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

You seem to have a good survival instinct. She may have use for you. lol

TinyHero - 7 years ago

Oh wow... 9_9;

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

No, Trinity and Sargo a just a couple of giants who are fighting for the same team and became friends as a result of that. Regardless of the size difference, Sargo considers Amber his girlfriend, much in the same way that Sonja views Wesley. And giants tend to be monogamous.

Thank you, I had fun writing Sonja and Wesley's first time, it's been a long time coming. Also, certainly enjoy yourself while you work when it gets results, lol!

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Wonderful, Wesley and Sonja finally got their private moment together^^. Although it seems they didn't quite finished yet... Your description of their act was also well done! And much new learned about their world and how it works. A creative way of conducting an interrogation by the way, who said you shouldn't mix business and pleasure XD I would love to see more of that. But tell me, are Trinity and Sargo some sort of couple?

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

You're welcome! Part of the fun of creating this world is coming up with ways all of these different creatures coexist.
No one does CV better than a male pred ;)
Trust me, I'm putting the best action - in all of its meanings - into these last chapters, so it will be worth the wait!

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Hi, and thanks for yet another chapter^^ Some questions were answered and new ones added as they finally arrived at the resistance. Nice to see the people there getting along so good, and not to mention all the interesting species.
I think the highlight this time came when Amber asked how Wesley and Sonja met, what an introduction XD. The question now is why she didn't seemed more surprised! Seems also like you got some potential for CV in there as well. Looking forward to next week^^

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

I wish I could tell you that all answers will be given soon, but some of these topics don't go into a lot of detail until season two, especially on matters concerning the giants. What I can tell you is there are some giants like The Queen who believe their race to be the supreme beings that all others are meant to serve. Then there are the ones like Sonja's family and the ones fighting for the Resistance that would rather treat humanoids as equals. So there's good and evil to be found in every race.

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Just humans and perhaps demi-humans who were tired of giants (the queen) and being considered as lunch or snack in general.
But on the other side I was a bit unsure of which side the other giants where standing on since I had a feeling that it couldn't be only two of them^^. So I am curious to see how the other giants you have introduced look upon those who are smaller than them. You have already given a hint in this part of the story regarding that topic, so it can't be an all bad relationship it seems ;)

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

I honestly considered the idea of having Wesley shoved inside Sonja. It would have led to a far more awkward first impression with the other giants, that's for sure. I just decided against it since I'm wanting to build them up closer and closer. Doesn't mean Alexia won't continue her efforts to be a cock block XD

Out of curiousity, since you weren't expecting giants to be members of the Resistance, what were you expecting?

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Great chapter, I really enjoyed this, your world continue to expand and it will be intersting to see more of this resistance and learn what they are doing. Probably not fighting for a republic I guess.
Quite a funny moment you had in there, that Alexia had to show up right when she did was hilarious stereotypic, for a split second I had the image of Sonja who in surprise acciently pushed Wesley inside her instead of brushing him away. More moments like this please^^ Could it be a running gag of having the giantess and the human trying to get close, only to have something come in the way each time (or at least every now and then?

It will be interesting to see what happens next in the resistance, I really wasn't expecting other giants there^^

TinyHero - 7 years ago

Holy cow, she’s huge... 9_9;

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you

Donotlike13 - 7 years ago

Nice pose for her.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Yah, the gore is more of a display of Zera's brutality. Though I am fairly certain there are people out there who like to see girls showered in blood.

There's a lot of series left, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far ^^ Thanks for your comments too, they can get me to consider things I would not have before.

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Hehe, it is quite fun seing some variations every now and then, although gore isn't much for me. But I am getting curious about how it is going with Sonja and her tiny friend, will they get more romantic perhaps, and not to mention this resistance you mentioned. Would it be awkward for them if they got a giantess on the team? As you mentioned, somebody who is fifteen storeys tall shouldn't be hard to spot, but they also come plenty of practical difficulties if everybody else is smaller. Maybe you could add some accidential vore, given the right situation it could provide lots of fun and entanglements^^
Looking forward to see what you have planned next.

Zavvnao - 7 years ago

There are all sorts of things to do with dragons, and to explore with them ^^

one thing I like is safe vore with a human keeping a dragon snug and sage inside of them X3 But this is a nice chapter ^^

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

The dragon/woman relationships are a bit of a reoccurring theme for this world. Since dragons have sex for pleasure, when interacting with other races they use intercourse as a type of play. Knowing this, riders like Alexia and Zera are more than willing to put out to keep their partners happy.
I would say 'beat's the alternative' but in my opinion the appropriate saying is 'is it too much to ask for both?' XD

Having a girlfriend thirty times your size does tend to add quite a few interesting elements to a relationship doesn't it. I'm sure they're both happy she chose not to eat him so they can continue to have romantic moments like this.

I'm glad you're enjoying the series so far :)

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Well, that was a rather unexpected developement, I hadn't expected you to write anything about Sonja's heritage, this is going to be fun. But what is it with women and their dragons.... ;) (I guess the women appreciate the dragons being inside them rather than opposite). Nice to see Wesley and Sonja having another nice moment together by the way. Spending a night under the stars with your girfriend is very romantic indeed. I guess it would be challenging for Wesley to do other boyfriend/girlfriend thing with her, imagine they going out shopping together for example... or just taking a stroll through the city^^

I am already looking forwards to next week.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

You'll find out the answer to that question next week! Mwahahaha!
Thank you! They do make a cute, odd couple don't they.

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Another giantess who also is a queen, I wonder why she wants Sonja eliminated. I liked your wolf girl-dragon relationship, quite unusual but they make a good couple, being predators both of them^^

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Thanks, I will be looking forwards to your next update.

And thanks again, it could turn into an awkward situation if his parents should ask what happened to his prevoious girlfriend ;)

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Well I don't want to spoil any future events, but the chapter I post next week will be of a concurrent story line that may answer some of your questions about The Queen and her army.

Ha, that would be a rather entertaining scenario! Just imagine how the parents would react XD

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

It seems Wesley and Sonja has gotten quite comfortable around each other already, will they meet this strange queen again later perhaps, and where does she and her (almost) modern army come from? However, after reading the first part of your story, I got this funny image in my head about a certain male taking home his new girlriend to show her to his parents... now that's a scenario I would love to see^^

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Hm?

JacktheDragon - 7 years ago

Ok

TinyHero - 7 years ago

Sweet :)

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Yah most women wouldn't resort to straight up eating the competition to get a man, or would they? XD

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you!

Nalzindar - 7 years ago

Nice story and an interesting way of making somebody single again, at least Wesley didn't lose his head over this^^ I am very eager to learn what sort of friendship these two will develope, it can't be easy seeing your beautiful girlfriend devoured alive by a giantess only to have said giantess become your new girlfriend afterwards ;)

Wolfsage - 7 years ago

I liked it. Looking forward to see what happens next.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

lol

Well I hear a girl's first time hurts, and having her hymen popped by a three-foot mating tool must be particularly painful.

Fischie - 7 years ago

She does not look too happy. This is probably worse than insurance fees after all.

DrakentheBlack - 5 years ago

Thank you

TheDarkTraveler - 5 years ago

an interesting concept

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Well it's either that or take everything he wants and then deal with pesky humans attacking him.

ChaoskampfNunc - 7 years ago

Such a benevolent guardian, sacrificing so much and asking so little in return..

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

True that; it's probably the high point of their life.

ChaoskampfNunc - 7 years ago

What lucky food to be eaten by such a handsome beast~ They should be thankful the last sight of their pathetic lives is so wonderful

VoraciousSincerity - 7 years ago

Awwww, this is nice.

DrakentheBlack - 2 years ago

LOL, Thanks!

Yay for shipping! I could be wrong, but don't think they have a 'pet' delta. It's appearance in a window as well as sitting at a table in the Mini game lead me to believe it's a neighbor.

It could be TGO-03 in the final scene of the game with TGO-07. When I wrote this series, I had no knowledge of Echidna Wars Mini even existing, so I had to make up the character without any reference.

bruhmoment06 - 2 years ago

this is the best (and only) fanfic i've ever read. i've always shipped mirea and sachiho and i'm glad someone shares that thought. also i'm pretty sure they had a pet delta too tho.
and i'm glad to see TGO-07 with her sister, but i thought she was 03, not 08.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you very much; that really means a lot to me!

I've actually been trying to emulate a formula one of my favorite Deviantartists, Gorgogorgo uses, where I can take a scenario filled with fetishes and yet still have a serious story come out of it. After reading your comment, I know I'm on the right track!

EVAR25 - 7 years ago

I swear, your Finale was Epic enough that it warranted a FT battle song. I didn't expect so much effort to be placed into any erotic story on this site as much as you went the extra mile for. Not only did you deliver on the fanservice, but you also created a lot of fun banter, good characterization, and memorable dialogue that'll leave a lasting impression with your readers.

Awesome work Draken, I mean that sincerely ^^

GeneralUrist - 7 years ago

I unfortunately do not :( The few stories I've written (offsite) generally came out without too many errors despite not having a proof reader though. Blame high school English class and such. I find a very useful tip is to let it "sleep" for a night so you forget what exactly you wrote (making it "unfamiliar" and thus reducing the typical bias of from reading what you just wrote yourself), then the next day read it to yourself out-loud. Helps catch not only grammatical errors but clumsy passages and other simple stylistic errors as well, I find. Granted, this depends a lot on how familiar the writer is with the English language, so it's not silver bullet for everyone.

I wonder what sort of employment an ambulatory stomach with no limbs can find...

Corona29 - 7 years ago

Sadly I don't know any animators. I wish I knew some. I hope one reads your stories

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Kindof a love/hate relationship with these things isn't it? Wanting to know how everything resolves, yet not wanting the adventure to come to an end.

If you have any animators who would like to make videos from this story, that would be something really cool to see!

Sergit - 7 years ago

Thanks! I animated it myself! ^w^

I shall wait patiently, so have fun writing the final chapter!

Corona29 - 7 years ago

I love this series. Part of me wishes it didn't have to end. The stories are so good some really good people could make a direct video of what you've come up with. And follow everything exactly as you wrote. Beautiful series and can't wait for the next (last) chapter

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Don't worry, there is one more chapter after this one, and I shall make it worth the wait!

P.S. I love your avatar!

DrakentheBlack - 6 years ago

3-1 is pretty tedious.

pendingdele092b492 - 6 years ago

Thank you for acknowledging the most obnoxious part of the game: falling down the damn mountain. There isn't even a vore scene where the bottom of the screen eats you!

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the series ^^

Corona29 - 7 years ago

I'm so glad this finally came out. As soon as I saw this I read it immediately and now can't wait for the next part. I'm enjoying these stories very much. Keep up the awesome work

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thanks, I'm hoping to have a couple more good fights in the next chapters.

I honestly don't know what becomes of the beehive. Even in the game, once you defeat the Queen Bee the other bees just disappear.

Character focus, past and present tense, these are things I tend to change throughout my paragraphs and I would like to fix those problems. I guess they just sound better in my head than when they're read by other eyes.

For dialogue, I do address who said what in what mannerism in the middle or at the end of a statement sometimes, but I personally prefer to put it at the start of a sentence so the readers know who is talking.

I would like to apologize myself. I admit I was rushed getting this chapter done and didn't have time to properly proof read it. Terrible excuse I know, but it does show that I should worry more about the quality rather than meeting deadlines - I'm sure somebody will start poking me if I take too long to post something.

A few years ago they had a precursor to this game with the valkyrie as the only playable character and the first level being all that was available, and it was called Milia Wars. Now in the full game I don't know if the Milia vs Mirea thing is a result of a name change, or if it's a Holo vs Horo situation.

GeneralUrist - 7 years ago

Ok, the Prof. who made those "D batteries" is getting probably court-marshaled after this, because Teego's sexbot side appears detrimental to the mission. :P Unless it somehow proves to be useful....

That battle scene was cool, a nice demonstration of everyone's power!
I wonder what they will do with the beehive once this is over...

One problem I've noticed though is that often the speaker or focus character changes mid-paragraph, which is confusing and trips me up as a reader.

For example: (BTW, is it possible to use bold or italics in the comments? That would make this easier.)
[[Usaco looked at the group one by one, lastly making eye contact with Mirea, and she nodded to the girl before answering, “Easy, we fight together.” The queen pointed her fan at the group, and the bees charged.]]
This paragraph starts describing Usaco's actions and speech. However, immediately after Usaco's quote it is the Queen Bee who's actions are described, and this in-paragraph focus change is jarring to me.

Also, in this paragraph:
[[The heroines stood triumphant in the throne room, and after looking around to make sure there were no more enemies, they were finally able to catch a break. Mirea approached Sachiho and asked, “Are you unharmed.” Sachiho answered, “I had to chew my way out of bug egg. That makes the list of things I would rather not eat again. Otherwise I’m fine.” “Good.” Mirea hugged the wolf-girl, and Usaco remarked, “Well isn’t that cute.”]]
I can excuse having multiple characters speaking in one paragraph to avoid having a bunch of one-line paragraphs, but as is it's kind of awkward to read. Phrases like "Sachiho answered" and "Usaco remarked" should probably come after the character's line, not before.
E.G. "Well isn't that cute?" Usaco remarked.

For longer lines, if you are worried about the speaker not being obvious you can put it part-way though between sentences. Something like this:
“I had to chew my way out of bug egg." Sachiho answered. "That makes the list of things I would rather not eat again. Otherwise I’m fine."
Flows a little more naturally doesn't it?

Also, you forgot the question mark in Mirea's question :P
(side note: Anyone else prefer the old romanizatoin of "Millia"?)

I'm sorry if this seems aggressive or ranty, but these kinds of stylistic errors do make the story trickier to read, and I thought it's kinda my duty as a fellow writer to point them out to you.

JacktheDragon - 7 years ago

Oh...ooh...nice

Also happy vore day

DimensionalKitty - 7 years ago

Eat the wolf only being seishin... Or serena

bruhmoment06 - 2 years ago

wow sachiho. kind of a dick move to leave that person screaming in that egg

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

https://i.ytimg.com/vi/alBcvdVvH7Q/hqdefault.jpg

https://i.ytimg.com/vi/m0yNsuL5AJc/hqdefault.jpg

Hope these help.

Mechdragon1k - 7 years ago

Is there any pictures of the bee queen.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Never know, she might mark her. Though I've never been a fan of watersports

"D batteries" XD Yah apart from Usaco, none of these girls dress for battle. It's questionable if they technically dress.

It's like a transformation triangle. If the queen grabs your character out of the air, she'll put you in an egg that hatches a honey worm. If the honey worm digests your character, it will turn into a killer bee, and if the killer be captures your character, she'll feed you to the Queen.

GeneralUrist - 7 years ago

Nye heh heh, cool to see the half-feral Yokai bickering!

Lol, "mark some territory" XD I wonder if Sachi will be "marking" ourobos' corpse once they kill her.

forget those "D batteries", it's that funky bodysuit that makes Teego stand out like a sore thumb! :p

Ohh cliffhanger! Y'know, I recall seeing banter on the forums about the Bees turning your characters into drones or something, but it's unclear. Does any such thing happen in the game?

JacktheDragon - 7 years ago

Your welcome and of course~

I'm sure he will enjoy his meal~

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you!
Yah can't beat the classics

JacktheDragon - 7 years ago

Nothing like a good ol fashion sacrifice

Also lovely art

ChaoskampfNunc - 7 years ago

It is not problem <3 Dragons are such wonderful and majestic creatures~

DimensionalKitty - 7 years ago

Dont worry i know a dozen whores that deserve eating

DrakentheBlack - 3 years ago

Yep, Seishin is enjoying being Draken's little gut slut!

This was a picture that I liked how it turned out, and because what had been up there before was Abbie and the Horse, I wanted to see if that one was getting so many favorites because it was on the home page, or because it was that good. By the number of favorites this one received, I'm going to say the story rated what it got.

Nalzindar - 3 years ago

Hehe, I guess the feeling you get in such a situation depends on whether the owner of the stomach is a caring friend of yours or not. Seeing this must be Seishin, I presume she and Draken are practicing quality time together ; )

Is there any special reason for why you have chosen this particular image as your main picture on your profile?

TheWolfInator3456 - 7 years ago

Same!

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Sachiho is my favorite character too ^^

I hope to keep the characters interesting and entertaining throughout the duration of the story, so I'm glad you're enjoying the series so far!

GeneralUrist - 7 years ago

To answer your questions: I haven't played the game personally, but I've watched videos of it, and read through its threads on the forums here. I think your novelization of it is going great!

I'd say Sachi is my favorite girl here. Mostly down to earth, yet still pretty badass! As for my favorite creature... I'm not sure, but it's definitely one of the ones that do oral vore. Speaking of which, you do a good job of writing the vore scenes without dragging them on for too long.

Hee hee, Usaco and Sachi are funny together :)

Mirea most certainly was badass fighting those lizardmen!

Ahh, the "feed it a bomb" trick. always works! Also, that's one dynamic entry there Teego!

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

You are correct in your assumption. And the names of the different enemies are given in the game's gallery.

Sounds like fast food, lol. Pretty sure she's designed to be an all purpose battle droid. That body though... the Doctor might be getting a bit lonely in his old age XD

GeneralUrist - 7 years ago

So they have official names? cool. Although TBH those names sound pretty silly. I assume that "Deltas" are the slugs and "Lamboas" are the walking vacuum stomach things?

Makes sense. There are quite a few man-made thigs that taste good at first but are severely toxic. And I guess Dr. Gate didn't (initially) design Teego with intent to fight vore monsters :P

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Usaco and Sachiho either don't hear the call or have no interest in siding with Ouroboros. At least that's my theory

Deltas and lamboas are the most basic enemies in the game https://i.ytimg.com/vi/8CvcpF4zA1M/maxresdefault.jpg

I imagine her skin tastes nice, but she'd probably give some bad indigestion.

I appreciate your compliments ^^

GeneralUrist - 7 years ago

Finally indeed! But considering the length and quality of this, I'd say the wait was worth it! :)

So Usaco is a Yokai as well huh? I wonder what caused her to split from the hostiles?

What exactly are "deltas" and "lamboas"? I'm not familiar with the official names of Echidna Wars enemies.

So TGO-07 is actually a robot hmm? I'd imagine she won't taste so good. :P

With how we don't see any other humans in-game, it is easy to forget that a catastrophic attack happened. You did a good job of capturing just how dark and terrifying a massed Yokai attack would be.

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

You're most welcome! I'm glad you like it so much ^^
Thank you for all the compliments! I really appreciate it :)

CassyInko - 7 years ago

Thanks so much for doing this! ^_^ It ended up being a wonderful, fun comic! Much like you, I'd almost wanna see a more cuddly version of this! x3

But really, this is a wonderful comic! <3

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Seishin's not bluffing. The question is could her companion make it to her in time, and would he be able to defeat Ryla?

I appreciate the compliments! I had a lot of fun on this one.

CGR-7 - 7 years ago

Ha! Ryla called your bluff, Seishin. And then some. XD

Nice comic, Draken. Well done. =)

CassyInko - 7 years ago

The internal/external on this is great! :3 Absolutely wonderful! <3

martyr - 7 years ago

True! Yaaaaay happy foxy! <3

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Yes, but it makes for one happy foxy ;)

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thanks! I'm really happy with how that turned out

CGR-7 - 7 years ago

Nice cutaway, Draken. =)

CGR-7 - 7 years ago

Ryla is such a card. =)

CGR-7 - 7 years ago

Yeah, Ryla's got this all wrapped up. =)

DimensionalKitty - 7 years ago

It also didnt help she was so much smaller

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

She did not

DimensionalKitty - 7 years ago

Seishin stood no chance

CGR-7 - 7 years ago

Zing! =)

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Well, she is eating her ;)

CGR-7 - 7 years ago

Oh ho! Seishin thought Ryla was just gonna do some ordinary, naughty yuri things to her; she thought wrong. XD

CassyInko - 7 years ago

Goodness! That was an INCREDIBLE inner-maw shot! :O You did so absolutely wonderful on that! Incredible! :3

DrakentheBlack - 7 years ago

Thank you so much! ^^

CGR-7 - 7 years ago

Very nice inside mawshot, Draken. Good job on Ryla's teeth. =)