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Tricked by Treats

Uploaded: 5 months ago

Owner: WingedDevourer

Tags: Digestion Halloween party mimic Sex Tentacle Unwilling Prey Mass Vore Female Prey Human Prey Stockings Femboy arousal Trick or Treat internal POV female vore Femboy prey Thigh highs house pred Mimic pred mimic house

In a twist of fate, a college party house is the one collecting tasty treats on Halloween.

A little late on this one, I was on vacation during Halloween week so I wanted to slap together a fun little story for you all.

Happy *late* Halloween! 

WingedDevourer - 5 months ago

Thank you so much!

The house doss not discriminate when it comes to soft, nutritious flesh. So long since it had fed, to have so many delicacies at ones must have been divine.

sheppard74 - 5 months ago

good story. Always a treat to read your stories.
So nice of the Mimic to make no difference between cute girls and femboys in regard of feeding

TootLunch - 9 months ago

Don’t worry, my older stories are far more word clustery than my newer stuff. Formatting is one of those things a lot of people notice immediately about stories but if asked why they like a certain story it is an uncommon answer, most of it is subconscious.

I just made a habit of hitting enter every 3 or 4 sentences unless I specifically want a longer or shorter segment.

But yeah, give yourself a little more time, don’t feel rushed to make content. Basic spell check is nice but it won’t catch misspelled words if they are a different correctly spelled word like due->do which is why at least one read front to back should be done as a quality check.

Most of the time I’ll find something I worded awkwardly, or add a break or some extra commas to sections that feel like they need to slow down a little bit, and of course find whatever other typos are hiding in it. I try to read it from the point of view of someone who doesn’t know everything about the story and make sure I can follow along easily with only the info given in my stories, not that I had any issue following yours but it can help with longer or more complex stories with more characters.

Most of my viewers know who my characters are, I could just name drop them without explanation but I always try to sneak in a brief description and establish their name in the story for anyone who isn’t a regular reader. This is something I always make sure to have when doing my final read-through.

Feel free to message me if you ever want critique on a specific piece, I love helping other artists out :3

WingedDevourer - 9 months ago

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm glad the story had the intended consequence, I was going more for that cosmic horror kind of vibe over typical 'mouth-to-stomach' type of story.

I'll definitely work on breaking things up a little better, funny enough I am one of those people who struggle with reading word clusters like that, you'd think I would know better lol.

I was in a bit of a hurry to get some content out since it had been several months since my last post, so I didn't really give it a thorough scrubbing other than a basic spell check, will be sure to be a little more patient in the future.

TootLunch - 9 months ago

Interesting story, quite different than the usual fare here and definitely tickled the darker corners of my mind.

Having seen your work to be shared thread here are a few of my notes:

The first paragraph grabbed my curiosity well, most stories I know if I will like them in the first couple hundred words and you did a great job with the scene building and tension.

Word repetition, your vocabulary is creative and varied except for the repeated description of pain in the later portion the pain is descriped as icy or burning multiple times where it could be freezing, frigid, searing, biting, etc, which you use some of but that stuck out to the most during my first read. I try not to reuse the same words within a certain proximity with my writing, usually cycling through the different ways I can think to describe something before reusing them, especially when it is a major focus of the story like the pain which takes center stage at the end here.

A couple quick reads of your story before posting can help the polish, there are a few typos and the formatting leaves a lot to be desired. One example being “I trip and fall do to a piece of discarded pipe” when it should be ‘due to’. That typo quite literally tripped my reading flow like a piece of discarded pipe so if that was intentional, bravo.

Breaking up huge paragraphs helps the readability, especially for readers with something like dyslexia to not get lost in the sea of words, losing their place or having to re-read something several times to understand it.

The first paragraph alone could be broken up into 4 or 5 chunks, if not more. One thing I had to get over was how the school system in the US just made writing so painfully uncreative… opening paragraph, three supporting paragraphs, conclusion paragraph. That shit can take a seat, use formatting to push and pull your reader, tug at their heart strings, add natural pauses.

While the content of my stories might not be up everyone’s alley, I never really have any nasty stuff in the first page or two if you want some examples of what I mean.

Nic386 - 9 months ago

good to see you working again you lazy bum

 King Braal sits on his on his throne, staring intently into the down cast eyes of his royal messenger. Braal has ruled the Kingdom of Ruoansulatus for many years as a beloved leader, his people trust him for safety and he has done well to provide it, until recently. Bad news had been delivered once again, for the fourth time in as many days, more of the kingdom's countrymen have gone missing near Sulattaa Keep. This time a royal hunting party which included one of the King's own daughters,

Part I: Invisible Touch

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: WingedDevourer

Tags: Soft Vore Digestion Ranger Fantasy Saliva Blood Unwilling adventure Bones Unwilling Prey Hard Digestion Female Prey Stockings remains Elf prey Tight stomach Sleeping pred crying prey Disregard of Life Uncaring Pred Invisible Pred anklet stripped prey fantasy races

King Braal sends a group of adventurers off to the abandoned Sulattaa Keep to find the Ogre Zloch and get revenge for the death of his daughter. One by one the party runs into the nasty predators that call the Keep, home.

Part one involves the Elven Ranger, Alfdis and an invisible multilimbed predator that cuts her quest for revenge short. 

WingedDevourer - 1 year ago

With a healthy airflow, she's got a good long while to enjoy the invisible creature's interior decorating ability. Eventually the inhabitants of the Keep will see a half-full globe of pinkish soup lumbering theough the halls until they are fully absorbed, slowly fading from sight.

Rhysion - 1 year ago

A very dangerous foe! I do wonder how long it might take for the elf to completely disappear inside her fleshy prison though. Invisible creatures raise many questions!

Something A Little Different: The Leech

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: WingedDevourer

Tags: Worm Blood Cum Bondage Orgasm voyeur Hard Digestion Crying Leech Stockings ballgag forced prey body horror Femboy prey Willing to unwilling prey chastity submissive prey Hosiery Uncaring Pred anklet chastity cage leech pred body part removal cock removal body part vore misstress Sub/dom

A femboy sub loses his most precious possession at the hands (mouth) of his mistress's new pet.

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Ok so this is a weird one I kicked around for a while. Not sure how body part digestion will fly around here, but I figured why not give it a shot...maybe someone out there will like it.  

WingedDevourer - 11 months ago

Thank you, glad you liked it! :)

Lordpisces14 - 11 months ago

Nice. Quick and to the point.

 As the night drew to an end, another boring one filled with bad weather, slow business, and not many employees around, Ashely and I began closing up the store. We worked at a large chain grocery store in the middle of nowhere USA. I started my usual rounds for closing up the store as she counted the money in the final register. She wore her usual get up, work polo, long sleeve under-shirt and these nice tight khaki pants that show off her surprisingly fit yet plump ass. She was small in

Slurp!

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: WingedDevourer

Tags: Digestion Blood Cum horror Unwilling Prey Hard Digestion dissolving Female Prey Femboy blood drinking cock sucking Femboy prey blood sucking Uncaring Pred anklet bug vore bug pred

A pair of unlucky retail employees are attacked by a flesh dissolving bug.

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This story is one that I wrote a long time ago, the creature is based off of an old hand drawn set I saw back in the day called simply "Bugs". I don't remember the artist's name, but the story involved a bunch of nasty bugs eating and molesting a dorm full of college girls.

I did a little bit of editing to clean it up some, but the fact that it is one...
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WingedDevourer - 1 year ago

That's it! Was a fun series he made. Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Hinolul715 - 1 year ago

I know exactly what your talking about! The artist's name was Alberich. I think they deleted all their work. I know the 2nd half of "Bugs" is on ehentai. Very Nice story^^

WingedDevourer - 1 year ago

Always happy to hear you enjoyed it! :)

gonzodingo - 1 year ago

Another wonderful way for you to go. Love it!

WingedDevourer - 1 year ago

Thanks, glad you liked it! :)

gonzodingo - 1 year ago

This was a fantastic story!

 'Congratulations!' is the message displayed across the holographic note I received from a Federation courier, 'You have been selected to serve on the Federation's new experimental cruiser X-1. A fully automated ship who's crew is tasked with monitoring the ships functions and AI to assess weather the technology is viable for an interplanetary defense fleet.' I couldn't believe my luck, such a cush gig for my first assignment straight out of the academy. Even better, my best friend through

Security Protocols

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: WingedDevourer

Tags: Breasts Vacuum suction Cum latex boots Unwilling Prey vacuum vore Hard Digestion tube vore dickgirl Sci-Fi Elf prey Femboy prey machine vore space cadets Willing prey

Two fresh-faced cadets get more than they bargained for when what is supposed to be a cushy new assignment goes horribly wrong.

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Thanks to SunsetSarsaparilla (https://aryion.com/g4/user/SunsetSarsaparilla ) for creating the security system and allowing me to use it in this story.  

gonzodingo - 1 year ago

I look forward to your stories! This was another fantastic read!

WingedDevourer - 1 year ago

Thank you so much. :) Femboy prey needs much more love, I'm doing my best one digestive tract at a time!

TheHumanPred - 1 year ago

Dam that hot. Love femboy prey and hard digestion

Mr. Bonestripper

Uploaded: 1 year ago

Owner: WingedDevourer

Tags: Gore Blood Guro Bones chewing flesh Unwilling Prey Stockings machine Crossdressing Heels Femboy prey machine vore Inanimate predator Machine pred tearing skin Mr Bonestripper nothing but trouble

Always come to a complete stop at a stop sign...even in small abandoned towns.

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Was thinking about the movie, Nothing But Trouble, and got the inspiration for this one. I wasn't 100% sure if I should label it vore or not so I guess I'll leave that up to you all to decide.  

gonzodingo - 1 year ago

You as prey is rewarding for everyone!

WingedDevourer - 1 year ago

<3 Between this, Beastmaster, The Blob, and Tremors...I was ruined from a young age. I'm glad you liked it though, life of prey is terrifying but rewarding! :)

gonzodingo - 1 year ago

I feel like this movie also kick started my love of vore. Fabulous story as always! Love reading all the ways you've been eaten!

WingedDevourer - 1 year ago

Thanks! :)

GurgleBot - 1 year ago

This is scary but yay

I was out hiking near my home one cool morning when I can across a cave. Never noticing it before, I decide to go exploring in the depths. The natural light faded quick with every step farther into the maw of the cave, so I pulled out my flashlight. Just as the beam cut the dank, darkness I noticed that I almost walked right into something hanging from the ceiling. It looked like some sort of thin, flesh colored rope, but it was shiny....moist looking, slimy or sticky to the touch. I starte

The Cave: Barnacles

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: WingedDevourer

Tags: Digestion Bones first person Vore story Disposal Half-Life 2 Mindless Pred Barnacle ambiguous gender Willing prey

First person story of finding/raising the one who will eventually eat you.  

slaveboymeat - 1 year ago

Oh my GAWWD! You have to have played the game to realize how hot this is. Reminds me of the stupid stuff I used to do when I was younger, letting my hormones think for me. Lovely story!

gonzodingo - 1 year ago

Honestly, I found this story extremely hot.

WingedDevourer - 3 years ago

There are a few of us out here, lol. Definitely a small market for this kind of stuff. Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

WingedDevourer - 3 years ago

Thank you, glad you liked it!

WingedDevourer - 3 years ago

Thanks for the feedback!