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“Bwaooorurup! Phew…” Osakabehime wiped the sweat from her brow as she belched, finally having satisfied her cravings. Wobbling into her room with an overstuffed stomach, she sighed in content. “Finally get to take care of all this…”
Ever since she watched Tamamo gorge herself in front of a small crowd, the assassin found herself desiring meat. She wanted to feast just like she did… especially after hearing how she “disposed” of Nero once

Cozy (& Corpulent) Kotatsu

Uploaded: 4 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Fat Digestion Burp Weight Gain BBW writing F/FFF f/multiple kneading Multiple Preys Fate/Grand Order Osakabehime Tomoe Gozen

Osakabehime has gorged herself on some unfortunate servants, and wants to sit back and digest. Unfortunately(?) a certain archer arrives to help her with that, whether she's aware of it or not.

Happy vore day! This is an idea I've had for a while, but decided to write it up for today. I think its cute. 

donkdonknever - 3 years ago

Thank you for reading! I’ve actually already written a fic with Jinako, but she doesn’t eat anyone in it. As for Medb… I have some ideas.

DollyFailFail - 3 years ago

Osakabehime [i]and[/i] Tomoe? [i]And[/i] neither of them are prey?[i]AND[i] both of them are happy!?

I never knew it was possible to fall in love with a story.

(now we just need some Jinesha and/or Medb goodness, lord knows the Summer Death Jail is a great setup for Medb pred, and Jinesha is already a heccin chonk)

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you! I've always seen her more as a pred myself. A lazy, introverted pred, but a hungry one nonetheless!

noisekeeper - 4 years ago

Good stuff! Nice to see Hime-chan get to be in the pred role.

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you! I try to strive for a good balance between all three whenever I write.

“Mmmn…” Kaede groaned, mouth full of both thick nipples as she polished off the last few drops of her own breast milk. It was a common occurrence for her, ever since she started lactating as a side effect from one of Miu’s many experiments. She didn’t want to just waste it by dumping it out - so she drank it. Straight from the incredibly soft, squishy tap.
Kaede was big. Her weight had skyrocketed; the result of a significantly slower metabolism that was a side eff

Predatory Pianist Pile

Uploaded: 4 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain BBW Unwilling Lactation writing Willing F/FF SSBBW Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple immobile BBW pred Fast Digestion SSbbw pred danganronpa Multiple Preys chiaki nanami Kaede Akamatsu Miu Iruma Tsumugi Shirogane kirumi tojo immobile pred Danganronpa 2: Goodbye Despair Danganronpa V3: Killing Harmony

Kaede's been getting really fat, thanks to Miu's endless experiments. She's also really, really hungry. Thankfully there's a lot of food around.

This is a birthday gift for  solodots! Check out their work for more fat fuck Kaede. 

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you very much! It really means a lot. I’ll pick up my doctorate of vorology with a focus in fats on my way out

shadow9774 - 4 years ago

I'd say you've gotten that formula down to a science. You consistently put out interesting and engaging stories. I also feel as though your pacing has gotten even better, which is saying something considering it was already great. As always looking forward to any stories you decide to release!

shadow9774 - 4 years ago

I'd say you've gotten that formula down to a science. You consistently put out interesting and engaging stories. I also feel as though your pacing has gotten even better, which is saying something considering it was already great. As always looking forward to any stories you decide to release!

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you! I love the progression of shameless gluttony, eating bigger and bigger meals until she needs an entire person, and then fattening them up as well!

grip5 - 4 years ago

Amazing as always! I love how you describe
Kaede's gluttony and her sole desire to only eat and grow! Great transition in pred/pray scale between Kaede's first meals and second part. Whole "Room-filling Kaede is so *big* that now she won't be satisfied by -normal- fat girls, she needs a blob of girl fattened by hectolitres of milk, even fattening further when she's being eaten" was wonderful! Made my day <3

Just past midnight. The entry hall to their shared apartment was filled with a muted, churning gurgling, and the grunts of exertions of one terribly overfilled Ultimate Assassin.
Why did I take this damn contract, again? Ugh... Maki internally lamented the fact that her hips were barely able to clear the door as she shuffled slowly forward, hands gripping the side of a belly that was filled far past any reasonable limit, tinged quite red and planted firmly on the floor. The colossal orb was end

Maki's Massive Meals

Uploaded: 4 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain Reformation Lactation writing Willing SSBBW Female Pred f/multiple immobile SSbbw pred danganronpa Kaede Akamatsu maki harukawa Danganronpa V3: Killing Harmony

Maki comes home late at night, nursing a stuffed gut. She hopes that Kaede won't notice. She does. Things escalate from there.

This was adapted from an RP that I did with https://www.deviantart.com/blueskyez ! She's a very talented fats writer, so I implore everyone to check her out (especially if you like Big Fats)! 

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you! I have a feeling that detail is in no small part due to my RP partner, so please check out her work if you enjoyed this!

StygianSkies - 4 years ago

You went into more detail here with the erotic encounter than you usually do. Was hot to see them both slowly realize they wanted Kaede to end up in a belly by the end of the night

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you! If you enjoyed this, please take a look at Skye's work on DA!

shadow9774 - 4 years ago

Another well written story! Great job on the pacing, it was very engaging!

Mahiru couldn’t have been happier.
Laying down on the soft grass, warmed by the gentle sun, everything was just perfect. She had wobbled out to the hill for a picnic with her girlfriends, and they were busying themselves with their dessert - Mahiru’s thick, creamy breast milk.
She always loved to feed them, but quickly began to pack on the pounds herself. Though Karen and Hikari loved being so soft and jiggly, they wanted Mahiru to be the biggest of all of them. Her weight skyrockete

Mahiru's Wet Dream

Uploaded: 4 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Fat Breast Expansion BBW Unwilling Lactation writing dream Willing Breast Vore F/FF Nipple Vore SSBBW Female Prey Female Pred revue starlight mahiru tsuyuzaki karen aijo hikari kagura

Mahiru's a fat fuck with big tiddy. Her girlfriends like to drink her milk, but what if her chest sucked back (wow) (huge if true) (gone wrong) (gone sexual?)

This was a birthday gift for spark-er over on DA. Check out his gallery for good fats: https://www.deviantart.com/spark-er 

kibroman - 4 years ago

Where can I get very good quality milk?

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you!! More milk is always good

StygianSkies - 4 years ago

It's always fun when a big girl's chest gets the milky treatment, especially when its output is enhanced with help from some cute girlfriend stuffing! Great fic

“Uggh…”
Kasumi was feeling weird.
She couldn’t shake the feeling since the night before. She had just finished trying out a new recipe, but the taste wasn’t quite there. She had a hard time sleeping as well, and woke up feeling… sticky? Groggy? She wasn’t quite sure, but there was definitely something wrong with that bread.
Walking into the club room, she was exhausted. Only Shizuku was there, quietly reading a book. “Weh… this humidity is

All-consuming Kasumi

Uploaded: 4 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Slime Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain Absorption BBW Unwilling writing Willing Slimegirl SSBBW Mass Vore Female Pred f/multiple slime transformation Love Live Multiple Preys kasumi nakasu

Kasumi eats some weird bread and becomes a slime. Then she realizes she can eat her friends and become the biggest idol around (literally).

I've wanted to write something like this for a while. Slimes are great.

This was a birthday gift for  MakiOsimi! They're really cute and sweet. :kasusuteki: 

Smoge16 - 4 years ago

This is seriously just so, so amazingly good. She sheer amount of gluttony on display and all of the visceral, weighty descriptions of her fat and goopiness are just fantastic to read.

Deviantfan16 - 4 years ago

Great Story. Slimes can be fun to write and I really liked this. Slimes are meant to be Blobs, they’re synonymous for a reason. Mass Vore is always good too. I’d honestly wanna join them as part of her.

PokeGirlLover01 - 4 years ago

Exactly! Blobs are great, vore is great and slime girls are great, and combined they’re just sooooooo satisfying LOL.

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you! There's something really satisfying about a slime becoming a blob.

PokeGirlLover01 - 4 years ago

An absolutely phenomenal story!!! Slime girls are absolutely some of the best, and slime vore is just soooooo satisfying!!

You wake up slowly, and almost immediately you can tell something is wrong. You weren’t in your bed, and you find yourself unable to move your arms or legs. You try to speak, but--
“Mmphf--!?”
Your mouth is full of… something. Something quite sweet, in fact. Curiously, you gulp it down, finding it a bit difficult without the use of your hands.
As you devour the tasty treat, you take a look at your surroundings. It took a bit of effort to place it, but it looks like you&

Feeding Yuu

Uploaded: 4 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Fat Digestion Weight Gain BBW Unwilling writing feeding Force Feeding Unwilling Pred gluttony SSBBW Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple Love Live Second Person POV Multiple Preys 2nd Person ayumu uehara yuu takasaki

Ayumu's a little yandere, so she ties up Yuu and forces her to eat until she gets as big as she wants.
Also you are Yuu.

This was the winner of that poll I did a few months ago! I had a lot of fun writing it. POV fiction is really great, but there seems to be a lack of pred pov. 

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

Thank you! And probably, this was really fun. Need more pred pov fics

AlaxWenbu - 4 years ago

Really enjoyed the story, will you continue writing in 2nd person?

kibroman - 4 years ago

Thank you very much, you are a very kind person.
I would like to see passionlip being devoured

donkdonknever - 4 years ago

She didn’t eat anyone. If you’re wondering about why she’s bigger, it’s because she was in another story of mine which I didn’t upload here. You can find all of them on my da: https://www.deviantart.com/donkdonknever/gallery/66492742/fate-grand-order

kibroman - 4 years ago

ok if you are so kind to answer
in your last story of fate ´´Starving Salter´´ BB seemed to have eaten someone.
To who?

“Ugh, I cannot believe her!” Hilda stomped around her messy room, papers scattered along with laundry, both dirty and clean. “Why does the professor think I’m a good choice on the battlefield!”
She sighed, laying down on the unmade bed. She was just so tired of having to fight all the time, and she didn’t know why Byleth kept choosing her, week after week. No matter what she did, how much she begged, the professor refused to remove her from the frontline.
So,

Hilda's Tummy Tactics

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion Weight Gain BBW Unwilling writing Implied Vore gluttony Fire Emblem SSBBW Mass Vore Female Pred f/multiple immobile Implied breast vore Multiple Preys gluttonous pred Fire emblem Three Houses Byleth byleth (female) Hilda Valentine Goneril Marianne von Edmund Byleth Eisner

Hilda doesn't want to fight, but Byleth keeps picking her every time. So she tries to think up a strategy that would allow her to fight a lot easier. And gain a lot of weight.

I didn't expect this to be the next upload but I was possessed by the Vorny Spirit and was forced to. Enjoy some hongry blob. 

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Agreed!

HildaVGoneril - 5 years ago

Hilda stories are always nice to see :)

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Thank you for reading! This idea got stuck in my head so I just had to write it. Everything fit together immediately, I had to!

JustThatDude - 5 years ago

An effortless strategy for a student who hates effort. And here we see why Byleth's a genius and why you made a wonderful story!

Deviantfan16 - 5 years ago

Hilda is one of the Best Gold Deer Girls. Hope she gets a good flow of food, she should keep growing.

Deep in the forest, the deer girl Mari skipped around. She was a curious, carefree forest spirit who loved to explore, and she was doing just that. Wandering through the forest, she found many snacks to sample: fruits, berries, maybe a little treat a careless hunter left behind. But today, she found something different.
“Oh, what’s this?”
Poking her head through the bushes, she came upon a large, open field. In the middle was a large building surrounded by a fence, unlike any s

Mari Eats the Hol Farm

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain Fatal Lactation writing Willing gluttony Mass Vore Female Pred Cow Girl Original Character f/multiple massive belly Deer girl Casual vore Multiple Preys cow girl prey deer girl pred

Mari is a cute deer girl with a very, very large appetite. When she finds a farm in the middle of the woods, she's in for quite the feast.

This was my half of a trade with the very talented  Smoge16 ! Mari is a super cute character and I was really excited to give writing her a shot!

You can check out his half of the trade here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/579070 

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Thank you so much! If you enjoyed this, then I'd recommend reaching the other half of the trade in the description!

heromc - 5 years ago

Wow, not my usual tastes, but I loved the whole thing!

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Thank you!!

shadow9774 - 5 years ago

Excellent story, very well written. Pacing was great and was easy to follow. The story itself sucks you in. Looking forward to more of your writings. :)

VincentShadowScale - 5 years ago

Wish I could've gotten to feast on that farm~

Idols are Delicious, Zura!

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Breasts Belly Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain BBW Fatal Unwilling Huge belly Big Breasts f/multiple overweight Onomatopoeia Huge breasts Stomach Noises Love Live Multiple Preys CrossCrescent before and after Story in description hanamaru kunikida Love Live! Sunshine!!

“Mmm… nice and full, zura~”

Hanamaru had a smug, satisfied grin on her face as she hugged her massive stomach. She had just stuffed herself full of her friends, Yoshiko and Ruby. Not that she even remembered their names anymore. To her, they were just food. Nice, big meals to fill her belly up just right.

Grrggl…

Maru moaned softly as her greedy gut got to work, groaning and gurgling loudly as acids began to seep in. The girls inside shouted and...
[ Continued ...

dekabreak - 5 years ago

Love Live has been popular yet i still haven't seen any of it!
Not that it matters but because of "Zura" i was expecting, no joke, for this to be a Gintama thing with a pred saying "Zura" only for a long haired terrorist with a weird pet to punch the pred while yelling "IT'S NOT ZURA, IT'S KATSURA!" and that being the joke.
Kinda sad it wasn't that honestly

Blackheartedreaper2 - 5 years ago

Amazing, nice commission.

noytch - 5 years ago

i'm liking the facial expression here along with the belly

Hangry Hanayo

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat F/F Weight Gain Breast Expansion BBW writing Female Prey Female Pred Love Live Nico Yazawa hanayo koizumi love live school idol project

Nico is Hanayo's feeder, but ends up as her food after she gets jealous of Pana's fat tits.

This was a gift for  Rawberry who also drew the thumbnail art for this fic. She's very nice and talented, so I highly recommend checking out her work!
You can see the whole image here: https://sta.sh/01qech0p9ei6 

“Ladies and gentlemen! Servants and Praetor! Please direct your attention towards the
westernmost table, as the contest is about to begin!”
Tamamo was in over her head.
Her day started out simply enough. After waking up and taking a shower, she made her way to the cafeteria to pick up her usual breakfast. It was a good way to start the day, and she would be able to check up on many of the other servants. She became quite interested in some of the women as they started to get quite&he

Tamamo no Hungry

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Belly Soft Vore Fat F/F Weight Gain Stuffing BBW Unwilling Lactation writing gluttony SSBBW Female Prey Female Pred BBW pred SSbbw pred Fate/Grand Order Tamamo No Mae Nero Claudius

The last of three commissions.
Tamamo beats Nero at an eating contest, and when she comes back for a second round, she finds the foxy caster much milkier... and more hungry.

This was commissioned by  123alfonzo123 

123alfonzo123 - 5 years ago

Yeah, tamamo x nero bbw yuri sounds pretty good.
Tamamo cats belly fodder anyway

Blarginated - 5 years ago

I am 100% on board with that plan; every part of it

123alfonzo123 - 5 years ago

As the commissioner, I'd prefer fi more nero eats tamamo cat and there both the same relative fatness, maybe for yuri or not iunno

Blarginated - 5 years ago

That's one huge meal in the making. I support this act of vengeance.

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Thank you! I love writing fat preds a lot

BWOOOOOOOORP!
Mmm... you put up a good fight, but you were way too tasty for me to stop. You’re mine now. Just food for my hungry belly.
How is it in there? Cramped? I can feel you struggling... desperately trying to wriggle your way out. There are so many thick layers of pudge between you and freedom, but keep trying. It feels so good...
GRRROOOOWL
Sounds like my belly’s ready to start digesting you. Can’t wait to gurgle you up into more belly chub for me to play with. So soft

POVore

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion Weight Gain F/? BBW Fatal teasing point of view BBW pred F/reader

Just a lil fic for vore day. Something different. Let me know what you think of it. 

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

That's the best right there. Shameless gluttony like that is what I'm here for.

Tethys - 5 years ago

Yesssss. Big shameless gluttons reveling in their size and insatiability.

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Thank you so much for the comment!
I really just wanted to get to the meat (lol) of what I really love about vorish teasing and stuff. Fat, greedy preds talking about how gluttonous and hungry they are is just... *chef's kiss*

Tethys - 5 years ago

Second person normally isn't my thing - I think the reader-as-prey-or-pred stuff is kinda awkward. But this evades the worst of that by making it dialogue only, and of course, you always hit the hottest of notes (to me) in the soft, greedy gainer mindset.

That dream, again. But this time, slightly different. Vira was thankful for that, at least. Less of the blood-stained battlefields, and more of the slow - slightly romantic - build up before it. A snippet from another person's life, and one that might almost be considered normal. Just a dream, and not a nightmare. She was there; Chevalier's old commander, a woman all too similar to Katalina. But this time, instead of on her deathbed, She was sitting across from me - from Vira - No, from Chevalie

Granblue Fattening: Katalina & Vira

Uploaded: 5 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Belly Soft Vore Fat F/F Weight Gain Stuffing BBW writing feeding gluttony SSBBW BBW Prey immobile BBW pred Vira SSbbw pred Granblue Fantasy Katalina

The full title wouldn't fit. It's Corpulent Katalina & Voracious Vira.

Vira accidentally discovers that Katalina has a fat fetish. Things escalate from there.

I've been working on this for a while with another writer, https://www.deviantart.com/ajamesm . They are very nice and a very good writer and without them this fic would not exist. Please give their gallery a look if you like fat girls. 

kirakiraMIRACLE - 3 years ago

god. this was really the one to do it. thanmk you

Tethys - 5 years ago

Agreed for sure. Definitely worth the long wait to read this and their gallery.

What gets me, though, more than that, is the description of the mindsets. The shameless or even proud gluttony and self-indulgence. The determination/obsession to feed and grow, even (especially) with how others look at them. Succumbing to their hunger over all else.

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Thank you so much! Describing the texture of fat is one of my favorite parts of writing any story. I try hard to get the feeling of soft flab across.
If you enjoyed the fic, please check out the co-author over on DA. They have some amazing fatfics.

Smoge16 - 5 years ago

Very good stuff! You do an excellent job describing fat, sir! I can practically feel the softness just from reading.

Nourishing Noire
Noire groaned as she awoke. Ever since her mother became the Exalt through a ridiculous scheme, Noire dreaded waking up. It always meant that, in one way or another, she would become more and more like Tharja.
Her bloated body was the easiest point of comparison. Though nowhere near her monolithic mother in terms of weight, Noire was much fatter than the average citizen. Her once trim tummy had exploded into a blanket of blubber, covering the entirety of her thick legs with warm

Nourishing Noire

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Belly Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Same Size BBW Fatal writing gluttony Fire Emblem SSBBW Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple BBW pred Fire emblem awakening Reluctant Pred SSbbw pred Multiple Preys Robin (female) Robin (Fire Emblem) Noire (Fire Emblem)

I'm not dead, y'all.

Sorry for not updating for a while. I've been super busy and haven't had the time to write. Thankfully things should be clearing up soon. Not back to weekly updates, but hopefully I will be soon.

Anyways, Noire is a big fatty who doesn't like eating people, so Robin decides to take matters into her own hands.

This is a sequel to https://aryion.com/g4/view/470529 

Tethys - 6 years ago

Noire is best girl. Unwilling/reluctant pred giving in to gluttony is also delightful.

I have to say, I've generally not been a huge fan of immobile-fat predators but you have a way of making it work.

GMX - 6 years ago

Hehe Noire turning out to be just like her mother, a perfect princess at that too

Deviantfan16 - 6 years ago

Noire was nice and glad to see you again.

“Sorry for meeting so suddenly, Nightingale.” Mash sat nervously, fidgeting with her skirt.
“It is not an issue.” The large nurse gently smiled, resting her chubby hands on her titanic triple-rolled tummy. “There’s no need to be so anxious. Please, speak your mind.”
“Thank you.” Mash closed her eyes and took a deep breath before continuing. “I... I want to gain weight.”
“Hmm...” Nightingale put a hand to her many thick

Carnivorous Kouhai

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain Fatal Unwilling writing romance SSBBW Female Prey Female Pred immobile ssbbw prey Fate/Grand Order Mata Hari Gudako Ritsuka Fujimaru Mash Kyrielight Mashu Kyrielight

Another story in my series about f/go girls getting fat.

Mash wants to become really, really big. So she eats the biggest girl she can find.

I liked writing this quite a bit. It took me a while but I really enjoy it. 

Deviantfan16 - 6 years ago

Okay then. Though maybe update some who've continued to get fatter

donkdonknever - 6 years ago

It isn't really anything special. Just sort of a "recap" story that looks at all the servants that've grown as well as all the eaten servants getting summoned back.

Deviantfan16 - 6 years ago

Could you tell me? I'd like to know about them

donkdonknever - 6 years ago

It’s a very real possibility that she could come back. I have some ideas for that.

Deviantfan16 - 6 years ago

Could she make a reappearance in the future? It frankly could just be a cameo and it'd help. Like Gudako tries to resummon the other eaten servants and Mata Hari is one of them.

Faye sighed as she checked her phone. A few days before her dependable chair broke, so she was unable to use her computer until a replacement came in. Something sturdy that wouldn’t crack under her immense weight. But until then, Faye lounged on her bed, lazing about as she scrolled on her phone.
She received dozens of replies to her cragslist ad every day but none of them felt... right. None of them were devoted. None of them wanted to be gulped down, sloshed up, and slowly churned into l

I Want To Eat Monster Girls! 4

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Slime Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain BBW Fatal writing Willing Slimegirl Monster girl Female Prey BBW Prey Female Pred BBW pred slimegirl prey

A continuation of my series about a human eating monster girls.

Featuring a loaded slime girl and a bloated maid.

I said there would be at least more story, and that was true. There will also be more after this. 

Tethys - 6 years ago

I can dig it. Some stories just lead into a natural end point. As long as you're still writing, I'll be happy, but I always enjoy when a plotline is wrapped up.

donkdonknever - 6 years ago

Thanks a lot. The next story I’m working on is part 5 of this series. It’ll probably be the end of Faye’s story, but I’m still interested in writing more stories in a similar vein.

Tethys - 6 years ago

Just chiming in after another reread, following up on how excellent Nourishing Noire was, that I'm verrrry interested to see how this pans out, if there's a continuation in the works.

donkdonknever - 6 years ago

I have an idea on which monster girl will be next, but I haven't thought much about after that.
I'll keep these suggestions in mind in the future!

Deviantfan16 - 6 years ago

0-0 I did not know they were a thing

The summoning circle glowed, the golden orbs swirling around it. After a bright flash, a woman stood in the circle.
“My name is Xuanzang Sanzang! Through the guidance of the Buddha, I have arrived!”
Gudako sighed. “Could you wait over here?”
“Yes!” The busty monk skipped off next to the master. As Sanzang exited the circle, it began to glow again, summoning something else.
Gudako rubbed the bridge of her nose. Ever since she lost Scathach and Mordred to Nighti

Strengthening Sanzang's Stomach

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion Burp Weight Gain BBW Fatal Unwilling Pred F/FF Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple Multiple Preys Fate/Grand Order Gudako Ritsuka Fujimaru Xuanzang Sanzang

Another story in my series about f/go girls getting fat.

Alternative title: fun ways to interpret game mechanics.

Apologies if Sanzang is out of character in this. I've only ever played on the Japanese server and never read a story translation. 

Blarginated - 6 years ago

Reminds me of my own NP3 Sanzou. Good times

Prometheus003 - 6 years ago

Nice...now Mordred and Scathach must return so they can get their own fattening, such as a competition between them for who can get bigger faster...

Faye’s chair squeaked loudly as she fell into it. It had been a week since Jess had become part of her big body, and she was looking for someone new to join her. The black haired girl updated the info on her cragslist ad, which was convenient excuse to show off her fattened form to any interested prey. The picture attached was of her nude, grabbing a great handful of her blubbery belly. The caption: ”You could become a member of this big fat stomach with your fellow monster girls.&rd

I Want To Eat Monster Girls! 3

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain Stuffing Naga BBW Fatal Lamia writing Willing Monster girl Female Prey BBW Prey Female Pred Naga Prey BBW pred lamia prey snake girl prey

A continuation of my series about a human eating monster girls.

Featuring a big lamia who can't wait to get slurped up and turned into fat.

There'll be at least one more part uploaded after this. I'm still in the process of writing it. 

GrandestBlue - 6 years ago

I was guessing her new partner would be the same lamia from the vid that got her into vore. Oh well.

Vmaster608 - 6 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter.

PharaohAnon - 6 years ago

Gods this story is freaking hot! Getting to devour monster girls, Faye is so lucky.

Bobrocks - 6 years ago

If anything, I hope she grows taller. I mean, I my self do like a fair woman like her, but she should grow in height.

rabidPsionic - 6 years ago

This keeps getting better and better!

“Jeez... people on the internet these days are so rude.”
It had been a day since Faye had devoured Tara. She scrolled through her messages. Quite a few people replied to cragslist ad, but none of them felt... right. She placed a hand on her chubby belly as it growled. Her old clothes still fit, but they were stretched tight over her fattened form. If someone was going to join Tara as fat on her body, they would have to stand out somehow.
So Faye kept scrolling. She sifted through spa

I Want To Eat Monster Girls! 2

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain Milk Same Size BBW Fatal Lactation writing Willing Monster girl Female Prey Female Pred Cow Girl holstaur

A continuation of my series about a human eating monster girls.

A chubby cow girl gets milked then gulped.

In case you haven't noticed, I really like writing stories with lactation.

(I swear I'm not subtweeting anyone with the intro) 

hungryvix - 6 years ago

I just wanna say that you are one of my absolute favorite authors in this site and I'm really looking forward to more of your original work!

supersaiyango - 6 years ago

Are the girls aware in the fat? I really like living fat stories

“I can’t stand her! She pushes me to my limit every single day and don’t even let me take any breaks!”
“It isn’t my fault you’re such a lazy student. I’ve trained dogs more disciplined than you.”
Nightingale was in an awkward situation. She was sitting at her desk as two women, Mordred and Scathach argued with each other. Mordred was much louder and vulgar than Scathach, but the lancer’s cold jabs fired right back. Nightingale was suppo

Nightingale's Digestive Therapy

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion Burp Weight Gain BBW Fatal Unwilling Willing F/FF Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple Multiple Preys Fate/Grand Order Gudako Ritsuka Fujimaru Mordred scathach florence nightingale

Another story in my series about f/go girls getting fat.

Nightingale attempts to help Mordred and Scathach. It doesn't end very well for the couple, but they pad Nightingale's body quite nicely.

This story was requested by an anon over on /d/ a few weeks ago. I really enjoyed writing it. 

Artist-san - 6 years ago

No problem. A lot of people I know are starved for criticism and apparently we lost a good writer here due to low feedback on his works. It was sad to hear about, so I decided I might as well help the writer community out here a little more. Unfortunately, its an "if I don't who will?" situation.

donkdonknever - 6 years ago

Hey, thanks for all the feedback. Your comments have been the most critical I've gotten and I'm actually really thankful for that. I want to improve and it's comments like yours which help push me.

I could make excuses, but a lot of the points you bring up are totally fair. I'll try to keep what you've said in mind when I write.

Artist-san - 6 years ago

I am really liking how all these stories tie together like a web, it's a nice touch. Though there was something odd about Nightingale's writing.

The whole time I was reading, I was thinking "Why is the berserker playing the straightman in all this?" She was too sane and levelheaded even after she ate them. I can't imagine the woman who rushes off onto the battlefield with no sense of self, who attempts to amputate others without listening to those explaining that it isn't necessary to do so and generally being one to not listen to other people at all. For someone as forceful and adamant as Nightingale to be the straightman in this story, it just seems out of character.

I can see her more likely getting fed up with the two parties, deciding to restrain both girls together with her military techniques and eat them aggressively at the same time rather than reason. She would probably claim they have some sort of mental disease to justify doing so. The digestive scene could be a bit longer, but it was alright to say the least.

Overall, the whole story sequence was silly until the master walked into the room to settle her perverted desires again. Though at least you had a good time with this, as out of character as it was. I look forward to seeing that BB story, since you tied it into the series.

Anyway, I hope none of my criticism seems too harsh or even offensive. I saw these stories yesterday and really wanted to give an input on them since they're recent.

Kojiro Sasaki patrolled the halls of Chaldea. It was late at night, when most servants should have been asleep in their quarters. However, Kojiro took it upon himself to act as a sort of guardian. Ever since the samurai’s glory days slaying many wyverns in France, he found himself on the sidelines. Not wanting to be a waste of resources, Kojiro began to act as security late at night. It was perfect work for an assassin such as him.
Though he spent nearly every night scouting the quiet hall

Massively Hungry Mata Hari

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion Burp Weight Gain F/M Hypnosis Fatal Unwilling writing SSBBW Male Prey Female Pred f/multiple immobile Multiple Preys Fate/Grand Order Mata Hari Gudako Ritsuka Fujimaru sasaki kojirou

Another story in my series about f/go girls getting fat.

This features everyone's favorite 1-star assassin becoming enormous. She eats nearly all of the bronze servants for her beloved master.

Personally I'm uncomfortable writing underage prey, so that's why Paul didn't get swallowed. Don't expect any stories with Jack either.
Shuten Douji, on the other hand... 

Artist-san - 6 years ago

This was a pretty neat idea. Though Kojiro seems to be a odd candidate for to write for the prey in this occasion. I think Blackbeard or Shakespeare or even Mozart would have been a lot more interesting to write in this situation. Possibly more fun to write too. Kojiro just doesn't seem to fit for the whole "helpless in front of predator situation".

The writing for his mental resistance was very off. Mata Hari isn't very hard for someone like him to pull away from. Though if he weren't aware of her being a threat, it would be more convincing. Kojiro sensed danger from Mata Hari, which he shouldn't have. The fact that one doesn't see Mata Hari a threat is how her allure works. It's a skill of her's called Espionage. She would also have to dance to charm him and well... she clearly can't dance in that state. Hence why i say it would've been better to write different character in his spot. The pheromones she wears can also make it work, but you didn't write about that.

The way you wrote the scene looked as if he were under a psychic pull or puppetery rather than charm. The fact that Kojiro still able to think made the scene look very off, since he has the ability to clear his mentality as a skill. Overall, the whole charm scene was written awfully, but I hope you at least had fun with it. That's what matters. I have no other comments on the writing besides the same ones on overused words from your last story.

Artist-san - 6 years ago

This was a pretty neat idea. Though Kojiro seems to be a odd candidate for to write for the prey in this occasion. I think Blackbeard or Shakespeare or even Mozart would have been a lot more interesting to write in this situation. Possibly more fun to write too. Kojiro just doesn't seem to fit for the whole "helpless in front of predator situation".

The writing for his mental resistance was very off. Mata Hari isn't very hard for someone like him to pull away from. Though if he weren't aware of her being a threat, it would be more convincing. Kojiro sensed danger from Mata Hari, which he shouldn't have. The fact that one doesn't see Mata Hari a threat is how her allure works. It's a skill of her's called Espionage. She would also have to dance to charm him and well... she clearly can't dance in that state. Hence why i say it would've been better to write different character in his spot. The pheromones she wears can also make it work, but you didn't write about that.

The way you wrote the scene looked as if he were under a psychic pull or puppetery rather than charm. The fact that Kojiro still able to think made the scene look very off, since he has the ability to clear his mentality as a skill. Overall, the whole charm scene was written awfully, but I hope you at least had fun with it. That's what matters. I have no other comments on the writing besides the same ones on overused words from your last story.

cr055x - 6 years ago

*Ibaraki

cr055x - 6 years ago

Shuten is great and all, but what about Iburaki Douji?

algog8 - 6 years ago

If this was in game I'd feed her x10 rolls every hour.

Medusa felt like something was off. Normally Chaldea is a loud, chaotic place. But now it was nearly silent, save for the quiet hum of the fluorescence lights above. Despite the tension in the air, the tall, purple haired woman kept her cool. Her heels clacking as she quickly moved through the empty facility. She finally had some quiet alone time.
A few days ago, Gudako told her that she would be gone for a few days with some of the other servants for an event. She took most of her stronger serv

Gluttonous Gorgon

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain BBW Fatal Unwilling writing Monster girl Female Prey Female Pred f/multiple Multiple Preys Fate/Grand Order Gorgon (Fate) Medusa (Fate)

This is the first vore story in a series I've been writing about f/go girls getting fat. You might see some references in this and some other stories about characters that haven't shown up, like Boudica.

I'm not entirely satisfied with this story. Something about it doesn't sit right with me. I don't know. 

Artist-san - 6 years ago

Writing out the sound effects in caps is probably why the story doesn't sit right. The sounds are plain and don't have much imagination to them. You should also make new lines each time a character speaks so readers don't get confused. It makes longer stories much easier to bookmark in memory. I certainly wasn't confused while reading this but having to scroll left and right to read the text in every paragraph was definitely tiring. Better formatting would have helped me and other readers see the effort you put in your stories much clearer.

The words in this story also get redundant after reading on for a while. You might want to edit the text with a thesaurus on hand to add word diversity. Seeing some words 2-3 times in one paragraph tired me out as I tried to get through it all.

The digestion scene was alright I suppose. There was nothing really interesting about it. I was left wondering what was actually going on inside Gorgon's stomach, no dialogue or written reaction for Medusa reuniting with her sisters in the stomach. Regardless, this story has the best written dialogue out of your 3 FGO stories. You captured Gorgon's character a lot better than other servants.

Robin loved her job. Ever since Tharja had been given the title of Exalt by Chrom, Robin had been assigned to be her personal assistant. She took care of paperwork, talked with diplomats, and served as an expert advisor. It was hard work, but immensely satisfying.
As Tharja grew larger with each criminal she had eaten, Robin began to take interest in her Exalt’s blubbery body. Tharja noticed this, and began to feed Robin the occasional criminal, rewarding her loyalty. It wasn’t long

Robin the Ravenous Assistant

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain F/M Same Size BBW writing Fire Emblem Female Prey Male Prey Female Pred f/multiple BBW pred Fire emblem awakening Multiple Preys Willing prey Robin (female) Robin (Fire Emblem)

A sequel to my previous Fire Emblem story.

Robin is a really good fatty. I might have to write more stories about her.

This is a sequel to https://aryion.com/g4/view/470528 

GMX - 6 years ago

Ooo I shall~

donkdonknever - 6 years ago

I wasn't, but seeing this comment gave me an idea for one.
Look out for it in the future!

GMX - 6 years ago


Mmm robin is a pretty great fatty~
Ever thought on making a story on Noire?

Deviantfan16 - 6 years ago

Sequels are quite fun :). This turn of events has been fun so far and hope to see you continue it soon

Marisa was an average 22 year old college student. She worked hard and all, but was mostly just average at everything. Average height, average weight, average grades: you name it, she was average at it. One day, she got a phone call while doing homework. It was her friend, Chel.
“Marisa, you gotta come over here right now.” A hurried voice on the other line said.
“Why? I have work to do.”
“Just do it, please! I’m telling you it’ll be worth it!”
Mar

Keep Growing 1

Uploaded: 6 years ago

Owner: donkdonknever

Tags: Oral Vore Soft Vore Fat Digestion F/F Weight Gain Same Size BBW Fatal writing Willing Female Prey BBW Prey Female Pred

I'm going to be uploading some of my older stories over the next couple of days.

This is the first one I finished, written around two months ago. It's really rough and I might get around to rewriting at some point. 

donkdonknever - 5 years ago

Thank you so much! This series was the first piece of fiction I worked on when I started writing kink fic. I might re-do it someday, because there are a bunch of errors with it that keep me from enjoying it.

Geckoman7019 - 5 years ago

I don’t usually comment, but I absolutely love this series. Great work and I hope you continue it if possible. Marisa can’t stop growing.