Posted by TheUnforgiven 16 years ago Report

Holy crap.

Your work is so incredible! The detail and buildup here are awesome. I can only thank you for sharing...and encourage you to KEEP WRITING (and manipping)! Thanks again!

Posted by IGA 16 years ago Report

Great!! it's so rare now to find a writer that continues the story after the pred swallows the prey. I love that she is moving around with the huge belly. If you got more coming, i'll be looking for certian!!

Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report

That's fantastic! Very well done. I love a story that's well written and where there's suspense.

Posted by Sarus 16 years ago Report

Thanks a lot for the comments guys, they're a great encouragement :)

Posted by Fidel2323 16 years ago Report

really great story, i love it, it is so romantic <3

Posted by Vorefreak 16 years ago Report

Wow. Incredible, simply incredible.

Posted by Lamnia 16 years ago Report

Possibly my favorite story so far. Wish you would make it a interactive story on this site. See what paths we would go in that world.

Posted by sansuki 16 years ago Report

I'm not quite sure how I missed all your work, but when I read this off of the Latest Updates I was thrilled. When I realized there were other stories of yours I hadn't seen, I was amazed and giddy. Applause.

Posted by Binge 16 years ago Report

That was easily one of the best stories I've read

Posted by 11millionseconds 16 years ago Report

Oh yeah, I didn't comment on this yet, but... best story I've read in a while!

Posted by eatmeup 16 years ago Report

Absoultely incredible vore story. This is easily one of the best written and best described soft vore stories I have ever read. The digestion makes the story perfect. And great twist with the gel by the way.

Posted by Sarus 16 years ago Report

Many thanks for the kind feedback, it's always a pleasure to hear that someone enjoyed a story :)

Posted by Jacquelope 16 years ago Report

Now how did I miss this? Great work, this story was friggin' hilarious (in a good way)! Especially this part, "And there under the coconut tree, I would let him slide out of me, a perfect end to a perfect relationship." I actually snorted a mouth full of diet pepsi at that one. Well written indeed, and I'm not even into scat.

Posted by azza3695 13 years ago Report

Lol nicely done

Posted by printz 12 years ago Report

I really loved that story. It was very possibly the most erotic vore story I've ever read. Of course it has a lot to do with my having similar tastes but you do it so well.

Posted by vore2412 9 years ago Report

This is my first time reading this despite how long ago you wrote it, I was almost hoping he'd make it so he could fulfill her dream but alas, with his sister it was but a fluke, he's now only part of Chloe

Posted by NigmaAndroid 7 years ago Report

Just reread this again and got to say how great it still is. So happy to have refound this. Great buildup!!!

Posted by Shenzao 5 years ago Report

No plot?
We have introductions...
We have rising action.
We have climax!
We have falling action.
We have resolution...

What do you mean we don't have plot? It even has a little twist if the reader believes the introductions and ignores the tags. This is among the best vore stories I've ever read. Very well done.

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

This is still one of the best stories for vore period

Posted by Sarus 3 years ago Report

Thank you very much :)

Posted by 349qg853437tr48tr 2 years ago Report

Where can I find your interactive?

Posted by Sarus 2 years ago Report

Unfortunately it was deleted a long time ago by writing.com.

Posted by Whymanamajeff 1 year ago Report

Wow, just stumbled upon this story and it’s amazing the teasing and eventual climax is perfectly written’