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10/10.

So, I hauled ass to get this finished today because I wanted to wrap it up and move on.

I would like to take a break from Sophie comics for a little while and draw commissions again. I'll update my info and post a journal when I'm ready.

Thank you for reading!

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Humbug

Posted by Humbug 11 years ago Report

Sophie sympathy level + 10
Bee sympathy level -20

You're a very good visual storyteller. It's clear you know exactly how to manipulate people's emotions through dialogue, angles, expressions, and situations. I could learn a thing or two from you. :)

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noego

Posted by noego 11 years ago Report

Hmm. I'm getting a bad ending vibe to the Sophie / Belinda relationship.

EEEEXCELLENT story. Thanks!

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Teruyo

Posted by Teruyo 11 years ago Report

That's a little fucked up. In a good way. You're good at attaching realistic personalities to essentially throwaway characters, I like that.

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Deleteduser532

Posted by Deleteduser532 10 years ago Report

It is good but it is a far stretch to call the personalities realistic (unless this includes abnormal mentality). Sophie's personality is realistic. However, Belinda's personality is enigmatic to me. Her personality is bizarre, even when compared with humans with unusual mental disorders (or disturbing modes rationalization or thinking). Throughout most of stories like this one, Belinda seems to be acting in a fashion that is usually associated by someone "giving into the voice of the devil". In other words, Belinda's personality reflects that of a demon instead of a human. This may explain why Sophie has not attempted to devour Belinda. I am simply stating that I am gravely confused by Belinda's personality. I would be convinced that the personality is realistic if Belinda was portrayed as a succubus (or something similar) instead of a human. In addition, technically, any personality portrayed as realistic when present in the realm of vore. After all, the extent of the "realistic" quality of emotions and personalities presented in vore can only be hypothesized and/or theorized by our minds. Thus, in the end, the nature of a realistic personality present in the realm of vore is purely subjective. What may be fully convincing to you may be found to be completely barbaric and of pseudo-creation.

I have no idea why I felt like I needed to write this. Nevertheless, in a way, I am a slave to the creativity of my mind.

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SherlokKirya

Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report

That is a big comment, thank you for your effort you put to write it. I don't know if you will read it 5 years after, but still.
I think Belinda's personality is pretty realistic and close to that of a psychopath. She is manipulative towards Sophie and doesn't feel affection towards other human beings,

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Luckless

Posted by Luckless 11 years ago Report

You have a knack for story telling! I really liked the emotions this comic touched upon. Awesome catharsis! Thank you for making such artful smut!

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GenesisTerra

Posted by GenesisTerra 11 years ago Report

That was really interesting, but a tad bit too depressing for my tastes. I'm kind of spoiled in that way; I prefer to avoid downbeat stories in my fetishy interests (well, in general, but that's more of a personal issue).

I'm not saying its bad; quite the opposite in fact. It's an interesting idea for a story, and the characters driving forces are interesting. I think the ending was a little weak, but only because it turned from a story about choices to forced fetishism (on Bee's end).

I love the fact that these two have gone so far beyond fetish characters, though, so I'm glad I read it!

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player1

Posted by player1 11 years ago Report

I kind of join you in your thoughs. I don't like such stories that reminds you how life can be in fetishs, as if there wasn't enough way to remind you so. Great story though, dramatic and heart breaking.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

It could be said that life is often out of our control; that despite the choices we make, fate may have other plans.

You could also say that Belinda made a choice.

Anyways, thanks for the comment!

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 6 years ago Report

This story made me wish for non fatal vore, ending and I could not bare to read all of it, good job.

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Hermit20

Posted by Hermit20 11 years ago Report

And now I want both of them to die.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Everybody dies someday.

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DrakeZephyr

Posted by DrakeZephyr 11 years ago Report

Well, I'd say she did go without murdering someone, it seems to me that title belongs fully in Belinda's court. Personally, a bit dark for my tastes, especially the way that girl is developing, but well drawn as always.

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ublover1

Posted by ublover1 11 years ago Report

very well done shyguy9!!!

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MrNobody

Posted by MrNobody 11 years ago Report

Belinda reminds me of pro-choice advocates.

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ndnode

Posted by ndnode 11 years ago Report

I am personally offended by this comment

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MrNobody

Posted by MrNobody 11 years ago Report

I've never been too supportive of abortion, especially not after finding out about Kermit the Baby Butcher.

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Reiko

Posted by Reiko 11 years ago Report

Implying we care about your political beliefs on a site where we jerk-off to individuals getting digested.

Don't care.

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MrNobody

Posted by MrNobody 11 years ago Report

You say you don't care, yet you still took time out to comment. :P

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x9comega

Posted by x9comega 10 years ago Report

Because we are trying to point out that comments like your really turn off the jack-off mood. Don't care about your poilitical beleifs, other people can do what they want, but don't bring it to a porn site. That's just rude to the people trying to get off.

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MrNobody

Posted by MrNobody 5 years ago Report

Nobody cares about what you find offensive. This isn't UC Berkeley.

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ndnode

Posted by ndnode 5 years ago Report

dude its a comment from 6 years ago, berkly wasent a thing then and i think most of us have grown up since then. chill

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gorgonzoladealer

Posted by gorgonzoladealer 5 years ago Report

Cringe

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Bright

Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report

I am not sure if this is a healthy relationship between the two of them.

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KingdomOfGray

Posted by KingdomOfGray 11 years ago Report

One thing still perks my curiosity: Why was Belinda covered in blood a few parts back? Is that just a mystery for the imagination?

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Jocaste

Posted by Jocaste 11 years ago Report

I smell a sequel <3 Or maybe that's just me thinking wishfully.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

That will be explained in a later comic; For now, it remains a mystery.

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CGR-7

Posted by CGR-7 11 years ago Report

Okay, so Bee being covered in blood was left open. I thought I missed something too. ^^

*Applause* Epic, Shyguy. Absolutely epic. =D

Bitchin' new avatar, btw.

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MrNobody

Posted by MrNobody 10 years ago Report

$50 says she's a serial killer! :P

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Royal_Starlord

Posted by Royal_Starlord 11 years ago Report

It'd be a twist if he was cursed with immortality. :o

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Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 11 years ago Report

You're the best and I love you.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Haha, love you too.

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InvasionEra

Posted by InvasionEra 10 years ago Report

I love you guys :3
and this website >.>

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miranda_dragon

Posted by miranda_dragon 11 years ago Report

Their relationship interests me how it's developed over time.

It's fascinating that Sophie may have more morals than Belinda.

Amazing.

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Robocloud

Posted by Robocloud 11 years ago Report

Kind like Humbug said, Sophie sympathy level +9001
Bee Somuchhatred

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vmoartet

Posted by vmoartet 11 years ago Report

CALLED IT!

Knew you were headed in this direction. Great work, dude!

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x9comega

Posted by x9comega 11 years ago Report

Im going to be perfectly honest. I screamed at my computer, begging Sophie to stop, that he wanted to live. Also, I feel like Belinda just kept him there because she was afraid that she would be the one killed if he wasnt there. At this point, I feel like Belinda is the real murderer here. I am sooooo mad at her.

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delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report

I agree, I think she needs to stop always ending her comics with death and depression ;( it's getting out of hand.

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razorbacknod

Posted by razorbacknod 11 years ago Report

Gotta admit I kinda felt like crap after how the comic progressed. It is pretty depressing to see how Belinda has kinda fallen into the role of maniac and encourages Sophie to eat just so she can get off. It was well done but way to dark in the end for my tastes.

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Gold_King

Posted by Gold_King 11 years ago Report

What are all these feels. So many. I just wanted to fap to a fat dragon eating people. Boner: fading. Heart: breaking. Can't stop talking like Shatner. It's so cold. So dark. So bleak. Will I dream?

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stressformurder

Posted by stressformurder 11 years ago Report

Best...comment...ever

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smashman

Posted by smashman 11 years ago Report

luckily, I'm still using all your feels. so what your actually feeling right now would be disappointment. the feel of 0. If you had all your feels right now, you'd have exploded from sheer rage at belinda's devious scheme as well as the (Guy's voice)PROFOUND SADNESS (echoes). ARG! FUCK! MY FEELS ARE ACTING UP AGAIN! DAMN YOU BELINDAAA!!!

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Lithalya

Posted by Lithalya 11 years ago Report

A little on the depressing side, Shy. :(

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delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report

Agreed!

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dezzykitsune

Posted by dezzykitsune 11 years ago Report

Damn Bee, you're cruel.

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Indighost

Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report

Aweosme. Love the emotional drama! Just how a great vore story should be.

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LEOEATER

Posted by LEOEATER 11 years ago Report

Its like Sophie is another victim and Belinda is the evil one

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OrcaSnack-Garth

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

Wow. What a bitch. I feel so sorry for Sophie. If she could just get some help, learn to control this urge, she just might have a better life and interact with more people without being branded as a monster. I guess we all know who the real monster is now.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

As far as either of them know, there is no way for Sophie to control her urges. She must consume or she will die.

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OrcaSnack-Garth

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

Well, I'm just happy I don't have to hate her. And I hope that she finds a way someday.

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OrcaSnack-Garth

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

I think she just needs to talk to someone. Someone who isn't mentally insane or won't judge her because she's a man-eating dragon. This may be a pain created by the mind, and what she needs to do is discover for herself what caused these urges to be implanted into her mind to begin with, which possibly originated from childhood or even before she was born.

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Ichasechubbies

Posted by Ichasechubbies 11 years ago Report

I'm so torn between feeling overwhelming pity for Sophie, and absolute unashamed love/hate for Belinda!
I hate her, yet am delighted by the surprising depth of her cruelty. Seeing her help ambush hapless victims in previous comics was nothing compared to this. She just seemed to love Sophie. Apparently she loves Sophie enough to trample anyone in her way, including Sophie. Sure, Sophie is scary, but she’s a predator. Belinda is a fucking monster, and like most true monsters: she just looks like another face in the crowd. How perfect!

Exceptional comic. Dynamite, plain and simple.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Thank you very much! These characters mean a lot to me, and I am humbled to have been able to generate so much emotion in my readers.

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Ichasechubbies

Posted by Ichasechubbies 11 years ago Report

It was really a pleasure to read, and although I'm betting you've heard it already: the new avatar is spot on perfect!

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dantheman42

Posted by dantheman42 11 years ago Report

Am... am I the only one here who doesn't hate Belinda after this?

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Not quite. I still like her.

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ndnode

Posted by ndnode 11 years ago Report

ditto me amigo

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Very

Posted by Very 11 years ago Report

I certainly don't! In fact she just became more interesting!

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htfcuddles

Posted by htfcuddles 11 years ago Report

This comic is deep. Deep in revealing aspects from your both characters, about the predator's morality or likes and the influences of the others around.

I should say that this is until now the comic here that I love the most. Is not the most amazingly/detailedly drawn, but the storytelling is awesome, the style works and the green helps to set a mood different than how this would be if was drawn in black.

Belinda decreased in my list of likes but Sophie went up in it. Still i can't say I dislike Belinda completely-- I have somebody that have told me verbatim the same words ("You can't think in them as people-- they're just food, nothing more") and I love that somebody to death. Altough that somebody respects when I like a prey and want to let it go, hehe.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

I think Bee truly believes those words. She may even believe that this is the only way to help Sophie, by desensitizing her to the violence she must commit on a regular basis in order to survive.

Bee is cruel, unforgiving and merciless towards her fellow man, but she loves Sophie. She just went too far this time.

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htfcuddles

Posted by htfcuddles 11 years ago Report

Makes sense.

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Eurodex

Posted by Eurodex 11 years ago Report

Very interesting to see this side of Sophie. Very touching story here. Thank you for it.

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chakatBombshell

Posted by chakatBombshell 11 years ago Report

Belinda the harshest type of predator. Total want and no real need for prey like Sophie.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

You are absolutely right.

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IGA

Posted by IGA 11 years ago Report

Great story. i loved it! and hated it at the same time. Poor sophie. itll be okay.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Thanks. Sophie needs all the emotional support she can get.

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Glaive

Posted by Glaive 11 years ago Report

So um...will we ever find out why Belinda had blood on her earlier?

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

That will be my next comic.

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MeTheMe

Posted by MeTheMe 11 years ago Report

Incredibly tragic, poor Sophie! Turns out Bee is much more... dangerous, perhaps for both potential prey and Sophie.

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StarBomber109

Posted by StarBomber109 11 years ago Report

Wooooooow, this story was amazing.

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Reiko

Posted by Reiko 11 years ago Report

Yeah, your character writing has gotten phenomenal. You're a credit to the community. Or you should be, honestly, vore has gotten pretty...bleh.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Thank you! The sentiment is really appreciated.

I enjoy being a part of this community and it would mean the world to me to be thought of in such a way.

I'll keep working hard, but I know there's still a long way to go. I learn something new every day.

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Reiko

Posted by Reiko 11 years ago Report

The simple fact that you use prose is an excellent start. Honestly, the way you're turning your characters from simple vore-engines to truly complex and fleshed out individuals is astounding, and I can't find any of its like amongst other artists.

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deathknight

Posted by deathknight 11 years ago Report

This shows more on bee's character of her being nothing more then a sexual monster, feeding people to sophie only to get her kicks. She needs comeuppance, not vore but a denial of sorts one that throws her to the wolves

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OrcaSnack-Garth

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

I have a feeling you're talking literally back there. But yeah, she pretty much IS a monster.

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Slash

Posted by Slash 11 years ago Report

A crying dragon and a sexually sated human girl. Hm, must be opposite day in vore world.

It's what happens when you get to know your food, instead of just eating it. Great story Shyguy.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

This might be my favorite comment on here.

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Lucky

Posted by Lucky 11 years ago Report

Fantastic! Your work is totally gnarly, dude. I mean, you've always been good at storytelling but this is another one of those significant rungs on the ladder.

It explains so much backstory and context without being contrived; handles issues of immense gravity that are core to the idea of vore and the psychological ramifications, and it sets up for so many other ideas and really draws to a close with the sense that this world is so much bigger and more complicated than what you've shown here.

Well done. : 3

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Rancid

Posted by Rancid 11 years ago Report

Nothing more profound to add. I mirror the bulk of the comments on this story, just had to throw in. Excellent story. I kinda figured from the beginning there would be no good way for this to end.

I was really hoping the guy would make it out of this one.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Even if it's not profound, I appreciate every comment made on my works... so thanks!!

I know a lot of people wanted to see Travis live, but dealing with dragons is a dangerous game. I think he made it out quite well, considering. He could have died without knowing any sort of love at the end; alone at the bottom of a river.

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Rancid

Posted by Rancid 11 years ago Report

There are, admittedly, worst ways to go. Still, the worst of it is seeing Sophie manipulated like that. She has enough on her plate as it is.

Vore joke.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I did making it!

I love these characters and I am excited to explore them further with everyone. It is my dream to completely tell their story someday.

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Lucky

Posted by Lucky 11 years ago Report

Sounds like a worthwhile goal. You seem to be on the right track so far. : 3

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Very

Posted by Very 11 years ago Report

Haha, goddamn, Belinda. I like how she and Sophie are like two sides of the same coin. I can definitely see Sophie, a dragon, having a capacity for caring for people (she's a predator because it's part of her nature) and Belinda comes across as a self-indulgent, pure sociopath, which is why I could see why she faces so much disdain after this. But I like her! She makes for an excellent villain.

I'd be intrigued to see how things unfold from here...!

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Awesome! I'm glad you feel that way. It's exactly the kind of point I was trying to get across. Theirs are two personalities I strongly associate with this fetish.

...Also, I find villains to be far more interesting than heroes, which might be why I'm obsessed with exploring the darker sides of my characters.

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Very

Posted by Very 11 years ago Report

I like villains a lot more too! Vore context or no, they just have a certain something that heroic characters lack, but overall I think grey morality is the most interesting territory, which is where motivation is a key aspect, not just the actions by themselves.
And it's also great to see Belinda get some more development!

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EveAra

Posted by EveAra 11 years ago Report

I really like this spin on a reluctant predator. This is the first time I've seen it done within a believable premise. Inspires me to do a little more work on my own characters. :)

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

I'm honored! I really like your work as well.

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Sebrenity

Posted by Sebrenity 11 years ago Report

Good as a story.
Emotional twists and turns an all.
Personally didn't like the ending from a "aw :C I liked that character" perspective but from a story telling perspective it was fantastically well done.
As others have said, I do not Belinda now, wasn't overly fond before, but not so much because she's being evil and predatory, after all, so many of our fav characters in are :P
-It's more the fact that she claims to love Sophie and will still do something like this to her, using her at her most vulnerable.
Ya don't do that to someone you love after all.

Putting waaaaay too much thought into this :P

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OrcaSnack-Garth

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

Exactly. If anything must be done to help Sophie, Belinda should be taken out of the equation, as she only seems to make things worse for her without her realizing it. She's blinded by the fact that "Bee" is the only one who showed her compassion.

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Sebrenity

Posted by Sebrenity 11 years ago Report

Only person that's still alive now anyway.

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OrcaSnack-Garth

Posted by OrcaSnack-Garth 11 years ago Report

I think it's fairly obvious that she is no human.

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6163

Posted by 6163 11 years ago Report

*puts on over-thinking hat*
So Sophie represents vore and the vore community as a whole, eager to eat people up but always seeking to justify or ignore the guilt. Belinda represents the implications of vore, that someone has to be killed. Sophie gets mad at the implications she doesn't want to hear, but does nothing to confront them. She just continues the game because at the end of every vore piece someone has to be eaten.

Exemplified by this very comment section, where Belinda is treated as the villain even though Sophie had all the information she needed to say it wasn't right, do the right thing and let him go. But she went and ate him anyway because the devouring was inevitable, not Sophie's fault. It was Belinda's fault for showing just how messed up it can all be.
*takes off over-thinking hat*

Not that I think any of that was intentional. But perhaps the most interesting part of this comic is the reactions. : )

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

Brilliant. I love it.

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Slash

Posted by Slash 11 years ago Report

Hit it on the nail. Sophie knew what she wanted the moment she convinced the guy to come home with her. Just because her little game backfire and she grew emotions doesn't make her any less innocent. It's like people forgot all of the cruel things sophie's done in the past, just because she felt bad about this one? ...really? And yet people are mad at Belinda because she showed the awful truth. Yeah.. truth can be cruel and evil looking huh? ;)

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nipnaki

Posted by nipnaki 11 years ago Report

I was going to comment but it's too late in the morning to be getting this existential.

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alf949

Posted by alf949 11 years ago Report

i love this buy, can you for one time sake make a comic of sophie there she vomit hem her upp agien cous she love them

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viperxvii

Posted by viperxvii 11 years ago Report

XD Haha, so dark! I like Bee like this...sorta the devil on Sophie's shoulder that has convinced her beyond conscience.

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Terrafox

Posted by Terrafox 11 years ago Report

You know I'm some what curious about some of this. You could also make a different version where he lives and becomes her boyfriend and she eats Belinda for tricking and lying to her.

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GustatoryLobe

Posted by GustatoryLobe 11 years ago Report

Now this is story telling: In the views of a vorarephile.

Well done! As always though.

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nipnaki

Posted by nipnaki 11 years ago Report

Who is the princess and who is the dragon in this relationship?

Bravo-I come to this site for smut and leave with a bunch of feels and no way to hold them.

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campingcam

Posted by campingcam 11 years ago Report

Thus we witness the moral event horizon of belinda.

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nipnaki

Posted by nipnaki 11 years ago Report

"Sophie's choice." I keep having to remind myself that this is horror to some people.

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Thevoreman44

Posted by Thevoreman44 11 years ago Report

Well i really like this though a part of me just want to say "F-K YOU BEE!" but eh thats how most pred see it weather we know it or not

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redsquallff8

Posted by redsquallff8 11 years ago Report

O.O damn bring me back i can help them...you need a guy away..damn Jon the Artist is needed

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2loli4u

Posted by 2loli4u 11 years ago Report

Im kinda not like bee now

Bee: **
Sophie: *********

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delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report

Could you please make an alternate end for this :P? Maybe you could show the real ending for this comic. I for one hated the ending, and think that it should be redone. Let us see if Sophie actually has any real feelings please.

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Shyguy9

Posted by Shyguy9 11 years ago Report

No. This is the real ending.

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delet0h2b69

Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report

I understand. You as the creator have that right. But I'm simply just offering my opinion and representation here for those Vore lovers who actually cherish life and pleasure, above the dark and evil deaths that lie in wait.

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e2s86

Posted by e2s86 11 years ago Report

I hope that bee will get the most most painful and slowest death ever imaginable.

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nipnaki

Posted by nipnaki 11 years ago Report

Almost a year later, and this is still the best vore stories I've read. Seriously, way to elevate the medium.

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TinyZane

Posted by TinyZane 11 years ago Report

Oh my god I loved this story and let me tell you I have questions about what Bee was doing before she tazed Travis and also I REALLY don't like Bee now. Keep up making amazing stuff I hope to see more character developing stories from you again.

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ShadowMorph

Posted by ShadowMorph 10 years ago Report

So bee doesn't respect Sophie, she manipulates her. I'd like to meet them now. I know some magic that will grant Sophie the ability to revive her digested prey if she chooses. That way she doesn't have to feel guilty about it. She can just bring them back later.

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Azathura00

Posted by Azathura00 10 years ago Report

:'(

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MrNobody

Posted by MrNobody 10 years ago Report

Would it be much of a stretch to think Bee is a serial killer? It would fit with her apparent sociopathy and her being covered in someone's blood earlier.

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drdarkmetal

Posted by drdarkmetal 10 years ago Report

This creature is not one of earth it should be eliatated imtensley
Sophie sjpul really eat bee, she seems yo be a bad inluamce

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BooFire

Posted by BooFire 10 years ago Report

By that logic Bee here is nothing more then food.




(I smell revenge)

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BlueBlockDude

Posted by BlueBlockDude 10 years ago Report

Ha... dark...

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Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 9 years ago Report

I revisited this comic now because I was in the mood for something powerful, in the storytelling sense of the word. I read it because I was in the mood for a short story not just about vore but about the value of life. Beyond the fact that the themes of the story appeal to my personal taste, this comic is a valuable work to the community of artists here as an example of how vore can be integrated with something deeper and also as a demonstration of proper storytelling technique.

I'd recommend putting this comic in its own folder, so that people new to your gallery can find it easier without having to go back pages.

Thank you for your work, Shyguy.

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Thefoxcyan

Posted by Thefoxcyan 8 years ago Report

Belinda seems to be the one fulling the monster

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MidnightNoon

Posted by MidnightNoon 7 years ago Report

This comic is so good. With bee doing something so horrible, especially when its hurting Sophie so much, its easy to think of her as the monster. But i can still see how bees doing this for her, she wants sophie to just think of them as food, so that it doesnt hurt her when she eats them. But its not working Bee, its still hurting her. So sad.

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UnknownGamer21

Posted by UnknownGamer21 7 years ago Report

To be honest, even if this was 4 years ago. I feel like Sophie could control her urges but using her 'hunger' on those who deserve it, like muggers, robbers, that sorta thing. In any other sense, even if old, is a great vore comic in my book

Lovely characters too, even if Bee is a monster. And quick question, is Sophie still like 'this'? does she still want to let some people go or is she alright with eating and digesting people without a care?

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RossTheEmeraldFox

Posted by RossTheEmeraldFox 6 years ago Report

I don't know how to feel about this

On one hand: Wow, Really good

On the other hand: FuCk This is not how I wished this Comic would end >^>

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Pillowfloof

Posted by Pillowfloof 6 years ago Report

This is right next to Child on the sadness level. I hope Colin and Travis are having fun as ghosts.

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Shingoke

Posted by Shingoke 6 years ago Report

Oh so it's Bee....*wipes tears off of eye face and cracks neck* time for some 'therapy"

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Cobbly

Posted by Cobbly 6 years ago Report

Well that was fuckin' dark

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somercet

Posted by somercet 6 years ago Report

Very realistic. Congrats.

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SilentViewer

Posted by SilentViewer 5 years ago Report

A 10/10 indeed bravo.

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WATCHMAN

Posted by WATCHMAN 4 years ago Report

Mmm well good comic as always. I do have to say as much as I like your work this one was a little far on the depression side of things...

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IndigoImp

Posted by IndigoImp 1 year ago Report

This comic was genuinely extremely well-written, honestly makes me really sympathise with Sophie as a character and really, really hate Belinda. Still real sad though.

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IddlerItaler

Posted by IddlerItaler 8 months ago Report

I found this comic through a post in the forums mentioning that Green by Shyguy9 had gotten quite the reaction, and I wanted to see what it was all about.

All I can say is... chapeau.

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