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A sequel to Caught in the Act (http://aryion.com/g4/view/301901). Glitz and Glamour get their chance to see if they can do what it takes on stage to redeem themselves as assistants to Gary the Great.

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Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

Oh my, more of this trio please!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

I've got an idea or two, but I'm open to suggestions.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

Um, what about a time when the hat gets picked up by someone after the magician collapses from exhaustion after planning out shows with the Glitz and Glamour inside? Maybe it could fall into the hands of another female magician who's down on their luck and he has to track it down using his magic?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

See, now this whole plot arc is forming...

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

Yep and it will be glorious in the prose that sprouts from your mind

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 9 years ago Report

Anyone thinking HDTF? ;)

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report

What you mean like this is the same world as the other series, and Gary the Great just happened to get a hold of one, before they became available to the general public? That's how he's been doing his magic?

I think that could explain everything except for the rabbit costume, but personally I prefer the idea that his magic isn't something Glitz and Glamour could steal. If it's something that they will have to stick around and learn from Gary, then they need to stay well behaved enough that Gary's willing to keep them around and teach them.

Marloweny has barely scratched the surface so far.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

I will say that I intend this setting to be its own thing, distinct from the HDTF stuff. Gary's magic is legit.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report

Fun, and an excellent follow-up to the first one.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

Thanks!

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 9 years ago Report

Oh, I would very much like to be any of the 3 of these characters. Particularly one of the sisters though.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

I think there's going to be at least two more chapters of this one. The next will involve alcohol and mishaps.

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 9 years ago Report

When I was commenting on "The Hunting Tactics of Fairies" it occurred to me that I had never expressed approval for this series, even though it contains one of the same elements that I mentioned liking over there. The fact that Glitz and Glamour can't untangle themselves from each other without Gary's help, but that he isn't trapping them that way maliciously. It's like everyone involved is just a victim of the circumstances, and since no one is getting hurt, there's nothing to complain about.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report

I really don't like cruelty in vore, but I do like some of the situations commonly paired with it. When vore is an unexpected consequence of this action or that, when someone's not sure what the outcome will be, etc. Finding ways to mix in those elements without the cruelty or fear is something I often try to do. I'm glad you enjoy it!

kakazoma22

Posted by kakazoma22 5 years ago Report

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