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This one is short and simple vore. Eroticised vore.
It's also, in part, an attempt to write a story in PrinnyDood ( http://aryion.com/g4/user/PrinnyDood )'s style: bevies of lovely young ladies scampering around and getting gobbled up by a hungry beast. Thanks for the inspiration. :p
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Posted by kongpow 8 years ago Report
Wow this is amazing. It bears some similarities to the host, but less horror and far more erotic. Great job, this was a very fun read.
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. It's not what I usually write, but I wanted to give it a try.
Posted by kongpow 8 years ago Report
The other thing I like so much about this work, is the
"controlled hunger games" feel to it.
I think you did a really good job incorporating the sensual erotic writing your known for, into the observations of the watchers.
Also, the internal descriptions are really hot.
Cheers!
Posted by PrinnyDood 8 years ago Report
Whoa, I can't believe I missed this until now. I clearly need to keep a closer eye on your account here!
Anyway, this is a glorious example of some of my favorite aspects of vore, and honestly one of the best stories I've read with this theme. Sheina and her giant voracious reptile-creature were both so amusingly good-natured, it was impossible to be cross at them, despite their mildly questionable antics.
And I'm very pleased I've proved a source of some inspiration here, especially when this sort of thing is the result! :3
Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report
"Mildly questionable", indeed! But we certainly can't fault the reptile-creature, who was just lumbering around happily, and quite innocently, eating up all that wriggly food. :p
Thanks!
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
Wow, great story, simply fantastic : )
Browsing through your numerous stories makes time fly.
The theme, women and creatures were great, the lizard was incredible stuffed at the end and it was nice to see the story from various points of view, both the erotic parts, and the voracious parts. Wonderfully descriptive and quite similar to Prinny's stories as you promised^^
Way to go!
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thank you! It's not my usual style, but it was great fun to write. That is indeed one very stuffed lizard, and I just like the idea of a girl treating this big, girl-eating reptile with tender affection.
And x-ray views of a full stomach can be fun as well. :)