Ooh, fun! The reflections on what not to do when meeting human parents was great, and I loved the encounter with the robbers. I have a suspicion that in the future Rhaana and Kyle may try playing with the in-between form that resulted from losing that bead.
Rhaana passed through a dragoness from when she first donned the pendant, and I've been trying to work out how to get her back in that form for a while.
Hehe, this was funny, I would love to see more adventures in our world. Kyle has plenty to show (and teach) Rhaana. I presume that since she isn't entirely aware of human customs and habits yet, it could make room for a lot of interesting situations^^ But letting Rhaana meet his family while in her human form was fantastic, I hope you will let them meet more. Not knowing that your son's beautiful girlfriend actually is a dragon in disguise is an entertraining scenario. Those thugs were also amusing, please update again soon :D
Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report
Boy howdy, I remember the first time I tongue-kissed my girlfriends mom. That date ended in ash and brimstone right quick and in a hurry. :V
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
So many rules! Who can keep track!
Posted by sweetladyamy 7 years ago Report
I definitely got a good laugh out of this.
Well done.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
It was certainly a little more humor heavy than my usual story. Glad you liked it!
Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report
Ooh, fun! The reflections on what not to do when meeting human parents was great, and I loved the encounter with the robbers. I have a suspicion that in the future Rhaana and Kyle may try playing with the in-between form that resulted from losing that bead.
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Rhaana passed through a dragoness from when she first donned the pendant, and I've been trying to work out how to get her back in that form for a while.
Posted by ethan3369 7 years ago Report
i have never clicked something so fast
Posted by ethan3369 7 years ago Report
Great as always my wait for the Continuation starts now
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by JMW 7 years ago Report
Lol another great chapter. Thank you for posting =^.^=
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Posted by Nalzindar 7 years ago Report
Hehe, this was funny, I would love to see more adventures in our world. Kyle has plenty to show (and teach) Rhaana. I presume that since she isn't entirely aware of human customs and habits yet, it could make room for a lot of interesting situations^^ But letting Rhaana meet his family while in her human form was fantastic, I hope you will let them meet more. Not knowing that your son's beautiful girlfriend actually is a dragon in disguise is an entertraining scenario. Those thugs were also amusing, please update again soon :D
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! I've always got these two floating around in my head. I'm sure there will be more eventually.
Posted by FDdragon 7 years ago Report
Read all chapters in one go. Very nice story indeed)
Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report
Glad you liked it!
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 6 years ago Report
Is there going to be more?
Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report
Mostly likely. I like these two.
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 6 years ago Report
they are great and I like the world you are building