Archive > marloweny > Stories > Quickies > Fantasy Dates > Rhaana > Fantasy Fifth Date
Expand
Add to favorites | Full Size | Download
< < Previous   Next > >
Fantasy Fifth Date By marloweny -- Report

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Views: 4,133

File size: 22.20 KiB

MIME Type: application/rtf

Comments: 18

Favorites: 51

More Rhaana and Kyle shenanigans. This time she meets some good folks and some bad folks while visiting Kyle.

Comment on Fantasy Fifth Date

Please login to post a comment.

Comments
Graywolf18

Posted by Graywolf18 7 years ago Report

Boy howdy, I remember the first time I tongue-kissed my girlfriends mom. That date ended in ash and brimstone right quick and in a hurry. :V

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

So many rules! Who can keep track!

sweetladyamy

Posted by sweetladyamy 7 years ago Report

I definitely got a good laugh out of this.
Well done.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

It was certainly a little more humor heavy than my usual story. Glad you liked it!

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 7 years ago Report

Ooh, fun! The reflections on what not to do when meeting human parents was great, and I loved the encounter with the robbers. I have a suspicion that in the future Rhaana and Kyle may try playing with the in-between form that resulted from losing that bead.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Rhaana passed through a dragoness from when she first donned the pendant, and I've been trying to work out how to get her back in that form for a while.

ethan3369

Posted by ethan3369 7 years ago Report

i have never clicked something so fast

ethan3369

Posted by ethan3369 7 years ago Report

Great as always my wait for the Continuation starts now

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

JMW

Posted by JMW 7 years ago Report

Lol another great chapter. Thank you for posting =^.^=

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 7 years ago Report

Hehe, this was funny, I would love to see more adventures in our world. Kyle has plenty to show (and teach) Rhaana. I presume that since she isn't entirely aware of human customs and habits yet, it could make room for a lot of interesting situations^^ But letting Rhaana meet his family while in her human form was fantastic, I hope you will let them meet more. Not knowing that your son's beautiful girlfriend actually is a dragon in disguise is an entertraining scenario. Those thugs were also amusing, please update again soon :D

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it! I've always got these two floating around in my head. I'm sure there will be more eventually.

FDdragon

Posted by FDdragon 7 years ago Report

Read all chapters in one go. Very nice story indeed)

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 7 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!

TheDarkTraveler

Posted by TheDarkTraveler 6 years ago Report

Is there going to be more?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 6 years ago Report

Mostly likely. I like these two.

TheDarkTraveler

Posted by TheDarkTraveler 6 years ago Report

they are great and I like the world you are building