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Parts set as previews only due to Eka's newer policies are fully available on the drive linked in the series folder, as well as in links in part descriptions. If any issues arise accessing any part, let me know.
This entry, leading on from the last, takes place on the day after the Vytal Festival, around the time that the timeskip in Chapter 12 of Volume 3 of RWBY would be happening if the timeline was following it's intended course, and features the first multi-vore of the series in the form of Pyrrha Nikos and Ozpin as the anal prey of the first character to have a prior (and quite extensive) history of vore: Atlas specialist, Winter Schnee.
THE USUAL VOTING TEXT HAS BEEN REMOVED, FOR THIS IS A SPECIAL VOTE FOR PART 10.
For this round of voting only, i'm forgoing the Straw Poll and giving you an extra level of power. Rather than a simple vote, go down into the comments below and write who you want as pred, who you want as prey, and what type of vore you want to see, plus a vague scenario to go with them, if you're feeling daring (multiples of any of these are allowed in a single scenario provided you don't go overboard and just say 'everyone'). Then, anyone who agrees with your idea should write VOTE in a reply comment, as well as anything else they might want to add (you can vote for as many ideas as you want, but only once per idea, and you can't vote for your own). As a bonus for this part, i'm going to be selecting two of each thing (multiples will be factored in as they come up), so the top two most voted answers after 48 hours (late on Monday, British time) will be used.
However, remember that, at this time, of the still present characters, Ruby Rose and Winter Schnee are unavailable, as is Anal Vore, so any comment suggestions featuring any of these, or any character who is no longer available, are invalid, no matter how many votes they get. A full list of things that are unavailable can be found below.
Characters Unavailable Because They've Been Vored:
- Cinder Fall
- Weiss Schnee
- Blake Belladonna
- Neopolitan
- Yang Xiao Long
- Jaune Arc
- Coco Adel
- Glynda Goodwitch
- Pyrrha Nikos
- Ozpin
Characters & Vore Types Unavailable Because They've Been Voted Recently:
- Ruby Rose
- Winter Schnee
- Anal Vore
Have fun with this, as I can wait to see what you come up with. Next part will have the usual voting system again.
GUIDELINES ARE STILL HERE, EVEN THOUGH SOME AREN'T APPLICABLE FOR THIS PART.
Guidelines:
- If two prey candidates are joint 1st in votes, they both get eaten.
- If two pred candidates are joint 1st in votes, only one gets the prey (decided via coin flip), unless there's two joint 1st prey, in which case they get one each.
- If a candidate gets the most votes for both pred and prey, pred takes precedence, with the 2nd most voted prey candidate becoming the prey.
- If two vore types are joint 1st, and there's only one prey voted in, which occurs is decided via coin flip.
- In the rarity that any of the above have 3 or more things joint 1st, the outcome is decided via digital dice.
- If something is voted for and wins, it'll be temporarily removed as an option for the next part. If the same thing is then voted for immediately the next time it's available, it will then be removed for the next two polls, and so on.
- If Self Vore is voted in, the prey vote will be used for the part after, and the pred will eat themselves, with the 2nd most voted for vore type becoming the method of doing so.
- If Other Vore is voted for by anyone, the user voting will be expected to leave a comment here describing a type of vore not already a voting option (one per user). Should Other Vore win, one of the suggestions commented will be selected for use at random, and all listed suggestions (or at least the workable ones) will be recycled for future polls.
- If the pred and prey canonically have a good relationship, the prey's consciousness will become a voice in the pred's head, and the vore itself will more often than not be willing. Also, if the pair, either due to canon or in-story events, are close enough, the pred may be able to let the prey 'take the wheel'.
- If the pred and prey canonically have a bad or non-relationship, there won't be a voice of any kind, the prey instead becoming a small part of the pred's mind, without any consciousness of their own.
- The more someone vores, the more they'll crave it, as the feeling is addictive. At first, as Glynda has in needing to dispose of Cinder, they'll justify it logically (Phase 1). After a while, this will become less believable and more like excuses (Phase 2, starts after 3-4 meals, really kicks in around 7) with the pred eventually only convincing themselves (Phase 3, noticeable around 12), until they just openly admit to craving vore (Phase 4, full onset starts at about 20). Fundamentally, though this only happens after lots of vore, it takes as long/short a time as works for the story, varying between characters based on specific factors.
In the mean time, thank you for reading, and I wish you well.
-moonpunch101
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Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
Didn't expect Winter to win as pred in the polls.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Neither did I. Vote was all over the place.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
I'd say I want Winter as pred again,
But that's not how this works.
I would want to to be able to get Ruby and aborb the girls into herself
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
I'm not sure I get what you mean by that. Could you elaborate?
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
I mean Winter cornering Ruby, her trying to talk Winter down while Weiss is freaking out.
Winter ether Oral vores her Unbiths her or Anal Vores her.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Ah. I like it. Unfortunately, Ruby has a habit of winning the pred vote any time she's available.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Ohho, back off, i want to see how far Ruby's twisted mind can go. Also, how many people did Winter devour before this?
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
I hinted at in the story, but before she was caught and her memories sealed, she downed 9 or so people, several of which were done anally.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
I'd like to see Raven as a pred and for her to Oral Vore ether Emerald or Neo.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Since Neo is gone already, that'd be Emerald, then.
Posted by SwordkingX5 7 years ago Report
Oh right forgot about that.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Is fine. There's still s usable set here, after all.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Vote
Posted by dodusk 7 years ago Report
Vote
Posted by Resileaf 7 years ago Report
Vote
Posted by sportscarfan18 7 years ago Report
Vote!
Posted by miner249er 7 years ago Report
Emerald as pred, Oral Vore, neo as prey
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Neo isn't around anymore. Yang vored her in a previous part. Sorry.
Feel free to suggest again, though. :)
Posted by miner249er 7 years ago Report
forgot about that.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Is fine. Probably should have posted a list given the format.
Posted by CzarSchnee 7 years ago Report
I’d like to see Nora as Pred and a Prey Velvet in the standard, oral vore format. As for a scenario... maybe something involving Nora working out, leading to accidentally or intentionally devouring the bunny?
Thanks for the reply on the last post btw. Appreciate it!
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
No prob. Like the idea, by the way.
Posted by Kaos Dragon 7 years ago Report
Vote!
Posted by Ironf1st 7 years ago Report
Vote :D
Posted by dinoman514 7 years ago Report
Vote
Posted by MrPeculiar 7 years ago Report
Eh, heck with it, VOTE.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Raven as Pred, Ironwood as Prey, and I don't care for vore type.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Good choice. I like it.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
I was gonna have Qrow be prey, but that felt too obvious, and since Ozpin's gone (for now), and Raven probably doesn't have a grudge against Winter (besides being a Schnee), she might go after James.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Good thinking. :D
Posted by dodusk 7 years ago Report
Vote
Posted by miner249er 7 years ago Report
Nora as pred, oral vore, winter as prey
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Winter isn't available for voting right now. Would it help if I posted a list? :)
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Possibly. We rely so much on the original voting system, some of us might have a hard time deciding (spent a full minute trying to find the links lmao)
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Should probably have done it from the start, to be fair. Will get list sorted when I have a moment.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Oh no, the way we had it was so organised, and for the most part fair.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
I meant for this vote. Old system will still be returning next time.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Okay, also look at bottom for question concerning vored prey.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Seen it, I think.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Question: do friends or relatives of friends become voices? My reason being, in this timeline, she never met Winter, so wouldnt have a positive relationship. If Winter tried to eat Ruby, it would be a negative relationship. And because of that, Winter wouldn't become a voice in Ruby's head, but since she is Weiss's sister, would that influence it. Same thing with Ilia, since she is Blake's old friend.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Complex things that I will decide solidly as I come to them. Logically, though, the relationships someone in Ruby's mind has will affect Ruby's opinions of someone.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Makes sense.
Holy F***, i just realised something. Winter vored 9 people. Counting this one makes 12. If Ruby devoured her, she'd get a 13 point jump, bumping her to Phase 3, nearly Phase 4!
Oh, you know what im gonna be picking next time their available! X)))))))
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Indeed. Even though most of Winter's vore was a long time ago, it'd have a heavy effect on Ruby. That said, since it'd be such a massive leap, it'd take a while, maybe a few parts, to take true effect.
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Oh, I know, it would just be hilarious.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
It would be, watching her grapple between desire and morality before caving in completely.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Actually, Winter will probably have done some vore off screen before her next appearance, so if Ruby vored her, it'd be a full blown Phase 4.
Posted by DB1224 7 years ago Report
Good work !
I would love to see one of the more unusual kind of vore you put in the last pool like leg or hair, but seems like nothing can beat the classic.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
It is a shame, but one day, hopefully...
Posted by miner249er 7 years ago Report
Nora as pred, oral vore, penny as prey
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Like it.
Posted by dinoman514 7 years ago Report
Vote
Posted by Nightmare49 7 years ago Report
personally i want to see Emerald unbirth someone. perhaps she get Rowan after he ticks her off too much.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Cool idea.
Posted by Nightmare49 7 years ago Report
glad you like that idea.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
It is an interesting thought, to be sure.
Posted by Larkspurdiblock 7 years ago Report
Nora as pred, eating Cardin via oral vore.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Sounds fabulous.
Posted by Ahrizelia 7 years ago Report
I kinda want to see Melanie and Miltia do something like this: https://aryion.com/g4/view/218423
Maybe to Mercury trying and failing to flirt with them.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
That's a very interesting idea. I like it.
Posted by dinoman514 7 years ago Report
Nora oral vores ren. I think itd be funny for her to be in the mess hall eating her grief of losing jaune and pyrrha, ren comes in to stop her but doesn't even notice when she eats him
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Absolutely love this one.
Posted by dodusk 7 years ago Report
Raven pred voring... Uhhh. Cinder's gone, Yang and Ozpin too...
Leonardo Lionheart!
As for the means any is fine, maybe some rarely used one to shake things up a bit
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Like this one. Good thinking grabbing someone further away as prey.
Posted by Ray1700 7 years ago Report
It would be amusing to have Raven eat Torchwick in that final battle with Ruby, opposed to the Grimm. Also would it be theoretically possible for a voice to seize control of their pred? Then you could have Raven have eaten Summer, then during the battle, she feels the need to intervene and save her from death. Either that or she knows Yang is in Ruby and since she didn't intervene to save her from Neo, she saves them then instead, and gobbles up Torchwick. Oral, preferably, though give her some shrinking dust to shrink him and then gulp him down, all the while Ruby and the voices in her watch in shock, awe, and a touch of fear.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Sounds fun. Unofrtunately, you just missed the closing time. :(
Posted by cgarcia0825 7 years ago Report
Ruby oral vore winter
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Neither character is currently qvailable and the vote closed 5-ish days ago. Good effort though. :)
Posted by MoonColva90 7 years ago Report
Antone know who wob this weird voting? Cant keep track.
Posted by moonpunch101 7 years ago Report
Raven voring Emerald & Nora voring Velvet. Both oral vore.
Posted by Flame14 6 years ago Report
I’d like to see Velvet as pred with either Emerald and Mercury, or Melanie and Miltia as prey. Oral vore.
For the latter, I’m thinking Coco persuades Velvet to go out on the town for one reason or another and she ends up at Juniors night club. Maybe the twins see something they like in Velvet and teasingly flirt with her and buying her drinks. Velvet could eat them in a drunken stupor after they bring her back to their place for some fun.
OR
I’d say have Nora chow down on some White Fang goons, just as a reminder that they are still there. Oral again.
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
Good thoughts. Unfortunately the vote for this part's been closed for a while, which is a shame given the detail here is great. :(
Posted by Flame14 6 years ago Report
Hey, your always welcome to use the ideas for something later on, or even use these ideas as an offshoot story of this one.
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
Maybe. First I have to write up the existing bits.
Posted by CzarSchnee 6 years ago Report
Hey moonpunch101. Was just wondering when you think the next part will be uploaded, and to inquire if you are in need of a beta reader or a proof reader at all. Thanks! Hope you have a great day.
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
Hi,
I'm afraid I can't give an exact date for when the next part will be out, as I haven't started writing it yet and only recently decided, based on the winning votes here, how the story was going to play out. This is largely because that's how my process is (i.e. I write when it comes to me), but also because i've been mostly focused on university work, and still will be for the next week or so.
That said, I am, indeed, still considering having beta readers. Bear in mind you'd only get it a few hours ahead of everyone else, on average, though.
If you're interested, check the link below. The post is for an old request for readers, but the rules it lines out are still the same:
https://aryion.com/forum/blog/moonpunch101/update_18_proofreaders_wanted_%28again%29__2_maximum_b-38632_sid-6a04d62056992f111f85bd94c92f7b62.html
Cheers,
-mp101
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
Actually provided you've read my last post, how would you feel about reading through something I wrote on short notice?
Posted by CzarSchnee 6 years ago Report
Sure, if you would like me to still
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
If you've read the blog post I linked you to, PM me, and i'll reply with the short thing.
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
That said, you should know for future that I like to get stuff published as soon as possible, so I won't always wait for you to reply if I want help with beta reading in future.
Posted by CzarSchnee 6 years ago Report
Never mind then. Got bit busy dealing with Uni final and work so forget it. Carry on.
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
Know the feeling. Am working on some uni finals work right now myself. Let me know if you free up at any point. :)
Posted by MoonColva90 6 years ago Report
How much of the next chapter is finished?
Posted by moonpunch101 6 years ago Report
About a quarter (or almost 2,000 words). For a long time I hit writer's block on it, though i've made most of my progress over the past couple of days. If you want to see how far through I am without having to ask me every time, I tend to keep a note of it on my profile page after any writing session. :)