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In this followup to Earth Girls Are Edible a group of sexy, costume-clad young women attempt to go skinny-dipping in a lake at night, and encounter a tentacle-filled plant monster. Vore and lots of explicit tentacle-sex ensue.
WAY more explicit sexual stuff than I usually include in my stories, fair warning.
Anyway, this was originally intended to be folded into the next full chapter of Earth Girls Are Edible, my long delayed Halloween special from last year. But I realized it was basically done, and robust enough to stand on its own as a short story, so I figured I'd post it while I continue to procrastinate on the rest of the full chapter. The next chapter will feature swarms of shrinking-powered lizard/frog critters eating earth-girls by the dozens. Should be fun.
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Posted by VORPHIL 6 years ago Report
nice i saved it :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by V 6 years ago Report
Great short as always
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Ha, thanks, you are too kind sir.
Posted by zobabu 6 years ago Report
I must admit that this isn´t really my thing scenario-wise but from a writing point of view it was still written pretty well as alyaws! :3
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Yeah, some of my readers really dig the hentai-tentacle stuff, but it's certainly not for everyone. I'd something I indulge in every now and then, but not too often.
Glad you this the writing was decent, and hopefully whatever I cook up next will be more appealing to you. :D
Posted by zobabu 6 years ago Report
I am sure you will :3. Besides you can obviously never satisfy everyone to the fullest extend because of personal preferences. Just write whatever you feel confident about ^w^
Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report
Another nice piece of work from Prinnydood. Although, I must wonder, are you ever going to have a busty female come up against a large monster and NOT get eaten? Surely at least one of them must get lucky?
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Weeeeell, I think some of my Weird Science stories might qualify on that count, as well as one of the ladies from the Sorority From Hell series, if I recall. But it's certainly a rare occurrence in my stories to say the least.
I do like to cultivate a hint of uncertainly to boost tension in my readers though, so it will probably continue to (rarely) take place when I feel it fits.
Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report
I don't think it counts if one of the people spared are those who summoned the creature, or their new sex-slave toy. And as for Weird Science, only one character comes close to the monster and gets away.
So yeah, perhaps some of your characters are due for some good luck and fortune?
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Whaaat? Obviously the sexy-monster-summoner archetype doesn't count, but not the sex-slave survivor either? Man, such strict definitions! xD
But yeah, I could certainly stand to make the survivors a liiiitle less rare, just to spice up the uncertainty levels.
Posted by VividLucidity 6 years ago Report
I think the problem behind the sex-slave survivor is that while she survives, she doesn't escape. She doesn't get away from the monster with her life, as her life is now in the hand of her new owner.
What I'm looking for is somebody coming across a monster, seeing their friends get eaten ... yet getting away themselves. Going back to a normal life haunted by their memories, haunted by their fear, afraid that every plant might be out to get them, afraid that every body of water contains a monster ready to devour them...
Where was I?
Oh yeah, right, survivors. Adding more survivors, while keeping them rare, would make things better. It'll give the readers a teeny bit of hope, a bit of tension as to whether someone will get out of there alive You wouldn't want every female character introduced to get this reaction from the reader...
"Welp, they're going to be digested. No point caring about them."
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
I see what you mean.
While these stories of mine primarily exist to serve a pretty specific kink, and I doubt many of my readers are disappointed when the sexy ladies get devoured, maintaining a bit of uncertainty is helpful for tension, which in turn improves the overall experience of this type of vore, in my opinion.
So yeah, a little less rare perhaps.
Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report
This was very fun to read, I am glad you made this part. Lots of tentacle sex as you said but it was an entertaining variation from your usual formula. It was an interesting plant they stumbled up on and I wouldn't mind buying the records later^^
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Yep, sometimes I do have the urge to go fully into the tentacle-hentai zone, and I'm glad that a decent portion of people also enjoy this type of content. ;3
Posted by LilyLove 6 years ago Report
Wow! You pulled out the stops with tentacle action here. Love the pred too - won't miss a second of the action, and it knows how to put on a show.
Keep it up! :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I know this was a bit of a departure from my typical themes, so I'm glad to hear you liked the focus on tentacles I went with! :D
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
Omigosh!! I'm speechless. I don't even know what to say...
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I think . . . speechless is usually good, so I'll just take it as a compliment.