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“Hours!? Nononono there’s so much acid in here already, my clothes are fraying and it’s itchy. You can’t! You can’t! I’ll be dead and—”

“Oh, relax. That’s just on television with like, special drugs and stuff. In real life it takes days,” she explained, then quietly added, “I think.”



Egad! This story’s got pictures!

An illustrated story about an ambitious highschooler’s very particular college experience. Features a rotary phone, Mean Girls references, copious amounts of belly-gazing, and #predproblems.

Oh, and friendship, or some junk like that.

~17.5k words


Credits:
Huge thanks to both  thecheese01 and  PrimordialMatter for reviewing the story structure and letting me bounce ideas off their skulls during far too many very late nights, and also for feedback and proofreading.
Initial concept and characters suggested by  Bags... many months ago. Sorry the final product took so long!
Art in this piece was commissioned from the effervescent  MinaHyena!
And, of course, thanks to you for reading!

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Ohgra

Posted by Ohgra 7 months ago Report

Hey this was super good!

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FreedomPug

Posted by FreedomPug 7 months ago Report

I'm just going to assume this is implied fatal, bc that's hot. even if that is debatably where the story is heading.

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FreedomPug

Posted by FreedomPug 7 months ago Report

wait fuck, I missed the line break, definitely non-fatal.

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carlj

Posted by carlj 7 months ago Report

Wow, each time i read one of your stories it just bring out so much emotions.
I was really hoping that Allison and Emma could get an happy ending, glad it happened ^^

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

I'm so glad I can communicate the emotions to you. Thanks for the kind words!

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threk

Posted by threk 7 months ago Report

This was a great read, loved it!

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

Thank you kindly!

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blank

Posted by blank 7 months ago Report

great story! was a joy to read

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xnovusalpha001

Posted by xnovusalpha001 7 months ago Report

This is one of the best that I have read so far from you.

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AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 7 months ago Report

You're still the goat of long stories, Progressive. This one was an emotional rollercoaster, and the full ride was worth it.

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

You're damn right I'm the goat! :P

Thank you very much. You're a doll <3

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

Okay, someone had to explain to me that "goat" could mean "greatest of all time" and not the animal in this case, so I'm actually very humbled by this, thank you.

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AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 7 months ago Report

LOL
seriously though you're amazing

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tgawsome

Posted by tgawsome 7 months ago Report

Wow.

This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. Not just as a vore story but as a story period. You really built up all the characters in this story from our somewhat hapless prey Alison to the dickish store manager Garret. Everyone in this story felt fleshed out and real, and that made the struggles at the end so much more impactful.

I won't spoil here but you had me rooting for Emma and really worried about Alison at the end.

10 outa 10 one of the best stories I've read.

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

Thanks! There's more stories with the same quality and attention to characters in my gallery if you're interested!

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tgawsome

Posted by tgawsome 7 months ago Report

I'll have to check them out then.

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RDRW

Posted by RDRW 7 months ago Report

Damn, this was good!
Again you created characters that felt authentic and interesting so I really started rooting for Emma and Alison.

Also, nice Daniel easter eggs!

Plus, on a side note: as a non-native speaker I also feel like I can improve my English skills with your stories a bit as you tend to use some - let's say - advanced wording (at in my experience).

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

Oh man, nice job spotting the Daniel references!

I'm so glad you enjoyed Full Ride, but I'm totally blown away by the fact that my stories can help with your English proficiency. That's wonderful! You're awesome!

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VVVx

Posted by VVVx 7 months ago Report

Once again, you've posted a story where I don't want the main pred to digest their prey.

As always, awesome work.

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Progressive

Posted by Progressive 7 months ago Report

Always happy to make you feel conflicted :P

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cloud8745

Posted by cloud8745 7 months ago Report

That was a really good story! Definitely one of the best that you've done in a while with really good pred/prey interactions! And I hope we get to see more from this sorority in the future!

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Bags

Posted by Bags 7 months ago Report

That story was incredible. I don't know what to say, I'm speechless!

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ouphe

Posted by ouphe 2 months ago Report

I adored this story

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Gorgrath177

Posted by Gorgrath177 1 month ago Report

This is pretty awesome. Anywhere you posted the art separately?

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