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“Hours!? Nononono there’s so much acid in here already, my clothes are fraying and it’s itchy. You can’t! You can’t! I’ll be dead and—”
“Oh, relax. That’s just on television with like, special drugs and stuff. In real life it takes days,” she explained, then quietly added, “I think.”
Egad! This story’s got pictures!
An illustrated story about an ambitious highschooler’s very particular college experience. Features a rotary phone, Mean Girls references, copious amounts of belly-gazing, and #predproblems.
Oh, and friendship, or some junk like that.
~17.5k words
Credits:
Huge thanks to both thecheese01 and
PrimordialMatter for reviewing the story structure and letting me bounce ideas off their skulls during far too many late nights, and also for feedback and proofreading.
Initial concept and characters suggested by Bags.
Art in this piece was commissioned from the effervescent MinaHyena!
And, of course, thanks to you for reading!
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Hey this was super good!
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Posted by FreedomPug 4 years ago Report
I'm just going to assume this is implied fatal, bc that's hot. even if that is debatably where the story is heading.
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Posted by FreedomPug 4 years ago Report
wait fuck, I missed the line break, definitely non-fatal.
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Posted by carlj 4 years ago Report
Wow, each time i read one of your stories it just bring out so much emotions.
I was really hoping that Allison and Emma could get an happy ending, glad it happened ^^
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Posted by Progressive 4 years ago Report
I'm so glad I can communicate the emotions to you. Thanks for the kind words!
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Posted by threk 4 years ago Report
This was a great read, loved it!
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Posted by Progressive 4 years ago Report
Thank you kindly!
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Posted by blank 4 years ago Report
great story! was a joy to read
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Posted by xnovusalpha001 4 years ago Report
This is one of the best that I have read so far from you.
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Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
You're still the goat of long stories, Progressive. This one was an emotional rollercoaster, and the full ride was worth it.
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Posted by Progressive 4 years ago Report
You're damn right I'm the goat! :P
Thank you very much. You're a doll <3
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Posted by Progressive 4 years ago Report
Okay, someone had to explain to me that "goat" could mean "greatest of all time" and not the animal in this case, so I'm actually very humbled by this, thank you.
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Posted by AnAccount 4 years ago Report
LOL
seriously though you're amazing
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Posted by tgawsome 4 years ago Report
Wow.
This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. Not just as a vore story but as a story period. You really built up all the characters in this story from our somewhat hapless prey Alison to the dickish store manager Garret. Everyone in this story felt fleshed out and real, and that made the struggles at the end so much more impactful.
I won't spoil here but you had me rooting for Emma and really worried about Alison at the end.
10 outa 10 one of the best stories I've read.
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Posted by Progressive 4 years ago Report
Thanks! There's more stories with the same quality and attention to characters in my gallery if you're interested!
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Posted by tgawsome 4 years ago Report
I'll have to check them out then.
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Posted by RDRW 4 years ago Report
Damn, this was good!
Again you created characters that felt authentic and interesting so I really started rooting for Emma and Alison.
Also, nice Daniel easter eggs!
Plus, on a side note: as a non-native speaker I also feel like I can improve my English skills with your stories a bit as you tend to use some - let's say - advanced wording (at in my experience).
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Posted by Progressive 4 years ago Report
Oh man, nice job spotting the Daniel references!
I'm so glad you enjoyed Full Ride, but I'm totally blown away by the fact that my stories can help with your English proficiency. That's wonderful! You're awesome!
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Posted by VVVx 4 years ago Report
Once again, you've posted a story where I don't want the main pred to digest their prey.
As always, awesome work.
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Posted by Progressive 4 years ago Report
Always happy to make you feel conflicted :P
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Posted by cloud8745 4 years ago Report
That was a really good story! Definitely one of the best that you've done in a while with really good pred/prey interactions! And I hope we get to see more from this sorority in the future!
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Posted by Bags 4 years ago Report
That story was incredible. I don't know what to say, I'm speechless!
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Posted by ouphe 3 years ago Report
I adored this story
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Posted by Gorgrath177 3 years ago Report
This is pretty awesome. Anywhere you posted the art separately?
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Posted by MagicOddEffect 3 years ago Report
Took me forever to read this, but I love it. Your writing is always so good and emotionally impactful.
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Posted by Progressive 3 years ago Report
Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted by StaplerCheeto 3 years ago Report
So wait, did Cora digest Brian?
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Posted by Progressive 3 years ago Report
I could tell you, but then I'd have to spoil the entire plot of Daniel II: Alina's Revenge
Also, this is the wrong story for this comment, my dude!
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Posted by StaplerCheeto 3 years ago Report
Oh I'm sorry, it's just that I thought Cora was implied to be in this story, and I was asking to confirm that.
On the other hand, a sequel to Daniel is great news!
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Posted by nwertalb 2 years ago Report
Pictures are not enough! I want a live action adaptation of this story! well done!
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Posted by Progressive 2 years ago Report
Who would you cast for Alison and Emma?
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Posted by nwertalb 2 years ago Report
I actually haven't thought about it, but story wise I believe it could easily fill an entire episode with complete character arcs and a nice plot, or maybe a little cliffhanger at the end. you have anybody specific in mind?
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