Posted by TheKillianDragons 3 years ago Report

Love this!

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by wolfSnack 3 years ago Report

I know you said that you're not as satisfied with the scenario of this one, but I think it's brilliant. You got an actual out-loud laugh out of me when I figured out the dragon's plan XD

Posted by wolfSnack 3 years ago Report

And this goes without saying, but I would LOVE to see the finale~

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

I had a feeling. Definitely gonna do the lavishly, excessively voracious finale at some point. :3

Might be a while though, since it will probably be the largest of the series.

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thanks you, glad you liked the result!

Its tough I guess, to tell how well a 'twist' works from the writer's perspective, since you already know what's gonna happen. :D

Posted by wolfSnack 3 years ago Report

Well, you should know that it worked well enough to re-inspire me to work on Outfoxed XD

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

That's great to hear! I'd very much love to see the next instalment of haughty sorceresses getting into deep troubles! x3

Posted by psychoboy07 3 years ago Report

Always a pleasure to see stuff from that deliciously evil mind of yours, Prinny. :D

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thanks man! I do enjoy the silly naughtiness of wicked indulgences like this, I must admit. :D

Posted by CoolKaios 3 years ago Report

Love the Dragon Tease series~
For this chapter I kinda get what you mean. It still has your tradmark wit and amazing details.

I think that in the Dragon Tease series the Ladies are usually in a position of power, and then flaunt that power. The dragon is in this case the "underdog". So when they outwit their prey we see it as Kathartic.

Here I think a smige of that katharsis is lost because the "beef" between the dragon and Princess isn't as...personal/developed

(Im not trying to be a hater I genuinely love your work. As a creative though I hope this helps)

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thank you, and double-thanks for the candid feedback!

I think you've pointed out the crux of my dissatisfaction with the chapter better than I had been able to before: It works fine as a vore-centric story, and even still had the 'teasing' element, but was missing the power-dynamic reversal of previous chapters.

You're not being a 'hater' at all, I really appreciate thoughtful feedback, critical or not! I'll definitely keep this angle in mind when I do the finale. :3

Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report

I sometimes wonder how many girls would have actually survived these stories if they hadn't been bitches to the predator.

I just imagine the local dragon community getting together to set up this raid on the magic school all discussing and arguing about which share of the girls will be theirs to devour. Who prefers what type of girl vs who's been annoyingly teased or insulted by said type of girl, that sort of thing.

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Who knows! Dragons are known to devour maidens indiscriminately . . . but incessantly teasing them certainly does seem to be a powerful motivator that will get even the most well-protected girls eaten.

Ha! That's a marvelously hilarious scene I hadn't though of: a big dragon debate & discussion about who got to eat which annoying maidens. xD

Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report

Nice to see a bath-house scene. I must say that the dragoness ha been very clever indeed. Too bad for the princess that she hadn't been equally clever when posing so often for the predator.
There was a lot of teasing this time, but it seems most of it came from the dragonss herself, the princess stopped her own teasing quite abruptly at a certain point XD
I wonder what had happened if Esmeralda instead of being such a bratty girl, instead had used her time in the mirror to play chess against the reptile.
I wonder what might happen at the finale and what kind of women that will meet these hungry dragons!

By the way, the teleportation mishap reminds me of another story of yours where it turns out to be a highly unreliable mean of transportation for a bunch of magical school girls. I assume that taking the car could be safer.

As always, a fantastic story from you :D

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thanks! Nothing quite like a nice bath-house sequence! x3

Yeah, this one was a bit of a departure, in that the dragon got to do most of the teasing this time around.

Polite girls are known to have much lower instances of being devoured: not because dragons never eat polite maidens, but because the haughty, teasing ones naturally draw so much of the voracious attention to themselves. ;P

Yeah, teleportation mishaps do seem to be a common occurrence in schools for sexy magical girls, don't they? Someone should really look into that. x3

Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report

Oh, excellent work. A clever plan, and a wonderful result. I'll have to back-read the others when I have more time.

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thank you! Glad you liked it. I have done quite a few installments of this series, at this point. xD

Posted by French_snack 3 years ago Report

I particularly like this one, for some reason. Maybe it's because the tables are turned quite quickly and the dragon gets to do the teasing this time. (I like the luscious ladies teasing dragons, but it makes a fun change!) She knows just the right things to say!

The trick with the teleport ring having been moved was neat! Never under-estimate a dragon's capacity to outwit safety plans! And it gave us the delightfully wicked scene of the young ladies knowing where the teleport was going to send them, and not being able to do anything about it. I kind of like those "impending unstoppable sexy doom" situations. :D

And of *course* the Princess had to be kept for last! Dragons are civilised beings with a refined palate. :D Though with all this eating of princesses, they may become a depleted resource. Not that it should prevent dragons from indulging in the occasional silky, wiggly, irresistible princess. Where's the harm in eating just a few more?

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I must agree: 'impending unstoppable sexy doom' situations present a lot of appeal! :D

I'm also glad to hear you enjoyed the (slight) departure from the formula here, since as you correctly observed, the dragon got to do most of the teasing in this one. :3

Posted by longwayofftiff 3 years ago Report

If I recall, princesses named esmeralda don’t fare well in your slimy tales.

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Hey, I'm glad to see you're still around these parts! :D

But wait, has there already been a Princess Esmeralda featured in my previous stories? I need to keep better track of my naming-conventions! I must subconsciously think that name has a 'Princess-y' feel or something.

Posted by DragonLover66 3 years ago Report

I would also really love to see the finale.

Posted by PrinnyDood 3 years ago Report

Thanks!

The finale is currently in-progress, so you can look forward to that sometime in the next few months, hopefully.

Posted by anais2000 1 year ago Report

Well, Princess Esmeralda just learned something about equality... Imagine if she had to digest with some peasant girls, that would have been a small step towards democracy. :)

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

She sure did! :3

And while she might not have shared a stomach with the less noble-born ladies, they all received quite the same fate, so you could say they digested together in spirit, at least. xD