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A Fox And Her Girl [Chapter 5/7] By wolfSnack -- Report

Vicky, the foxiest lady in Graduation, got a summer internship working on the Happy Snacks Ranch!

It's important work, to help ship countless humans off as food for the hungry anthros in the world outside the gates of the ranch.

But when Vicky meets a human named Amaya, will their relationship be purely predator and prey, rancher and merchandise?

Or will a forbidden summer romance bloom? And can these two star-crossed pred-prey lovers find a happy ending?

Chapter 1: Veterinarian Visit https://aryion.com/g4/view/718278
Chapter 2: Farmhand https://aryion.com/g4/view/718482
Chapter 3: Grading https://aryion.com/g4/view/718797
Chapter 4: Home https://aryion.com/g4/view/719031
Chapter 5: Auction (You are here!)
Chapter 6: Finale https://aryion.com/g4/view/722123
Chapter 7: Epilogue https://aryion.com/g4/view/722368
Full Story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/722369








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This story started its life as a 20K word commission from  thelustyargonian, which he did a wonderful job with.


I've expanded it significantly, rewrote the prose into my style, and adjusted Vicky's character a bit. But the skeleton of the story's plot and dialog still is all his! :) Go check out his page for more awesome work.





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FrivolousFoxGirl

Posted by FrivolousFoxGirl 1 month ago Report

Then Vicky runs off with May and everybody's happy :P

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

Don't worry, this story has a happy ending!

FrivolousFoxGirl

Posted by FrivolousFoxGirl 1 month ago Report

^▽ ^

liwenyu

Posted by liwenyu 1 month ago Report

I can't wait to read the rest of the story

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

I'm glad this has gotten you invested in the story! The last two chapters might be a little delayed, though -- I REALLY want to make sure they live up to the emotional standard set by the ones so far...

liwenyu

Posted by liwenyu 1 month ago Report

I was drawn to the intense ambivalence of a woman who has been lovingly cared for for 25 years, just to pass perfectly through someone's digestive system, from a human being to a pile of shit, who might not even care.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

While you wait for the last two chapter of this story, have you read the other story I published set on this same ranch? It actually leans *harder* into that angle, whereas this story is more focused on the emotional bond between May and Vicky (with the star-crossed romance aspect in addition to the degradation).

https://aryion.com/g4/view/701380

liwenyu

Posted by liwenyu 1 month ago Report

Thank you so much. By the way, I think your POV view is the best I've ever seen

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

Ah, thank you! I really appreciate hearing that.

I'd love to hear your thoughts on the other story if you enjoy it, by the way! I do all my writing for free, so it's really gratifying to hear what people like about my work.

Updatedautopsy

Posted by Updatedautopsy 1 month ago Report

At this point I'm not reading for sex appeal. I just want these two to be happy

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

Honestly, this flatters me as much or more than "owo this is so hot" comments. I hope it's still sexy though XD

Updatedautopsy

Posted by Updatedautopsy 1 month ago Report

It definitely can be, but I'll admit that it ultimately suffered the same fate for me specifically that Ask The High Prime by Chalodillo did: I got so invested in the characters that I started feeling bad for getting horny over it. That's solely a personal problem, though!

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

Interestingly, I have the opposite problem. I'm demisexual enough that it's hard for me to get horny about something UNLESS I'm super emotionally invested in the characters XD

somedude601

Posted by somedude601 1 month ago Report

So um... When are the final two chapters going to come? Has there been some sort of problem?

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

The 6th chapter is nearly done! It should be posted by tomorrow night. The "issue" was that I wasn't happy with the quality of the emotional relationship in the first draft, so I started rewriting, and got carried away. So now chapter 6 is about 12000 words. But I put the final touches on it today! So just a quick look-over tomorrow then posted.

The last chapter isn't written, but it *should* be much much much shorter since it's really more of an epilogue "where are they now". The main plot ends in the chapter I'll post tomorrow.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 month ago Report

Chapter 6 is up now! Chapter 7 should be up tonight or tomorrow :)