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Big Vivvie [Commission/Gift] By marloweny -- Report

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Vivvie's income stream has been a little too good to be true, but it looks like even when things go wrong, they can still go so right.

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Written for  Ninth. This one got away from me, about twice the length I'd intended. I'm told that's a common problem with some writers, overshooting the mark. Count me among them.

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ninth

Posted by ninth 3 years ago Report

Awesome work, thank you!!

magicboy13

Posted by magicboy13 3 years ago Report

Hehe I love stories with Vivvie in it XD Noice.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 3 years ago Report

Ooh, this one’s a lot of fun! And yeah, getting carried away with our work seems to be a common writing hazard.

softvarelover

Posted by softvarelover 3 years ago Report

I figured that weird man was not as innocent or nice as he seemed.

It's a good thing that Vivvie knows Judy so well otherwise she would have been in a world of trouble.

MathiasGrim

Posted by MathiasGrim 3 years ago Report

absolutely lovely story with an very fun and wholesome ending <3

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 3 years ago Report

I was really hoping Vivvie would make it all the way inside, and then Judy could try out her abdominal clench again at the end. I suppose it will have to be something they'll work their way up to, once they have a friendlier shrink source.